Sorry to start from scratch again... but:

Section 3 (Using CVS)
Although this section itself is ok, it some sort of comes out of the blue.
 Why the hell whould I want to use CVS?  What is CVS anyway?  I feel it
needs a little introduction like:

>>> begin
It is possible to use a CVS version of the portage tree.  This is not
recommended for average users, and only required for developers.
<<< end
Where the hell is this necessary for anyway?  A developer will know (s)he
needs CVS in order to do something, right?  I feel developer information
is somehow misplaced on a end-user document.  Perhaps we better move it
into a page on the wiki.

By the way, I remember that I first checked out the tree on my
/Volumes/Scratch partition which is HFS+.  I never experienced any problem
with it...



On Fri, August 12, 2005 04:42, Hasan Khalil wrote:
>
> On Aug 9, 2005, at 22:10, Hasan Khalil wrote:
>
>> To all interested:
>>
>> I've gone through and reworked[1] significant portions of the
>> 'Gentoo For Mac OS X Installation and Usage Guide' -- for those not
>> familiar, that's our official guide[2] available in the gentoo.org
>> docs section. I have also made a patch[3] as well as the full source
>> [4] of the updated XML available.
>
> ...
>
>> [1] http://dev.gentoo.org/~gongloo/macos/doc
>> [2] http://www.gentoo.org/doc/en/macos-guide.xml
>> [3] http://dev.gentoo.org/~gongloo/macos/doc/macos-guide.xml.diff
>> [4] http://dev.gentoo.org/~gongloo/macos/doc/macos-guide.xml
>
> Thanks for all your feedback, corrections, and additions, everybody.
> All of the discussed changes should be reflected in the latest HTML/
> XML/diff by now (same locations as above). Please let me know if I've
> missed something, or if anyone has anything extra to add before we
> send in this revision (version 1.7) to the official Gentoo
> documentation team.
>
> Thanks again for all your help; couldn't do it without you.
>
> --
>
> Hasan Khalil
> eBuild and Porting Co-Lead
> Gentoo for Mac OS X
>
>


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