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On Sun, 12 Apr 2009 15:31:26 +0200 |
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Christian Faulhammer <fauli@g.o> wrote: |
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> Ciaran McCreesh <ciaran.mccreesh@××××××××××.com>: |
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> > I think I've removed all the TODO items and included everything |
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> > that's on the "possible" list for EAPI 3 now. I'd appreciate it if |
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> > people could give this a review before I send it to -dev@ and the |
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> > Council. |
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> As far as I can see the commits are ok, although I wonder if "a use |
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> dependency" is correct. I learned at school that "an" is used in |
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> front of vowels, though I may have missed the exceptions because of |
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> sleeping in class. |
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It's how you pronounce it, not how you spell it. A yoose dependency, an |
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x-ray. |
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> The explanations of the slot operators are a bit hard to read, maybe |
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> rephrasing (and splitting in more sentences) is the way to go here. |
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I suspect those're hard to read because people are expecting a |
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user-centric description of what they're for, rather than a package |
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manager centric description of how they behave. |
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> Also I wonder if doexample and doinclude are good additions, but I |
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> have no strong opinion about it. |
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Yeah, dunno if they'll make the final cut. |
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> Another thing: You should use \featurelabel not in a separate line |
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> but at the beginning of the fist line or at the end of the paragraph |
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> you want to mark, currently the margin marks aren't perfect. |
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Okay. |
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> > 725d5ae..1c311de is formatting for the new margin labels thing. |
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> > This'll hopefully get modified before we go live with it. |
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> You want the page layout patches beforehand? |
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I'd prefer to get decent page layout things in earlier rather than |
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later if possible please. |
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Ciaran McCreesh |