Hi,

Ciaran McCreesh <ciaran.mccreesh@...>:
> > 0004: The complete new EAPI 3 aware cheat sheet.
> 
> Some comments on this one:
> 
> Is the subdirectory necessary? Seems a bit weird to have it for one
> thing.

 In the long term we should move the chapter files into a "chapters"
subdirectory.  I can create a patch for that.

> Can we make each item have the PMS label name for full details at the
> end of its paragraph? And add a new 'Other changes' item with the
> label names of other changes not described?

 I wanted to add it when all labels for all EAPIs are ready.
 
> The 'pkg_pretend' description should probably tell developers to
> duplicate any checks done in pkg_setup.
> I've stopped using 'uninstalled' for pkg_info in favour of
> 'non-installed'. Think it's less confusing.
> 'must be defined' is a bit dodgy for RDEPEND. 'Unset RDEPEND not set
> to DEPEND' possibly.
> The slot operator deps should include the : before the symbol.
> Use dep defaults are in (+) and (-), not + or - on their own.
> I'd mention the switch for docompress.
> doins symlinks should say that it only works for -r. I probably need
> to update the summaries for that too.

 Will work on those items.
 
> And some wording tinkering. Can cut the Abstract down to something
> like:

 The long abstract was needed to fill the first page, it looked so
empty in the first version.  So I will cut it down.

V-Li

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