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commit: 9650b512e23c167d38ad20097e7aef624d6c229d |
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Author: Ulrich Müller <ulm <AT> gentoo <DOT> org> |
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AuthorDate: Tue Aug 28 18:51:17 2018 +0000 |
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Commit: Ulrich Müller <ulm <AT> gentoo <DOT> org> |
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CommitDate: Fri Aug 31 14:40:49 2018 +0000 |
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URL: https://gitweb.gentoo.org/data/glep.git/commit/?id=9650b512 |
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glep-0076: Style. |
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Don't use "separate" three times in one sentence. |
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glep-0076.rst | 7 +++---- |
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1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-) |
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diff --git a/glep-0076.rst b/glep-0076.rst |
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index f1bedc9..3f50895 100644 |
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--- a/glep-0076.rst |
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+++ b/glep-0076.rst |
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@@ -304,10 +304,9 @@ certified by the person providing the contribution. |
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The term "free software" is used for consistency with the language |
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of the Gentoo Social Contract [#SOCIAL-CONTRACT]_. |
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-The remaining changes were merely editorial. It has been established |
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-that the last point is really separate from the other points, so it is |
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-more appropriate to separate it from the enumeration by putting it |
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-in a separate paragraph. |
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+The remaining changes were merely editorial. The original point (d) |
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+is not part of the *or* statement joining the other points, so keeping |
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+it in a paragraph separate from the enumeration is more appropriate. |
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