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On Sat, Jul 23, 2011 at 3:44 PM, David Abbott <dabbott@g.o> wrote: |
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> On Fri, Jul 22, 2011 at 8:57 AM, Aaron W. Swenson <titanofold@g.o> wrote: |
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>> I think the documentation I've written[1] for PostgreSQL is pretty well |
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>> set to be published. I'm submitting it here for a final review. |
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> Also This section; |
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> <p> |
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> You can change your locale and encoding selections at database creation time |
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> (<uri |
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> link="http://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/static/sql-createdatabase.html"><c>CREATE |
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> DATABASE</c></uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after you have |
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> created it, you must drop the database and start over again. |
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> </p> |
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> The c tags can't be inside the uri tag; |
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> |
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> postgresql.xml:410: element uri: validity error : Element c is not |
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> declared in uri list of possible children |
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> DATABASE</c></uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after you have |
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> I would change it so it reads a little clearer to somethin like; |
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> |
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> <p> |
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> You can change your locale and encoding selections at database <uri |
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> link="http://www.postgresql.org/docs/current/static/sql-createdatabase.html">creation |
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> time.</uri>). In order to change the locale for a database after you have |
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> created it, you must drop the database and start over again. |
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> </p> |
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I forgot to remove the ). after </uri> |
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I would also remove this section; |
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</body> |
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</section> |
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<section> |
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<title>Initialize</title> |
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<body> |
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<p> |
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To finish the installation: |
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</p> |
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I attached a diff from yours to the changes I made. |
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Regards, |
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David |
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David Abbott (dabbott) |
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http://dev.gentoo.org/~dabbott/ |
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