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neysx 05/11/07 11:47:06 |
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Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en rsync.xml |
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Log: |
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#111691 English improvements |
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Revision Changes Path |
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1.41 +11 -11 xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml |
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file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml?rev=1.41&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo |
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plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml?rev=1.41&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml.diff?r1=1.40&r2=1.41&cvsroot=gentoo |
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Index: rsync.xml |
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml,v |
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retrieving revision 1.40 |
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retrieving revision 1.41 |
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diff -u -r1.40 -r1.41 |
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--- rsync.xml 24 Apr 2005 09:21:50 -0000 1.40 |
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+++ rsync.xml 7 Nov 2005 11:47:06 -0000 1.41 |
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<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?> |
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-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml,v 1.40 2005/04/24 09:21:50 swift Exp $ --> |
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+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/rsync.xml,v 1.41 2005/11/07 11:47:06 neysx Exp $ --> |
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<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> |
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<guide link="/doc/en/rsync.xml"> |
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@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ |
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them. Otherwise, we can provide these services and you can simply ship the |
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machine to our colocation facility. Average bandwidth consumption for a main |
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rotation mirror is currently ~7Mbps (around 2 TB per month). As the number of |
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-main rotation mirrors increase, this number should decrease accordingly. |
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+main rotation mirrors increases, this number should decrease accordingly. |
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</p> |
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<p> |
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<p> |
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A: Because our resources are limited, we need to ensure we allocate them in |
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-such a way to provide the maximum amount of benefit to our users. As such, we |
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+such a way as to provide the maximum amount of benefit to our users. As such, we |
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limit connections to our master rsync and distfile mirrors to public mirrors |
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only. Users are welcome to use our regular mirror system to establish a private |
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rsync mirror, though they are asked to follow certain basic |
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<p> |
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A: Yes it is important. You do not need to perform the syncs at exactly :00 and :30 |
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-but the syncs should take place between the following two windows: |
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+but the syncs should take place in each of the following two windows: |
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</p> |
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<ol> |
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- <li>:00 and :10</li> |
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- <li>:30 and :40</li> |
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+ <li>:00 to :10</li> |
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+ <li>:30 to :40</li> |
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</ol> |
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<p> |
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</body> |
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</section> |
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<section> |
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-<title>Q: I'm seeing a lot of old and probably dead rsync processes, how can I get rid of that?</title> |
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+<title>Q: I'm seeing a lot of old and probably dead rsync processes, how can I get rid of them?</title> |
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<body> |
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<p> |
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</p> |
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<p> |
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-This command will help you killing old rsync processes that sometimes lies |
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+This command will help you to kill old rsync processes that sometimes lie |
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around due to connection problems. It's important to kill those because they |
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count as valid connections for the 'max connections' option. You may run this |
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command via crontab every hour, it will search and kill rsync processes older |
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rsync mirror and set it up. You should choose a computer that can handle the |
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CPU and disk load that an rsync operation require. Your local mirror also needs |
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to be available whenever any of your other computers syncs its portage tree. |
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-Besides, it should have a static IP address or a name that always resolve to |
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+Besides, it should have a static IP address or a name that always resolves to |
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your server. Configuring a DHCP and/or a DNS server is beyond the scope of |
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this guide. |
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</p> |
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<note> |
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Please note that most public mirror administrators consider syncing more than |
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-once or twice a day as an abuse. |
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+once or twice a day an abuse. |
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</note> |
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</body> |
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</pre> |
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<p> |
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-You can check that your computer has been properly set up and sync against your |
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+You can check that your computer has been properly set up by syncing against your |
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own local mirror for the first time: |
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</p> |
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