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From: David Abbott <dabbott@g.o>
To: gentoo-doc@l.g.o
Subject: Re: [gentoo-doc] RFC: PostgreSQL Documentation
Date: Sat, 23 Jul 2011 19:56:36
Message-Id: CACs9S6ZmUNQdJiTqjhturU=e4UD0XZA2OSKXJh505yUaHPamSA@mail.gmail.com
In Reply to: Re: [gentoo-doc] RFC: PostgreSQL Documentation by David Abbott
On Sat, Jul 23, 2011 at 3:44 PM, David Abbott <dabbott@g.o> wrote:
> On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 8:57 AM, Aaron W. Swenson <titanofold@g.o> wrote: >> -----BEGIN PGP SIGNED MESSAGE----- >> Hash: SHA256 >> >> I think the documentation I've written[1] for PostgreSQL is pretty well >> set to be published. I'm submitting it here for a final review. >> > Also This section; > <p> > You can change your locale and encoding selections at database creation time > (<uri > link="http://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/static/sql-createdatabase.html"><c>CREATE > DATABASE</c></uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after you have > created it, you must drop the database and start over again. > </p> > The c tags can't be inside the uri tag; > > postgresql.xml:410: element uri: validity error : Element c is not > declared in uri list of possible children > DATABASE</c></uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after you have > > I would change it so it reads a little clearer to somethin like; > > <p> > You can change your locale and encoding selections at database <uri >  link="http://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/static/sql-createdatabase.html">creation >  time.</uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after you have > created it, you must drop the database and start over again. > </p>
I forgot to remove the ). after </uri> I would also remove this section; </body> </section> <section> <title>Initialize</title> <body> <p> To finish the installation: </p> I attached a diff from yours to the changes I made. Regards, David -- David Abbott (dabbott) Gentoo http://dev.gentoo.org/~dabbott/

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Re: [gentoo-doc] RFC: PostgreSQL Documentation "Aaron W. Swenson" <titanofold@g.o>