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Greetings esteemed gentoo-docs folks & assorted developers. Before |
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committing a patch & bug to Bugzilla, I was hoping that I could |
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receive a bit of feedback on my proposed changes to the SELinux |
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index.html page, http://www.gentoo.org/proj/en/hardened/selinux/ |
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The index.html.orig and index.html.patch are both included. There were |
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a few corrections needed, like capitalization and punctuation, but |
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there were also several changes I made in an effort to tighten up the |
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document and greatly improve its readability. |
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Please let me know if these changes are in fact user-friendly and/or |
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necessary. I'm trying to avoid the dreaded "RESOLVED/WON'T FIX" stamp |
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on the bug. ;) |
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Thanks, |
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Jack |
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<em>- thought - emotion - imagery -</em> |
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http://www.freewebs.com/nightmorph/ |