[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en: initramfs-guide.xml

[Sven Vermeulen (swift)]

swift       12/04/07 07:29:57

  Modified:             initramfs-guide.xml
  Log:
  English language improvements, no content. Thanks to chiguire for noticing and recommending the changes

Revision  Changes    Path
1.2                  xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml?rev=1.2&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml?r1=1.1&r2=1.2

Index: initramfs-guide.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- initramfs-guide.xml	5 Apr 2012 19:40:55 -0000	1.1
+++ initramfs-guide.xml	7 Apr 2012 07:29:57 -0000	1.2
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml,v 1.1 2012/04/05 19:40:55 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/initramfs-guide.xml,v 1.2 2012/04/07 07:29:57 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -51,10 +51,10 @@
 <p>
 Once the Linux kernel has control over the system (which it gets after being
 loaded by the boot loader), it prepares its memory structures and drivers as
-good as it can. It then hands over control to an application (usually
+well as it can. It then hands over control to an application (usually
 <c>init</c>) whose task it is to further prepare the system and make sure that,
 at the end of the boot process, all necessary services are running and the user
-is able to log on. The <c>init</c> application does that by launching, amongst
+is able to log on. The <c>init</c> application does that by launching, among
 other services, the <c>udev</c> daemon who will further load up and prepare the
 system based on the detected devices. When <c>udev</c> is launched, all
 remaining file systems that have not been mounted are mounted, and the remainder
@@ -120,7 +120,7 @@
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-To resolve these (for some perhaps hardly called) issues, the initramfs was
+To resolve these (for some perhaps hardly called) problems, the initramfs was
 created.
 </p>