[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: xorg-config.xml

[Josh Saddler]

nightmorph    07/10/18 18:16:02

  Modified:             xorg-config.xml
  Log:
  buncha small coding style fixes and punctuation, spelling, and grammar fixes. no content change.

Revision  Changes    Path
1.24                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/xorg-config.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/xorg-config.xml?rev=1.24&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/xorg-config.xml?rev=1.24&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/xorg-config.xml?r1=1.23&r2=1.24

Index: xorg-config.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/xorg-config.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.23
retrieving revision 1.24
diff -u -r1.23 -r1.24
--- xorg-config.xml	21 Jun 2007 02:37:46 -0000	1.23
+++ xorg-config.xml	18 Oct 2007 18:16:02 -0000	1.24
@@ -1,11 +1,8 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
-
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/xorg-config.xml,v 1.23 2007/06/21 02:37:46 nightmorph Exp $ -->
-
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/xorg-config.xml,v 1.24 2007/10/18 18:16:02 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/xorg-config.xml">
-
 <title>The X Server Configuration HOWTO</title>
 
 <author title="Author">
@@ -235,7 +232,7 @@
 probing your hardware. If it tells you it failed at some point, you're forced to
 manually write an <path>xorg.conf</path> file. Assuming that it didn't fail, it
 will have told you that it has written <path>/root/xorg.conf.new</path> ready
-for you to test. So let's test :)
+for you to test. So let's test. :)
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Testing the xorg.conf.new file">
@@ -288,7 +285,7 @@
 <p>
 Let us copy over the <path>xorg.conf.new</path> to
 <path>/etc/X11/xorg.conf</path> now, so we won't have to continuously run
-<c>X -config</c> -- typing just <c>X</c> or <c>startx</c> is far more easy :)
+<c>X -config</c> -- typing just <c>X</c> or <c>startx</c> is easier. :)
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Copying over xorg.conf">
@@ -319,7 +316,7 @@
     accordingly (you can set the value of XSESSION in <path>/etc/rc.conf</path>
     to make it a default for all the users on the system).
   </li>
-<li>
+  <li>
     If all of the above fail, it will fall back to a simple window manager,
     usually <c>twm</c>.
   </li>
@@ -334,7 +331,7 @@
 <c>twm</c>. To finish the twm session, type in <c>exit</c> or Ctrl-D in the
 upcoming xterms. You can also kill the X session using the Ctrl-Alt-Backspace
 combination. This will however make X exit disgracefully -- something that you
-might not always want. It doesn't hurt though :)
+might not always want. It doesn't hurt though. :)
 </p>
 
 </body>
@@ -395,7 +392,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Run X (<c>startx</c>) to discover it uses the resolution you want :)
+Run X (<c>startx</c>) to discover it uses the resolution you want. :)
 </p>
 
 </body>
@@ -471,7 +468,7 @@
 Run <c>startx</c> and be happy about the result :) Congratulations, you now
 (hopefully) have a working Xorg on your system. The next step is to remove this
 ugly lightweight window manager and use a high-feature one (or even a desktop
-environment) such as KDE or GNOME, but that's not part of this guide :)
+environment) such as KDE or GNOME, but that's not part of this guide. :)
 </p>
 
 </body>
@@ -500,7 +497,7 @@
 list few of them here, be sure to <uri link="http://www.google.com">Google</uri>
 for more :) As <path>xorg.conf</path> and <path>XF86Config</path> (the
 configuration file for the XFree86 project) use the
-same syntaxis for most configuration options and more information about
+same syntax for most configuration options and more information about
 <path>XF86Config</path> is available, we'll list those resources as well.
 </p>
 



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