ulm 09/11/18 20:41:45
Modified: index.xml
Log:
Change wording, so that most weblinks are at the beginning of a paragraph.
Revision Changes Path
1.17 xml/htdocs/proj/en/lisp/emacs/index.xml
file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/lisp/emacs/index.xml?rev=1.17&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/lisp/emacs/index.xml?rev=1.17&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/lisp/emacs/index.xml?r1=1.16&r2=1.17
Index: index.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/lisp/emacs/index.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.16
retrieving revision 1.17
diff -u -r1.16 -r1.17
--- index.xml 28 Nov 2008 12:07:13 -0000 1.16
+++ index.xml 18 Nov 2009 20:41:45 -0000 1.17
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
<project>
<name>Emacs</name>
<longname>Gentoo Emacs/Elisp Project</longname>
- <date>2007-10-30</date>
+ <date>2009-11-18</date>
<description>The Gentoo Emacs Project handles (X)Emacs and Elisp related packages in the Gentoo package tree.</description>
<longdescription><p>The Gentoo Emacs Project handles Emacs and Elisp
@@ -32,11 +32,11 @@
<section>
<body>
<p>
- Packages to be tested separately are held in
- an <uri link="http://overlays.gentoo.org/proj/emacs/">Overlay</uri>
- which provide a playground for both GNU Emacs and XEmacs.
- The Wiki there also collects some information, important to the
- Emacs developers, while only of temporary importance.
+ <uri link="http://overlays.gentoo.org/proj/emacs/">The Emacs Overlay</uri>
+ holds packages to be tested separately and provides a playground for
+ both GNU Emacs and XEmacs.
+ The Wiki there also collects some information, mainly intended for
+ the developers themselves, and some of it of temporary nature.
</p>
</body>
</section>
@@ -47,16 +47,14 @@
<section>
<body>
<p>
-If you are interested what is needed to know when maintaining Emacs
-and its packages in Gentoo, consult our
-<uri link="emacs.xml">developer information</uri>.
+<uri link="emacs.xml">Our developer information</uri> summarises what
+must be known when maintaining Emacs and its packages in Gentoo.
Even maintainers of packages with optional Emacs support
(by <c>USE=emacs</c>) can learn something about the internal goings.
</p>
<p>
-The devmanual has a
-<uri link="http://devmanual.gentoo.org/appendices/editor-configuration/emacs/index.html">section</uri>
-with some hints how you can configure your Emacs as Gentoo developer.
+<uri link="http://devmanual.gentoo.org/appendices/editor-configuration/emacs/index.html">A devmanual section</uri>
+contains hints how you can configure your Emacs as Gentoo developer.
</p>
<p>
<uri link="xft.xml">Using Emacs XFT support</uri>
@@ -71,7 +69,7 @@
<section>
<body>
<p>
-Documentation on <uri link="xemacs.xml">XEmacs on Gentoo</uri> is available. It contains information for users to explain how Gentoo deals with some aspects of XEmacs, and information and support scripts for Gentoo developers.
+<uri link="xemacs.xml">Documentation on XEmacs on Gentoo</uri> is available. It contains information for users to explain how Gentoo deals with some aspects of XEmacs, and information and support scripts for Gentoo developers.
</p>
</body>
</section>
@@ -82,9 +80,8 @@
<section>
<body>
<p>
-In addition to GNU Emacs and XEmacs, there are
-<uri link="editors.xml">other Emacs-like editors</uri>
-available in Gentoo.
+<uri link="editors.xml">Other Emacs-like editors</uri> are also
+available in Gentoo, in addition to GNU Emacs and XEmacs.
</p>
</body>
</section>
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