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nichoj 08/03/01 22:47:44 |
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Modified: announcement-guide.xml |
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Log: |
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Added link to references. |
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Revision Changes Path |
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1.4 xml/htdocs/proj/en/pr/docs/announcement-guide.xml |
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file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/pr/docs/announcement-guide.xml?rev=1.4&view=markup |
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plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/pr/docs/announcement-guide.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/plain |
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diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/pr/docs/announcement-guide.xml?r1=1.3&r2=1.4 |
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Index: announcement-guide.xml |
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/pr/docs/announcement-guide.xml,v |
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retrieving revision 1.3 |
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retrieving revision 1.4 |
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diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4 |
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--- announcement-guide.xml 22 Feb 2008 17:10:07 -0000 1.3 |
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+++ announcement-guide.xml 1 Mar 2008 22:47:44 -0000 1.4 |
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<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?> |
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-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/pr/docs/announcement-guide.xml,v 1.3 2008/02/22 17:10:07 neysx Exp $ --> |
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+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/proj/en/pr/docs/announcement-guide.xml,v 1.4 2008/03/01 22:47:44 nichoj Exp $ --> |
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<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> |
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<abstract> |
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This guide documents the proccess of posting announcements to the front page. It also provides guidelines, suggestions, tips, and references for writing effective announcements. |
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</abstract> |
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- <version>0.1</version> |
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- <date>2008-02-22</date> |
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+ <version>0.2</version> |
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+ <date>2008-03-01</date> |
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<chapter> |
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<title>Creating announcements</title> |
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Avoid overly long paragraphs. |
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</li> |
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<li> |
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+ Prefer simple language and sentence structure. |
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+ </li> |
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+ <li> |
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Use bullet points and tables when appropriate. It is a lot easier to read a list of bullet point list, than an equivalent sentence. |
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</li> |
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<li> |
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<li><uri link="http://www.useit.com/alertbox/9710a.html">How Users Read on the Web</uri></li> |
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</ul> |
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</li> |
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+ <li> |
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+ <uri link="http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/News_writing">News Writing, according to Wikipedia</uri> |
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+ </li> |
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</ul> |
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</body> |
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</section> |
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