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From: Sebastian Pipping <sping@g.o>
To: gentoo-doc@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-doc] [PATCH] Improvements to doc/en/genkernel.xml
Date: Sun, 16 Jan 2011 16:23:18
Message-Id: 4D331B46.7010404@gentoo.org
Change log (top to bottom in patch):
- Remove obsolete disclaimer
- Use simpler English (no "akin", no "privy")
- Remove misleading note on module parameters
- Remove notes on Gentoo Reference Platform
- Mention --symlink
- Mention incompleteness of options/flags, point to better sources
- Indicate incompleteness by repeated addition of "..."
- Fix misleading highlighting of --no-ramdisk-modules
- Mention --disklabel, --iscsi, --multipath
- Remove outdated notes on root=/dev/ram0 and init=/linuxrc
- Migrate from hda to sda

All of this applies to genkernel stable.

Thanks for consideration.

Best,



Sebastian

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