[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: vpnc-howto.xml metadoc.xml

[Josh Saddler]

nightmorph    07/06/27 20:18:57

  Modified:             vpnc-howto.xml metadoc.xml
  Log:
  vpnc final cleanups and moving to official 1.0 status, bug 97760 and bug 30966

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1.2                  xml/htdocs/doc/en/vpnc-howto.xml

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diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vpnc-howto.xml?r1=1.1&r2=1.2

Index: vpnc-howto.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vpnc-howto.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.1
retrieving revision 1.2
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
--- vpnc-howto.xml	23 May 2007 08:50:13 -0000	1.1
+++ vpnc-howto.xml	27 Jun 2007 20:18:57 -0000	1.2
@@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vpnc-howto.xml,v 1.1 2007/05/23 08:50:13 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vpnc-howto.xml,v 1.2 2007/06/27 20:18:57 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
-<guide link="/doc/en/vpnc-howto.xml" disclaimer="draft">
+<guide link="/doc/en/vpnc-howto.xml">
 
 <title>Gentoo vpnc HOWTO</title>
 
@@ -25,8 +25,8 @@
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
-<version>0.14</version>
-<date>2007-05-23</date>
+<version>1.0</version>
+<date>2007-06-27</date>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>Introduction</title>
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 If you're reading this, then you likely need to connect to your office network
 from home or during travel. Many companies utilize Cisco 3000 VPN concentrators
 for their VPN needs, and I am willing to bet that most Linux newbies think that
-they are forced to use Windows to connect to them. Well this document informs
+they are forced to use Windows to connect to them. Well, this document informs
 you that connecting to a Cisco VPN is very possible and will hopefully enable
 you to setup a working tunnel using your Gentoo workstation or laptop.
 </p>
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
   <li>You have Gentoo installed</li>
   <li>You have Internet access</li>
   <li>You want to connect to a Cisco 3000 VPN concentrator</li>
-  <li>You know how to configure, build and install a new kernel</li>
+  <li>You know how to configure, build, and install a new kernel</li>
 </ul>
 
 </body>
@@ -113,9 +113,9 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-From the vpnc ebuild 0.4.0-r1 on, it is tested wether TUN/TAP support is
-enabled. If not, enable it in your kernel config either as module or built-in,
-recompile and reboot.
+Starting with version 0.4.0-r1, the <c>vpnc</c> ebuild will test whether TUN/TAP
+support is enabled. If not, enable it in your kernel config either as module or
+built-in, recompile and reboot.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -165,7 +165,6 @@
 # <i>lsmod</i>
 Module                  Size  Used by
 tun                     7296  0
-nvidia               4050204  12
 </pre>
 
 <p>
@@ -277,7 +276,7 @@
 <path>/etc/vpnc/default.conf</path> for its connection settings. If it doesn't
 find that file, then it looks for <path>/etc/vpnc.conf</path>. This setup will
 only address a single profile example and will use the configuration file
-location <path>/etc/vpnc.conf</path>. Make sure you do not have a
+location <path>/etc/vpnc.conf</path>. Make sure you do <e>not</e> have a
 <path>/etc/vpnc/default.conf</path> file.
 </p>
 
@@ -294,11 +293,11 @@
 appropriate values for your setup. The gateway option
 <c>vpngateway.domain.org</c> can be a fully qualified domain name or an IP
 address. The ID and secret options should be given to you by a network
-administrator. If they are hesitant about giving you this info and you
-currently have a working setup on a Windows box which utilizes the official
-Cisco VPN client, then all you have to do is export your profile. The user name
-and password options are for your normal network sign-on, such as a Windows NT
-domain account.
+administrator. If you cannot obtain this information but you currently have a
+working setup on a Windows box which utilizes the official Cisco VPN client,
+then all you have to do is export your profile. The user name and password
+options are for your normal network sign-on, such as a Windows NT domain
+account.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -463,7 +462,7 @@
   <li>
     A routing setup that will only send traffic destined for the VPN down the
     virtual tunnel. This way, you can browse the Internet while connected to
-    the VPN, without your personal web/p2p etc ... traffic going across the
+    the VPN, without your personal web/p2p etc. traffic going across the
     tunnel.
   </li>
   <li>
@@ -592,7 +591,7 @@
 order to fix this situation you need to know what networks are available to you
 on your VPN. The easiest way to find out the needed information is to ask a
 network administrator, but sometimes they are reluctant to answer such
-questions. If your local network admin wont provide the needed information,
+questions. If your local network admin won't provide the needed information,
 some trial and error experiments will be required.
 </p>
 
@@ -766,7 +765,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-If you need to connect to a windows machine which doesn't have a DNS entry, and
+If you need to connect to a Windows machine which doesn't have a DNS entry, and
 you know the address of an available WINS server, you can use a tool called
 <c>nmblookup</c> to query the WINS server for the host name of the machine you
 want to connect to. Unfortunately, you have to install samba to get it, but if



1.187                xml/htdocs/doc/en/metadoc.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/metadoc.xml?rev=1.187&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/metadoc.xml?rev=1.187&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/metadoc.xml?r1=1.186&r2=1.187

Index: metadoc.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/metadoc.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.186
retrieving revision 1.187
diff -u -r1.186 -r1.187
--- metadoc.xml	27 Jun 2007 13:31:32 -0000	1.186
+++ metadoc.xml	27 Jun 2007 20:18:57 -0000	1.187
@@ -1,9 +1,9 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/metadoc.xml,v 1.186 2007/06/27 13:31:32 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/metadoc.xml,v 1.187 2007/06/27 20:18:57 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE metadoc SYSTEM "/dtd/metadoc.dtd">
 
 <metadoc lang="en">
-<version>1.109</version>
+<version>1.110</version>
   <members>
     <lead>neysx</lead>
     <member>cam</member>
@@ -397,6 +397,7 @@
     <file id="change-chost">/doc/en/change-chost.xml</file>
     <file id="xfce-config">/doc/en/xfce-config.xml</file>
     <file id="gcc-optimization">/doc/en/gcc-optimization.xml</file>
+    <file id="vpnc-howto">/doc/en/vpnc-howto.xml</file>
     <file id="qa-autofailure">/proj/en/qa/autofailure.xml</file>
     <file id="qa-automagic">/proj/en/qa/automagic.xml</file>
     <file id="qa-backtraces">/proj/en/qa/backtraces.xml</file>
@@ -1264,6 +1265,10 @@
       <memberof>sysadmin_specific</memberof>
       <fileid>jffnms</fileid>
     </doc>
+    <doc id="vpnc-howto">
+      <memberof>sysadmin_specific</memberof>
+      <fileid>vpnc-howto</fileid>
+    </doc>
     <doc id="conky">
       <memberof>desktop_config</memberof>
       <fileid>conky</fileid>



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