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Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-install-alpha-medium.xml |
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hb-install-amd64-medium.xml |
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hb-install-hppa-medium.xml |
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hb-install-ppc-medium.xml |
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hb-install-ppc64-medium.xml |
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hb-install-sparc-medium.xml |
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hb-install-x86-medium.xml |
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#112511 Chapter 2, minor grammatical error |
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file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml?rev=1.38&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo |
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plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml?rev=1.38&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-alpha-medium.xml.diff?r1=1.37&r2=1.38&cvsroot=gentoo |
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Index: hb-install-alpha-medium.xml |
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-You might find a so-called Package CD on one of our mirrors. This CD is no |
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+You might find a Package CD on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an |
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Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a |
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-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set) |
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-that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as |
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-OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo |
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-installation. |
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+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP |
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+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications |
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+(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless |
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+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-amd64-medium.xml.diff?r1=1.39&r2=1.40&cvsroot=gentoo |
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-set) that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications |
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-(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless |
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+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an |
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+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a |
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+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP |
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+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications |
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Gentoo installation. |
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-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images |
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-which you can write on a CD-R. |
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+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you |
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plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml?rev=1.37&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-hppa-medium.xml.diff?r1=1.36&r2=1.37&cvsroot=gentoo |
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-that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as |
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-OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo |
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+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an |
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+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a |
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+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP |
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+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such |
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-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images |
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+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-medium.xml.diff?r1=1.49&r2=1.50&cvsroot=gentoo |
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-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP |
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-set) that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications |
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-(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless |
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+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an |
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+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a |
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+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP |
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+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such |
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-which you can write on a CD-R. |
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+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you |
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which you can write on a CD-R. |
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-no Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a |
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-networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (the so-called GRP set) |
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-that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as |
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-OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo |
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-installation. |
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+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an |
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+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a |
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+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP |
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+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications |
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+(such as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless |
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+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you |
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+can write on a CD-R. |
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-that allows you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such as |
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-OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo |
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+You might find a <e>Package CD</e> on one of our mirrors. This CD is not an |
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+Installation CD but an additional resource that can be exploited during a |
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+networkless installation. It contains prebuilt packages (also known as the GRP |
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+set) that allow you to easily and quickly install additional applications (such |
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+as OpenOffice.org, KDE, GNOME, ...) immediately after the networkless Gentoo |
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installation. |
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-Inside that directory you'll find so-called ISO-files. Those are full CD images |
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-which you can write on a CD-R. |
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+Inside that directory you'll find ISO-files. Those are full CD images which you |
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+can write on a CD-R. |
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