[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: altinstall.xml

[Xavier Neys]

neysx       06/09/17 09:41:30

  Modified:             altinstall.xml
  Log:
  #147869 Typo fixes, no content change

Revision  Changes    Path
1.67                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml

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Index: altinstall.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.66
retrieving revision 1.67
diff -u -r1.66 -r1.67
--- altinstall.xml	22 Jul 2006 10:10:41 -0000	1.66
+++ altinstall.xml	17 Sep 2006 09:41:30 -0000	1.67
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v 1.66 2006/07/22 10:10:41 rane Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v 1.67 2006/09/17 09:41:30 neysx Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/altinstall.xml">
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
 <uri>http://distro.ibiblio.org/pub/linux/distributions/gentoo/snapshots/</uri>
 (or your favorite <uri
 link="http://www.gentoo.org/main/en/mirrors.xml">mirror</uri>). Either place
-this tarball on an existing partition on the computer your are installing to,
+this tarball on an existing partition on the computer you are installing to,
 or burn it to a CD.
 </p>
 
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Setup NFS: NFS is quite easy to configure. The only thing you have to do is to
-add a line on the <path>/etc/exports</path> config file :
+add a line on the <path>/etc/exports</path> config file:
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="/etc/exports">
@@ -473,7 +473,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Update your hosts:  One important thing to do now is to modify your
+Update your hosts: One important thing to do now is to modify your
 <path>/etc/hosts</path> file to fit your needs.
 </p>
 
@@ -675,7 +675,7 @@
 As we can see, the partition mounted as <path>/</path> named
 <path>/dev/hdb2</path> has 2.4 gigabytes free. In my case, I think I will
 resize it as to leave 400Megs free of space, therefore allocating 2 gigabytes
-for Gentoo. Not bad, I could have quite some stuff installed. However, think
+for Gentoo. Not bad, I could have quite some stuff installed. However, I think
 that even one gigabyte is enough for most users. So let's partition this thing!
 </p>
 
@@ -694,7 +694,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <note>
-There are other tools for doing resize of partitions as well, but author is
+There are other tools for doing resize of partitions as well, but the author is
 unsure/uninterested whether PartitionMagic(tm) or other software of the kind do
 the job. It's the reader's job to check them out 
 </note>
@@ -727,8 +727,8 @@
 <note>
 Note again that Linux is synonym of "There's one more way to do it". Your
 objective is to run parted on an unmounted partition so it can do its work. You
-might use some other boot/root diskset other than mininux. You might not even
-need to do this step at all, that is only umount the filesystem you want to
+might use some boot/root diskset other than mininux. You might not even
+need to do this step at all, ie. you might only have umount the filesystem you want to
 repartition in your Linux session and run parted on it. 
 </note>
 
@@ -762,7 +762,7 @@
 we have created above and type <c>mount /dev/fd0 /floppy</c> to have parted under
 <path>/floppy</path>.  There you go. Run parted and you will be able to resize your
 partition. Once this lenghty process done, we are ready to have the real fun,
-by installing Gentoo. Reboot back into your old Linux system for now. Drive you
+by installing Gentoo. Reboot back into your old Linux system for now. The drive you
 wish to operate on is the drive containing the partition we want to resize. For
 example, if we want to resize /dev/hda3, the drive is /dev/hda
 </p>
@@ -791,7 +791,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <impo>
-Be patient! The computer is working! Just look at the hardware LED on your case
+Be patient! The computer is working! Just look at the harddrive LED on your case
 to see that it is really working. This should take between 2 and 30 minutes.
 </impo>
 



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