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Below you will find the email that Swift had sent me regarding fixing up |
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the desktop-howto, it contains his suggestions. Please add your own |
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suggestions, and work will be underway on fixing this up. I will be |
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coordinating with the docs team as well as our team, and will take care |
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of submissions, bugs, etc. |
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The howto can be found at: http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/desktop.xml |
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Thanks, |
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Gerald J. Normandin Jr. |
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> Hi, |
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> Any change you are interested in performing an audit on the desktop |
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> configuraion guide? I'm not really happy with how it is currently. |
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Several |
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> lines say "I this and I that", making the guide less readable for |
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users (it's |
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> more like a listing on what the author did). |
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> Also, several lines aren't very reader friendly, such as "Author |
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recommends" |
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> instead of "The author recommends". |
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> As you're related with desktop-research, I hope you can do this. |
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> Wkr, |
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> Sven Vermeulen |
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