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From: Matthew Marchese <maffblaster@g.o>
To: gentoo-commits@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-commits] sites/www:master commit in: /, inside-gentoo/sponsors/, downloads/mirrors/, get-involved/, ...
Date: Fri, 28 Jul 2017 04:15:12
Message-Id: 1501214055.05417061458ac410241250c20d615145dd9441f4.maffblaster@gentoo
1 commit: 05417061458ac410241250c20d615145dd9441f4
2 Author: Matthew Marchese <maffblaster <AT> gentoo <DOT> org>
3 AuthorDate: Fri Jul 28 00:38:32 2017 +0000
4 Commit: Matthew Marchese <maffblaster <AT> gentoo <DOT> org>
5 CommitDate: Fri Jul 28 03:54:15 2017 +0000
6 URL: https://gitweb.gentoo.org/sites/www.git/commit/?id=05417061
7
8 Sentence case migration.
9
10 Signed-off-by: Matthew Marchese <maffblaster <AT> gentoo.org>
11
12 README | 2 +-
13 _includes/downloads/alpha.html | 8 ++---
14 _includes/downloads/amd64-advanced.html | 16 ++++-----
15 _includes/downloads/amd64.html | 6 ++--
16 _includes/downloads/arm.html | 6 ++--
17 _includes/downloads/experimental.html | 10 +++---
18 _includes/downloads/hppa.html | 6 ++--
19 _includes/downloads/ia64.html | 10 +++---
20 _includes/downloads/ppc.html | 12 +++----
21 _includes/downloads/sparc.html | 6 ++--
22 _includes/downloads/x86-advanced.html | 12 +++----
23 _includes/downloads/x86.html | 6 ++--
24 _posts/2015-03-31-website-update.md | 10 +++---
25 donate/thanks.html | 4 +--
26 downloads/index.html | 10 +++---
27 downloads/mirrors/index.html | 14 ++++----
28 downloads/signatures/index.html | 4 +--
29 get-involved/become-developer/index.md | 14 ++++----
30 get-involved/contribute/index.html | 41 +++++++++++-----------
31 get-involved/discussion-forums/index.html | 2 +-
32 get-involved/get-code/index.html | 26 +++++++-------
33 get-involved/index.html | 20 +++++------
34 get-involved/irc-channels/all-channels.html | 12 +++----
35 get-involved/irc-channels/index.html | 10 +++---
36 get-involved/mailing-lists/all-lists.html | 10 +++---
37 get-involved/mailing-lists/index.html | 14 ++++----
38 get-involved/mailing-lists/instructions.md | 12 +++----
39 get-started/about/index.html | 4 +--
40 get-started/index.html | 24 ++++++-------
41 get-started/philosophy/index.md | 4 +--
42 get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md | 6 ++--
43 get-started/screenshots/index.html | 12 +++----
44 index.html | 4 +--
45 inside-gentoo/artwork/gentoo-logo.html | 18 +++++-----
46 inside-gentoo/artwork/index.html | 18 +++++-----
47 inside-gentoo/contact/index.html | 20 +++++------
48 inside-gentoo/developers/herds.html | 2 +-
49 inside-gentoo/developers/index.html | 8 ++---
50 inside-gentoo/developers/map.html | 8 ++---
51 inside-gentoo/developers/retired-developers.html | 6 ++--
52 .../developers/unavailable-developers.html | 8 ++---
53 inside-gentoo/foundation/index.md | 16 ++++-----
54 inside-gentoo/foundation/name-logo-guidelines.md | 36 +++++++++----------
55 inside-gentoo/index.html | 14 ++++----
56 inside-gentoo/sponsors/former-sponsors.html | 4 +--
57 inside-gentoo/sponsors/index.html | 6 ++--
58 inside-gentoo/stores/index.md | 8 ++---
59 news/index.html | 2 +-
60 search/archives-gentoo-org.xml | 6 ++--
61 search/bugs-gentoo-org.xml | 4 +--
62 search/forums-gentoo-org.xml | 6 ++--
63 search/packages-gentoo-org.xml | 2 +-
64 search/www-gentoo-org.xml | 6 ++--
65 support/documentation/index.html | 25 ++++++-------
66 support/index.html | 12 +++----
67 support/news-items/index.html | 12 +++----
68 support/package-database.html | 2 +-
69 support/rsync-mirrors/index.html | 20 +++++------
70 support/security/index.html | 34 +++++++++---------
71 .../security/vulnerability-treatment-policy.html | 32 ++++++++---------
72 support/use-flags/index.html | 10 +++---
73 61 files changed, 349 insertions(+), 353 deletions(-)
74
75 diff --git a/README b/README
76 index a7bac90..ac44b66 100644
77 --- a/README
78 +++ b/README
79 @@ -4,4 +4,4 @@
80
81 ## Dynamic information
82
83 -Once the dependencies have been emerged, run `bash ./bin/update.sh` from the base directory to update the site's dynamically generated information. Expect "LDAP user information" to be skipped when not running from a Gentoo box.
84 +Once the dependencies have been emerged, run `bash ./bin/update.sh` from the base directory to update the site's dynamically generated information. Expect "LDAP user information" to be skipped when on systems that are not connected to Gentoo's LDAP infrastructure.
85
86 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/alpha.html b/_includes/downloads/alpha.html
87 index 15d2d27..66cc642 100644
88 --- a/_includes/downloads/alpha.html
89 +++ b/_includes/downloads/alpha.html
90 @@ -1,17 +1,17 @@
91 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
92 - <h4>Boot Media</h4>
93 + <h4>Boot media</h4>
94 <div class="list-group">
95 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="alpha" id="minimal" title="Minimal Installation CD" %}
96 </div>
97 - <h4>Stage Archives</h4>
98 + <h4>Stage archives</h4>
99 <div class="list-group">
100 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="alpha" id="alpha" title="Stage 3" %}
101 </div>
102 </div>
103 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
104 - <h4>Details (Contents, Hashes, and Signatures)</h4>
105 + <h4>Details (contents, hashes, and signatures)</h4>
106 <ul>
107 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/alpha/autobuilds/current-install-alpha-minimal/">Minimal Installation CD</a></li>
108 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/alpha/autobuilds/current-stage3-alpha/">Stage 3</a></li>
109 </ul>
110 -</div>
111 \ No newline at end of file
112 +</div>
113
114 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/amd64-advanced.html b/_includes/downloads/amd64-advanced.html
115 index 9b3be60..01b2aae 100644
116 --- a/_includes/downloads/amd64-advanced.html
117 +++ b/_includes/downloads/amd64-advanced.html
118 @@ -1,30 +1,30 @@
119 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
120 - <h4>Boot Media</h4>
121 + <h4>Boot media</h4>
122 <div class="list-group">
123 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="amd64" id="hardened/admincd-amd64" title="Admin CD" %}
124 </div>
125
126 - <h4>Stage Archives</h4>
127 + <h4>Stage archives</h4>
128 <div class="list-group">
129 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-nomultilib" title="Stage 3" tag="no multilib" %}
130 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-uclibc-vanilla" title="Stage 3" tag="uclibc" %}
131 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-hardened" title="Hardened Stage 3" %}
132 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-hardened+nomultilib" title="Hardened Stage 3" tag="no multilib" %}
133 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-uclibc-hardened" title="Hardened Stage 3" tag="uclibc" %}
134 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-hardened" title="Hardened stage 3" %}
135 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-hardened+nomultilib" title="Hardened stage 3" tag="no multilib" %}
136 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-uclibc-hardened" title="Hardened stage 3" tag="uclibc" %}
137 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="x32" title="Stage 3" tag="X32" %}
138 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64-systemd" title="Stage 3" tag="systemd" %}
139 </div>
140 </div>
141 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
142 - <h4>Details (Contents, Hashes, and Signatures)</h4>
143 + <h4>Details (contents, hashes, and signatures)</h4>
144 <ul>
145 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/amd64/autobuilds/current-install-amd64-minimal/">Minimal Installation CD</a></li>
146 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/amd64/autobuilds/current-stage3-amd64/">Stage 3</a></li>
147 - <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/amd64/autobuilds/">All Stages</a></li>
148 + <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/amd64/autobuilds/">All stages</a></li>
149 </ul>
150
151 <div class="alert alert-info">
152 - <strong><span class="fa fa-fw fa-info-circle"></span> Processor Compatibility</strong>
153 + <strong><span class="fa fa-fw fa-info-circle"></span> Processor compatibility</strong>
154 <p>
155 The <em>amd64</em> architecture is intended for use on AMD 64-bit CPUs as well as 64-bit <strong>Intel Pentium/Core/Xeon</strong> processors.
156 </p>
157
158 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/amd64.html b/_includes/downloads/amd64.html
159 index 0a787db..8d667a1 100644
160 --- a/_includes/downloads/amd64.html
161 +++ b/_includes/downloads/amd64.html
162 @@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
163 -<h4>Boot Media</h4>
164 +<h4>Boot media</h4>
165 <div class="list-group">
166 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="amd64" id="minimal" title="Minimal Installation CD" %}
167 {% include partials/download-link-raw.html url='http://bouncer.gentoo.org/fetch/gentoo-20160704-livedvd/amd64/' title='Hybrid ISO (LiveDVD)' size='2278404096' date='2016-07-04' %}
168 </div>
169
170 -<h4>Stage Archives</h4>
171 +<h4>Stage archives</h4>
172 <div class="list-group">
173 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="amd64" id="amd64" title="Stage 3" %}
174 </div>
175
176 -<h4>Details (Contents, Hashes, and Signatures)</h4>
177 +<h4>Details (contents, hashes, and signatures)</h4>
178 <p>
179 <a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/amd64/autobuilds/current-install-amd64-minimal/">Minimal Installation CD</a>,
180 <a href="https://bouncer.gentoo.org/fetch/gentoo-20160704-livedvd/amd64/">Hybrid ISO</a>,
181
182 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/arm.html b/_includes/downloads/arm.html
183 index a2bf23e..0182469 100644
184 --- a/_includes/downloads/arm.html
185 +++ b/_includes/downloads/arm.html
186 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
187 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
188 - <h4>Stage Archives</h4>
189 + <h4>Stage archives</h4>
190 <div class="list-group">
191 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="arm" id="armv4tl" title="Stage 3" tag="ARMv4tl" %}
192 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="arm" id="armv5tel" title="Stage 3" tag="ARMv5tel" %}
193 @@ -10,8 +10,8 @@
194 </div>
195 </div>
196 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
197 - <h4>Details (Contents, Hashes, and Signatures)</h4>
198 + <h4>Details (contents, hashes, and signatures)</h4>
199 <ul>
200 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/arm/autobuilds/">Stage 3</a></li>
201 </ul>
202 -</div>
203 \ No newline at end of file
204 +</div>
205
206 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/experimental.html b/_includes/downloads/experimental.html
207 index 8bc9d0d..f78f0fa 100644
208 --- a/_includes/downloads/experimental.html
209 +++ b/_includes/downloads/experimental.html
210 @@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
211 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
212 <h4 id="s390">s390</h4>
213 <div class="list-group">
214 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="s390" id="netboot-s390-initramfs" title="Netboot Initramfs" tag="S390" %}
215 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="s390" id="netboot-s390-kernel" title="Netboot Kernel" tag="S390" %}
216 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="s390" id="netboot-s390-initramfs" title="Netboot initramfs" tag="S390" %}
217 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="s390" id="netboot-s390-kernel" title="Netboot kernel" tag="S390" %}
218 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="s390" id="s390" title="Stage 3" tag="S390" %}
219
220 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="s390" id="netboot-s390x-initramfs" title="Netboot Initramfs" tag="S390X" %}
221 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="s390" id="netboot-s390x-kernel" title="Netboot Kernel" tag="S390X" %}
222 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="s390" id="netboot-s390x-initramfs" title="Netboot initramfs" tag="S390X" %}
223 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="s390" id="netboot-s390x-kernel" title="Netboot kernel" tag="S390X" %}
224 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="s390" id="s390x" title="Stage 3" tag="S390X" %}
225 </div>
226
227 @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
228 </div>
229 </div>
230 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
231 - <h4 id="exp-other">Other Experimental Architectures</h4>
232 + <h4 id="exp-other">Other experimental architectures</h4>
233 <div class="alert alert-info">
234 <p>
235 For all other experimental downloads (including for the
236
237 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/hppa.html b/_includes/downloads/hppa.html
238 index 8f2079e..0b2c0cd 100644
239 --- a/_includes/downloads/hppa.html
240 +++ b/_includes/downloads/hppa.html
241 @@ -1,18 +1,18 @@
242 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
243 - <h4>Boot Media</h4>
244 + <h4>Boot media</h4>
245 <div class="list-group">
246 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="hppa" id="minimal" title="Minimal Installation CD" %}
247 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="hppa" id="netboot-hppa32" title="Netboot" tag="HPPA32" %}
248 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="hppa" id="netboot-hppa64" title="Netboot" tag="HPPA64" %}
249 </div>
250 - <h4>Stage Archives</h4>
251 + <h4>Stage archives</h4>
252 <div class="list-group">
253 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="hppa" id="hppa1.1" title="Stage 3" tag="HPPA 1.1" %}
254 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="hppa" id="hppa2.0" title="Stage 3" tag="HPPA 2.0" %}
255 </div>
256 </div>
257 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
258 - <h4>Details (Contents, Hashes, and Signatures)</h4>
259 + <h4>Details (contents, hashes, and signatures)</h4>
260 <ul>
261 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/hppa/autobuilds/current-install-hppa-minimal/">Minimal Installation CD</a></li>
262 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/hppa/autobuilds/current-netboot-hppa32/">Netboot HPPA32</a></li>
263
264 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/ia64.html b/_includes/downloads/ia64.html
265 index 46aee26..da22a25 100644
266 --- a/_includes/downloads/ia64.html
267 +++ b/_includes/downloads/ia64.html
268 @@ -1,25 +1,25 @@
269 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
270 - <h4>Boot Media</h4>
271 + <h4>Boot media</h4>
272 <div class="list-group">
273 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="ia64" id="minimal" title="Minimal Installation CD" %}
274 </div>
275 - <h4>Stage Archives</h4>
276 + <h4>Stage archives</h4>
277 <div class="list-group">
278 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="ia64" id="ia64" title="Stage 3" %}
279 </div>
280 </div>
281 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
282 - <h4>Details (Contents, Hashes, and Signatures)</h4>
283 + <h4>Details (contents, hashes, and signatures)</h4>
284 <ul>
285 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/ia64/autobuilds/current-iso/">Minimal Installation CD</a></li>
286 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/ia64/autobuilds/current-stage3/">Stage 3</a></li>
287 </ul>
288
289 <div class="alert alert-warning">
290 - <strong><i class="fa fa-fw fa-warning"></i> Confirm Processor Compatibility</strong>
291 + <strong><i class="fa fa-fw fa-warning"></i> Confirm processor compatibility</strong>
292 <p>
293 The <em>ia64</em> architecture is intended for use on <strong>Intel Itanium</strong> processors only.<br />
294 If you have a 64-bit <strong>Intel Pentium/Core/Xeon</strong> processor, you need to use the <a href="#amd64" class="alert-link"><em>amd64</em></a> architecture.
295 </p>
296 </div>
297 -</div>
298 \ No newline at end of file
299 +</div>
300
301 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/ppc.html b/_includes/downloads/ppc.html
302 index 1880dde..13c5ad0 100644
303 --- a/_includes/downloads/ppc.html
304 +++ b/_includes/downloads/ppc.html
305 @@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
306 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
307 - <h4>Boot Media</h4>
308 + <h4>Boot media</h4>
309 <div class="list-group">
310 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="ppc" id="minimal" title="Minimal Installation CD" %}
311 </div>
312 - <h4>Stage Archives</h4>
313 + <h4>Stage archives</h4>
314 <div class="list-group">
315 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="ppc" id="ppc" title="PPC Stage 3" %}
316 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="ppc" id="ppc64-32ul" title="PPC64 Stage 3" tag="32ul" %}
317 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="ppc" id="ppc64-64ul" title="PPC64 Stage 3" tag="64ul" %}
318 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="ppc" id="ppc" title="PPC stage 3" %}
319 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="ppc" id="ppc64-32ul" title="PPC64 stage 3" tag="32ul" %}
320 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="ppc" id="ppc64-64ul" title="PPC64 stage 3" tag="64ul" %}
321 </div>
322 -</div>
323 \ No newline at end of file
324 +</div>
325
326 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/sparc.html b/_includes/downloads/sparc.html
327 index 7e91ad3..0aa4281 100644
328 --- a/_includes/downloads/sparc.html
329 +++ b/_includes/downloads/sparc.html
330 @@ -1,11 +1,11 @@
331 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
332 - <h4>Boot Media</h4>
333 + <h4>Boot media</h4>
334 <div class="list-group">
335 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="sparc" id="minimal" title="Minimal Installation CD" %}
336 </div>
337 - <h4>Stage Archives</h4>
338 + <h4>Stage archives</h4>
339 <div class="list-group">
340 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="sparc" id="sparc64" title="Stage 3" %}
341 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="sparc" id="sparc64-multilib" title="Stage 3" tag="multilib" %}
342 </div>
343 -</div>
344 \ No newline at end of file
345 +</div>
346
347 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/x86-advanced.html b/_includes/downloads/x86-advanced.html
348 index 7763e78..609025f 100644
349 --- a/_includes/downloads/x86-advanced.html
350 +++ b/_includes/downloads/x86-advanced.html
351 @@ -1,27 +1,27 @@
352 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
353 - <h4>Boot Media</h4>
354 + <h4>Boot media</h4>
355 <div class="list-group">
356 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="x86" id="hardened/admincd-x86" title="Admin CD" %}
357 </div>
358
359 - <h4>Stage Archives</h4>
360 + <h4>Stage archives</h4>
361 <div class="list-group">
362 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="x86" id="i486" title="Stage 3" tag="i486" %}
363 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="x86" id="i686-uclibc-vanilla" title="Stage 3" tag="i686 | uclibc" %}
364 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="x86" id="i686-hardened" title="Hardened Stage 3" tag="i686" %}
365 - {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="x86" id="i686-uclibc-hardened" title="Hardened Stage 3" tag="i686 | uclibc" %}
366 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="x86" id="i686-hardened" title="Hardened stage 3" tag="i686" %}
367 + {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="x86" id="i686-uclibc-hardened" title="Hardened stage 3" tag="i686 | uclibc" %}
368 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="x86" id="i686-systemd" title="Stage 3" tag="systemd" %}
369 </div>
370 </div>
371 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
372 - <h4>Details (Contents, Hashes, and Signatures)</h4>
373 + <h4>Details (contents, hashes, and signatures)</h4>
374 <ul>
375 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/x86/autobuilds/current-install-x86-minimal/">Minimal Installation CD</a></li>
376 <li><a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/x86/autobuilds/current-stage3-i686/">Stage 3</a></li>
377 </ul>
378
379 <div class="alert alert-warning">
380 - <strong><i class="fa fa-fw fa-warning"></i> Confirm Processor Compatibility</strong>
381 + <strong><i class="fa fa-fw fa-warning"></i> Confirm processor compatibility</strong>
382 <p>
383 There are two builds of the <em>x86</em> architecture: <em>i486</em> and <em>i686</em>.<br />
384 Processors prior to the <strong>Intel Pentium Pro</strong> or <strong>Pentium II</strong> require the <em>i486</em> variant to be used.
385
386 diff --git a/_includes/downloads/x86.html b/_includes/downloads/x86.html
387 index f240871..260c8d6 100644
388 --- a/_includes/downloads/x86.html
389 +++ b/_includes/downloads/x86.html
390 @@ -1,15 +1,15 @@
391 -<h4>Boot Media</h4>
392 +<h4>Boot media</h4>
393 <div class="list-group">
394 {% include partials/download-link.html type="iso" arch="x86" id="minimal" title="Minimal Installation CD" %}
395 {% include partials/download-link-raw.html url='http://bouncer.gentoo.org/fetch/gentoo-20160704-livedvd/x86/' title='Hybrid ISO (LiveDVD)' size='2442909696' date='2016-07-04' %}
396 </div>
397
398 -<h4>Stage Archives</h4>
399 +<h4>Stage archives</h4>
400 <div class="list-group">
401 {% include partials/download-link.html type="stage3" arch="x86" id="i686" title="Stage 3" tag="i686" %}
402 </div>
403
404 -<h4>Details (Contents, Hashes, and Signatures)</h4>
405 +<h4>Details (contents, hashes, and signatures)</h4>
406 <p>
407 <a href="http://distfiles.gentoo.org/releases/x86/autobuilds/current-install-x86-minimal/">Minimal Installation CD</a>,
408 <a href="https://bouncer.gentoo.org/fetch/gentoo-20160704-livedvd/x86/">Hybrid ISO</a>,
409
410 diff --git a/_posts/2015-03-31-website-update.md b/_posts/2015-03-31-website-update.md
411 index 03d6a77..25b8939 100644
412 --- a/_posts/2015-03-31-website-update.md
413 +++ b/_posts/2015-03-31-website-update.md
414 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
415 ---
416 -title: Gentoo announces total website makeover (not an April Fool's)
417 +title: Gentoo announces total website makeover (not an April Fool's joke!)
418 ---
419
420 **Thank you for participating in Gentoo's 2015 April Fools' joke!**
421 @@ -68,9 +68,9 @@ every year," said Daniel Robbins (drobbins), former Gentoo founder.
422 Several teams participated in the early development of the new website and
423 would like to showcase their work:
424
425 -- Games Team (JavaScript Pong)
426 -- Multimedia Team (Ghostbusters Theme on 6 floppy drives)
427 -- Net-News Team (A list of Gentoo newsgroups)
428 +- Games team (JavaScript Pong).
429 +- Multimedia team (Ghostbusters Theme on 6 floppy drives).
430 +- Net-News team (A list of Gentoo newsgroups).
431
432 ### Phase II
433 The second phase of the project to get Gentoo Linux to a wider user base will
434 @@ -84,4 +84,4 @@ Media release prepared by [A Jackson](mailto:ajackson@g.o).
435
436 Editorial inquiries: [PR team](mailto:pr@g.o).
437
438 -Interviews, photography and screen shots available on request.
439 \ No newline at end of file
440 +Interviews, photography and screen shots available on request.
441
442 diff --git a/donate/thanks.html b/donate/thanks.html
443 index 87ae712..9f74ac6 100644
444 --- a/donate/thanks.html
445 +++ b/donate/thanks.html
446 @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ layout: tyrian
447 <br>
448
449 <p class="lead text-center">
450 - On behalf of Larry the Cow, and the entire Gentoo community, thank you for your support!
451 + On behalf of Larry the Cow, and the entire Gentoo community, we thank you for your support!
452 </p>
453
454 <hr>
455 @@ -18,4 +18,4 @@ layout: tyrian
456 <small>
457 If you have any questions regarding your donation, please let our <a href="mailto:trustees@g.o">Trustees</a> know.
458 </small>
459 -</p>
460 \ No newline at end of file
461 +</p>
462
463 diff --git a/downloads/index.html b/downloads/index.html
464 index 9b8fe09..0aa8b15 100644
465 --- a/downloads/index.html
466 +++ b/downloads/index.html
467 @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ inlinejs: "$(function() { $('#other-arches a:first').tab('show'); });"
468
469 <p class="lead stick-bottom">
470 Gentoo Linux is available free over the Internet.<br>
471 - You can download Gentoo Linux Live Environments and Stage Archives using the links below.
472 + Live environments and stage archives can be downloaded using the links below.
473 </p>
474
475 <div class="row">
476 @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ inlinejs: "$(function() { $('#other-arches a:first').tab('show'); });"
477
478 <div class="row">
479 <div class="col-md-12">
480 - <h2>Advanced Choices and other Architectures</h2>
481 + <h2>Advanced choices and other architectures</h2>
482
483
484
485 @@ -66,13 +66,13 @@ inlinejs: "$(function() { $('#other-arches a:first').tab('show'); });"
486
487 <div class="tab-content other-arches">
488 <div class="tab-pane active" id="amd64-advanced">
489 - <h3>amd64 &ndash; Advanced Choices</h3>
490 + <h3>amd64 &ndash; Advanced choices</h3>
491 <div class="row">
492 {% include downloads/amd64-advanced.html %}
493 </div>
494 </div>
495 <div class="tab-pane active" id="x86-advanced">
496 - <h3>x86 &ndash; Advanced Choices</h3>
497 + <h3>x86 &ndash; Advanced choices</h3>
498 <div class="row">
499 {% include downloads/x86-advanced.html %}
500 </div>
501 @@ -114,7 +114,7 @@ inlinejs: "$(function() { $('#other-arches a:first').tab('show'); });"
502 </div>
503 </div>
504 <div class="tab-pane active" id="experimental">
505 - <h3>Experimental Architectures</h3>
506 + <h3>Experimental architectures</h3>
507 <div class="row">
508 {% include downloads/experimental.html %}
509 </div>
510
511 diff --git a/downloads/mirrors/index.html b/downloads/mirrors/index.html
512 index d042aed..c0de095 100644
513 --- a/downloads/mirrors/index.html
514 +++ b/downloads/mirrors/index.html
515 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
516 ---
517 -title: 'Gentoo Source Mirrors'
518 +title: 'Gentoo source mirrors'
519 navtitle: 'Mirrors'
520 nav1: downloads
521 nav2: mirrors
522 @@ -12,17 +12,17 @@ nav2-show: true
523 </p>
524
525 <div class="alert alert-info">
526 - <strong>Using Source Mirrors</strong>
527 + <strong>Using source mirrors</strong>
528 <br>
529 - The mirrors listed <strong>on this page</strong> contain installation files such as <strong>LiveCDs, Portage tree snapshots</strong>
530 + The mirrors listed <strong>on this page</strong> contain installation files such as <strong>LiveCDs, Gentoo ebuild repository snapshots</strong>
531 as well as <strong>distfiles</strong> (the actual program code for our packages).
532 <br>
533 - To use a source mirror for Portage downloads, add a URL from the list below to your <code>GENTOO_MIRRORS</code> variable in <tt>make.conf</tt>.
534 - <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/GENTOO_MIRRORS" class="alert-link">More information</a> is available in our Wiki.
535 + To use a source mirror for Portage downloads, add a URL from the list below to the <var>GENTOO_MIRRORS</var> variable in <tt>make.conf</tt>.
536 + <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/GENTOO_MIRRORS" class="alert-link">More information</a> is available in our wiki.
537 </div>
538
539 <div class="alert alert-success">
540 - <strong>rsync Mirrors</strong>
541 + <strong>rsync mirrors</strong>
542 <br>
543 We also have a second type of mirrors that you use for updating your Portage tree (configured via <tt>repos.conf</tt>).
544 They are available on a <a href="/support/rsync-mirrors/" class="alert-link">separate page</a>.
545 @@ -34,7 +34,7 @@ nav2-show: true
546
547 <hr>
548
549 -<h2>Countries covered by Gentoo Source Mirrors</h2>
550 +<h2>Countries covered by Gentoo source mirrors</h2>
551
552 <table class="table table-condensed table-striped">
553 <tr>
554
555 diff --git a/downloads/signatures/index.html b/downloads/signatures/index.html
556 index b9011ca..62eda4f 100644
557 --- a/downloads/signatures/index.html
558 +++ b/downloads/signatures/index.html
559 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
560 ---
561 -title: 'Release Media Signatures'
562 +title: 'Release media signatures'
563 navtitle: 'Signatures'
564 nav1: downloads
565 nav2: signatures
566 @@ -45,7 +45,7 @@ nav2-show: true
567
568 <div class="panel panel-default">
569 <div class="panel-heading">
570 - <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-check-circle-o"></span> Verifying Files</h3>
571 + <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-check-circle-o"></span> Verifying files</h3>
572 </div>
573 <div class="panel-body">
574 <p>To verify downloaded files are not tampered with, you need the <tt>.DIGESTS</tt> file matching your release and the matching key from the table above.</p>
575
576 diff --git a/get-involved/become-developer/index.md b/get-involved/become-developer/index.md
577 index 33fa070..7399e44 100644
578 --- a/get-involved/become-developer/index.md
579 +++ b/get-involved/become-developer/index.md
580 @@ -61,8 +61,8 @@ learn a few basics on how Gentoo is structured and how it operates. To get commi
581 access, you will also need to know a fair bit about ebuilds. To help you get
582 yourself knowledgeable, we have prepared one or two quizzes for you to take.
583
584 -The prospective developers aiming to obtain commit access should take the [ebuild
585 -quiz](https://projects.gentoo.org/comrel/recruiters/quizzes/ebuild-quiz.txt),
586 +The prospective developers aiming to obtain commit access to the Gentoo ebuild repository
587 +should take the [ebuild quiz](https://projects.gentoo.org/comrel/recruiters/quizzes/ebuild-quiz.txt),
588 followed by the [end quiz](https://projects.gentoo.org/comrel/recruiters/quizzes/end-quiz.txt).
589 For candidates for developers without commit access, we have prepared a less
590 technical [developer quiz](https://projects.gentoo.org/comrel/recruiters/quizzes/developer-quiz.txt)
591 @@ -70,9 +70,9 @@ instead.
592
593 ### Step 5. Get recruited!
594
595 -Once you and your mentor agree that you're ready, you arrange a review session
596 +Once you and your mentor agree that you're ready, arrange a review session
597 with the [Recruiters](https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Recruiters) at a
598 -convenient time. During this session(s), Recruiters interview you and ensure
599 +convenient time. During the session(s), Recruiters interview you and ensure
600 that you have obtained all the necessary knowledge. Once you pass the review,
601 the Recruiters create your developer account and announce you as a new
602 developer.
603 @@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ developer.
604
605 ## What do I get?
606
607 -Besides the warm feeling of contributing to Free and Open Source Software you ask?
608 +Besides the warm feeling of contributing to Free and Open Source Software?
609
610 -Okay, there are indeed a few perks: You get an **@gentoo.org** email address, matching IRC cloak,
611 -special access flags on our Wiki and Bugzilla, and a few other things to facilitate your development efforts.
612 +There are indeed a few perks: You get an **@gentoo.org** email address, matching IRC cloak,
613 +special access flags on our wiki and Bugzilla sites, and a few other things to facilitate development efforts.
614
615 diff --git a/get-involved/contribute/index.html b/get-involved/contribute/index.html
616 index 48c3653..6b0d48c 100644
617 --- a/get-involved/contribute/index.html
618 +++ b/get-involved/contribute/index.html
619 @@ -10,7 +10,7 @@ nav2-weight: 40
620 <p class="lead">
621 There are plenty of things you can do to make Gentoo even better.
622 <br>
623 - Here's your chance to leave a mark on our distribution.
624 + Here's your chance to leave a mark on our distribution!
625 </p>
626
627 <br>
628 @@ -20,22 +20,22 @@ nav2-weight: 40
629 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-users fa-5x"></span>
630 </div>
631 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-10">
632 - <h2 class="stick-top">Provide Community Support</h2>
633 + <h2 class="stick-top">Provide community support</h2>
634 <p>
635 Join the awesome crowd of helpful people in our <a href="../irc-channels/">IRC channels</a>,
636 - on our <a href="https://forums.gentoo.org/">Forums</a> and on the <a href="../mailing-lists/">Mailing Lists</a>.
637 + on our <a href="https://forums.gentoo.org/">forums</a> and on the <a href="../mailing-lists/">mailing lists</a>.
638 <br>
639 If a topic is being discussed that you're knowledgeable on, please feel free to contribute and help out a fellow user.
640 </p>
641 <p class="button-bar">
642 <a href="https://forums.gentoo.org/search.php?search_id=unanswered" class="btn btn-primary">
643 - <span class="fa fa-fw fa-question-circle"></span> Unanswered questions on the Forums
644 + <span class="fa fa-fw fa-question-circle"></span> Unanswered questions on the forums
645 </a>
646 <a href="../irc-channels/" class="btn btn-primary">
647 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></span> Join <tt>#gentoo</tt>
648 </a>
649 <a href="../mailing-lists/" class="btn btn-primary">
650 - <span class="fa fa-fw fa-inbox"></span> Mailing Lists
651 + <span class="fa fa-fw fa-inbox"></span> Mailing lists
652 </a>
653 </p>
654 </div>
655 @@ -48,9 +48,9 @@ nav2-weight: 40
656 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-book fa-5x"></span>
657 </div>
658 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-10">
659 - <h2 class="stick-top">Improve our Documentation</h2>
660 + <h2 class="stick-top">Improve our documentation</h2>
661 <p>
662 - The <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/">Gentoo Wiki</a> is the central documentation resource made by the community for the community.
663 + The <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/">Gentoo wiki</a> is the central documentation resource made by the community for the community.
664 <br>
665 Found something that needs to be documented, improved, translated, or rewritten?
666 Sign up and get it done!
667 @@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ nav2-weight: 40
668 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-gears fa-5x"></span>
669 </div>
670 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-10">
671 - <h2 class="stick-top">Maintain Packages</h2>
672 + <h2 class="stick-top">Maintain ebuilds</h2>
673 <p>
674 Packages are the very essence of our distribution.
675 Maintaining them is one of the most important tasks we have.
676 @@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ nav2-weight: 40
677 </p>
678
679 <ul>
680 - <li><a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Basic_guide_to_write_Gentoo_Ebuilds">Basic Guide to writing Ebuilds</a></li>
681 + <li><a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Basic_guide_to_write_Gentoo_Ebuilds">Basic guide to writing ebuilds</a></li>
682 <li><a href="https://devmanual.gentoo.org/">The Gentoo Developer Manual</a></li>
683 <li>The <a href="irc://irc.gentoo.org/gentoo-dev-help"><tt>#gentoo-dev-help</tt></a> IRC channel</li>
684 <li>The <a href="/get-involved/mailing-lists/">gentoo-devhelp</a> mailing list</li>
685 @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ nav2-weight: 40
686 <p>
687 Before <a href="/get-involved/become-developer/">becoming a developer</a>, you can test and improve your ebuild writing skills by contributing
688 to the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Sunrise">Sunrise user overlay</a>, testing packages as <em>Architecture tester</em>
689 - or work together with a developer and act as <em>Proxy Maintainer</em> for a small set of packages.
690 + or work together with a developer and act as <em>Proxy maintainer</em> for a small set of packages.
691 </p>
692
693 <p class="button-bar">
694 @@ -105,10 +105,10 @@ nav2-weight: 40
695 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-upload"></span> How to submit ebuilds
696 </a>
697 <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:X86/Arch_Testers_FAQ" class="btn btn-primary">
698 - <span class="fa fa-fw fa-wrench"></span> Become Arch Tester
699 + <span class="fa fa-fw fa-wrench"></span> Become arch tester
700 </a>
701 <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Proxy_Maintainers" class="btn btn-primary">
702 - <span class="fa fa-fw fa-user"></span> Become Proxy Maintainer
703 + <span class="fa fa-fw fa-user"></span> Become proxy maintainer
704 </a>
705 </p>
706 </div>
707 @@ -121,7 +121,7 @@ nav2-weight: 40
708 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-bug fa-5x"></span>
709 </div>
710 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-10">
711 - <h2 class="stick-top">Report and Resolve Bugs</h2>
712 + <h2 class="stick-top">Report and resolve bugs</h2>
713 <p>
714 <br>
715 If you've come across flaw in a package in our distribution, please take a moment to report it
716 @@ -150,7 +150,7 @@ nav2-weight: 40
717 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-paint-brush fa-5x"></span>
718 </div>
719 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-10">
720 - <h2 class="stick-top">Create Artwork and Designs</h2>
721 + <h2 class="stick-top">Create artwork and designs</h2>
722 <p>
723 Got an idea for a cool wallpaper, case badge, graphic item, web feature, or anything else that will be a pleasure to look at?
724 <br>
725 @@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ nav2-weight: 40
726 </p>
727 <p class="button-bar">
728 <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:GMN" class="btn btn-primary">
729 - <span class="fa fa-fw fa-newspaper-o"></span> Contact the GMN team
730 + <span class="fa fa-fw fa-newspaper-o"></span> Contact the news project
731 </a>
732 </p>
733 </div>
734 @@ -195,18 +195,18 @@ nav2-weight: 40
735 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-database fa-5x"></span>
736 </div>
737 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-10">
738 - <h2 class="stick-top">Sponsor Infrastructure</h2>
739 + <h2 class="stick-top">Sponsor infrastructure</h2>
740 <p>
741 Gentoo is largely run on sponsored infrastructure, as we can only sustain the very core machines of the distribution.
742 </p>
743
744 <p>
745 If you have access to machines, bandwidth, or co-location and wish to support Gentoo,
746 - please get in touch with our <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Infrastructure">Infrastructure team</a>.
747 + please get in touch with our <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Infrastructure">Infrastructure project</a>.
748 </p>
749
750 <p class="button-bar">
751 - <a href="mailto:infra@g.o" class="btn btn-primary"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-database"></span> Offer Infrastructure resources</a>
752 + <a href="mailto:infra@g.o" class="btn btn-primary"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-database"></span> Offer infrastructure resources</a>
753 </p>
754 </div>
755 </section>
756 @@ -218,7 +218,7 @@ nav2-weight: 40
757 <span class="fa fa-fw fa-cloud-download fa-5x"></span>
758 </div>
759 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-10">
760 - <h2 class="stick-top">Provide a Mirror</h2>
761 + <h2 class="stick-top">Provide a mirror</h2>
762 <p>
763 Mirrors provide users around the globe with speedy access to the latest ebuilds, program sources, stage archives, and boot media.
764 <br>
765 @@ -256,7 +256,6 @@ nav2-weight: 40
766
767 <div class="alert alert-info">
768 <strong>Looking for specific tasks?</strong>
769 - The Gentoo Projects publish their <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Gentoo/Staffing_Needs" class="alert-link">Staffing Needs</a>
770 - on our <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Gentoo/Staffing_Needs" class="alert-link">Wiki</a>.
771 + The Gentoo projects publish their <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Gentoo/Staffing_Needs" class="alert-link">staffing needs on the wiki</a>.
772 You are also always welcome to pick a <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org" class="alert-link">bug</a> and work on it.
773 </div>
774
775 diff --git a/get-involved/discussion-forums/index.html b/get-involved/discussion-forums/index.html
776 index 1b9b86a..d33b325 100644
777 --- a/get-involved/discussion-forums/index.html
778 +++ b/get-involved/discussion-forums/index.html
779 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
780 ---
781 -title: 'Discussion Forums'
782 +title: 'Discussion forums'
783 navtitle: 'Forums'
784
785 nav1: get-involved
786
787 diff --git a/get-involved/get-code/index.html b/get-involved/get-code/index.html
788 index e4e2a94..d93f9ad 100644
789 --- a/get-involved/get-code/index.html
790 +++ b/get-involved/get-code/index.html
791 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
792 ---
793 -title: Gentoo Code Repositories
794 -navtitle: Get the Code
795 +title: Gentoo code repositories
796 +navtitle: Get the code
797
798 nav1: get-involved
799 nav2: get-code
800 @@ -8,41 +8,41 @@ nav2-show: true
801 nav2-weight: 60
802 ---
803 <p class="lead">
804 - Here is all the code that powers Gentoo, only one <kbd>git clone</kbd> away:
805 + All the code that powers Gentoo is only one <kbd>git clone</kbd> away:
806 </p>
807
808 <div class="panel panel-default">
809 <div class="panel-heading">
810 - <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-git"></span> Git Repositories</h3>
811 + <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-git"></span> Git repositories</h3>
812 </div>
813 <div class="panel-body">
814 <p>
815 - Repositories containing our <a href="https://gitweb.gentoo.org/repo/gentoo.git/">main package repository</a>,
816 - overlays, website code, and other project code are available in Git repositories.
817 + Repositories including the <a href="https://gitweb.gentoo.org/repo/gentoo.git/">main ebuild repository</a>,
818 + overlays (custom ebuild repositories), website code, and other project code are available in Git repositories.
819 <br>
820 We offer anonymous read-only access (<em>AnonGit</em>) via the HTTP and Git protocols as well as a web-based source code browser.
821 </p>
822 <br>
823 <div class="alert alert-info">
824 - You can find the URLs needed to clone repositories on the project pages in the source code browser.
825 - Unless you have an account on <tt>git.gentoo.org</tt>, please use the <tt>anongit.gentoo.org</tt> URL.
826 + The URLs needed to clone repositories can be found on the project pages in the source code browser.
827 + Unless you have an account on <tt>git.gentoo.org</tt>, please use the <tt>anongit.gentoo.org</tt> URL(s).
828 </div>
829
830 <hr>
831
832 - Additionally, we mirror some repositories on GitHub to facilitate contributions.
833 + Additionally, we mirror some repositories on GitHub to aid in facilitating community contributions.
834 You can find them all under the <a href="https://github.com/gentoo/">Gentoo organization</a>.
835 </div>
836 <div class="panel-footer text-right">
837 <a href="https://anongit.gentoo.org/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-code-fork"></span> AnonGit</a>
838 - <a href="https://gitweb.gentoo.org/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-search"></span> Source Code Browser</a>
839 + <a href="https://gitweb.gentoo.org/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-search"></span> Source code browser</a>
840 <a href="https://github.com/gentoo/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-github-alt"></span> Gentoo on GitHub</a>
841 </div>
842 </div>
843
844 <div class="panel panel-default">
845 <div class="panel-heading">
846 - <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-code-fork"></span> CVS Repositories</h3>
847 + <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-code-fork"></span> CVS repositories</h3>
848 </div>
849 <div class="panel-body">
850 Historical repositories are still available via CVS.
851 @@ -51,12 +51,12 @@ nav2-weight: 60
852 </div>
853 <div class="panel-footer text-right">
854 <a href="https://anoncvs.gentoo.org/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-code-fork"></span> AnonCVS</a>
855 - <a href="https://sources.gentoo.org/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-search"></span> Source Code Browser</a>
856 + <a href="https://sources.gentoo.org/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-search"></span> Source code browser</a>
857 </div>
858 </div>
859
860 <h2>Want <code>+w</code>?</h2>
861 <p>
862 Please contact the listed repository owners to find out their contribution policy.
863 - The main ebuild repository requires you to be a <a href="/get-involved/become-developer">Gentoo Developer</a> to commit.
864 + The main ebuild repository requires you to be a <a href="/get-involved/become-developer">Gentoo developer</a> to commit.
865 </p>
866
867 diff --git a/get-involved/index.html b/get-involved/index.html
868 index e1a86a8..399ee3a 100644
869 --- a/get-involved/index.html
870 +++ b/get-involved/index.html
871 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
872 ---
873 -title: Get Involved
874 +title: Get involved
875
876 nav1: get-involved
877 nav1-show: true
878 @@ -13,15 +13,15 @@ nav1-weight: 30
879 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-8 col-md-offset-2">
880 <div class="list-group">
881 <a href="irc-channels/" class="list-group-item">
882 - <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> IRC Channels</h4>
883 - <p class="list-group-item-text">Gentoo offers a variety of IRC channels, from support to project-specific discussion.</p>
884 + <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> IRC channels</h4>
885 + <p class="list-group-item-text">Gentoo offers a variety of IRC channels - everything from support to project-specific discussion.</p>
886 </a>
887 <a href="https://forums.gentoo.org/" class="list-group-item">
888 - <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-group"></i> Discussion Forums</h4>
889 + <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-group"></i> Discussion forums</h4>
890 <p class="list-group-item-text">5,800,000 posts and counting.</p>
891 </a>
892 <a href="mailing-lists/" class="list-group-item">
893 - <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-send"></i> Mailing Lists</h4>
894 + <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-send"></i> Mailing lists</h4>
895 <p class="list-group-item-text">Subscribe to announcements, or get in on technical discussions.</p>
896 </a>
897 </div>
898 @@ -37,16 +37,16 @@ nav1-weight: 30
899 <div class="list-group">
900 <a href="contribute/" class="list-group-item">
901 <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-gears"></i> Contribute</h4>
902 - <p class="list-group-item-text">Lots of things we can use your help with.</p>
903 + <p class="list-group-item-text">There are lots of things that could improved.</p>
904 </a>
905 <a href="become-developer/" class="list-group-item">
906 - <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-rocket"></i> Become a Developer</h4>
907 + <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-rocket"></i> Become a developer</h4>
908 <p class="list-group-item-text">Enjoy working on Gentoo? You're invited to officially join as a developer.</p>
909 </a>
910 <a href="get-code/" class="list-group-item">
911 - <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-code-fork"></i> Get the Code</h4>
912 - <p class="list-group-item-text">Get the code that powers Gentoo to start hacking on it.</p>
913 + <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-code-fork"></i> Get the code</h4>
914 + <p class="list-group-item-text">Get the code that powers Gentoo and start hacking!</p>
915 </a>
916 </div>
917 </div>
918 -</div>
919 \ No newline at end of file
920 +</div>
921
922 diff --git a/get-involved/irc-channels/all-channels.html b/get-involved/irc-channels/all-channels.html
923 index 7ebb982..b532b70 100644
924 --- a/get-involved/irc-channels/all-channels.html
925 +++ b/get-involved/irc-channels/all-channels.html
926 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
927 nav1: get-involved
928 nav2: irc
929 nav3: irc-all-channels
930 -title: 'All IRC Channels'
931 +title: 'All IRC channels'
932 ---
933
934 <p>
935 @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ title: 'All IRC Channels'
936 Also, do read the channel's topic, it might just answer your question already.
937 </div>
938
939 -<h2>Primary Support Channels</h2>
940 +<h2>Primary support channels</h2>
941
942 <div class="table-responsive">
943 <table class="table table-striped">
944 @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ title: 'All IRC Channels'
945 </table>
946 </div>
947
948 -<h2>Architecture/Platform Support Channels</h2>
949 +<h2>Architecture/Platform support channels</h2>
950
951 <div class="table-responsive">
952 <table class="table table-striped">
953 @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ title: 'All IRC Channels'
954 </table>
955 </div>
956
957 -<h2>General and Development Channels</h2>
958 +<h2>General and development channels</h2>
959
960 <div class="table-responsive">
961 <table class="table table-striped">
962 @@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ title: 'All IRC Channels'
963 </table>
964 </div>
965
966 -<h2>International Channels</h2>
967 +<h2>International channels</h2>
968
969 <div class="table-responsive">
970 <table class="table table-striped">
971 @@ -70,4 +70,4 @@ title: 'All IRC Channels'
972 {% include partials/irc-channel.html %}
973 {% endfor %}
974 </table>
975 -</div>
976 \ No newline at end of file
977 +</div>
978
979 diff --git a/get-involved/irc-channels/index.html b/get-involved/irc-channels/index.html
980 index 6bbae6d..b5e4e80 100644
981 --- a/get-involved/irc-channels/index.html
982 +++ b/get-involved/irc-channels/index.html
983 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
984 ---
985 -title: 'IRC Channels'
986 +title: 'IRC channels'
987
988 nav1: get-involved
989 nav2: irc
990 @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ nav2-weight: 10
991 <div class="panel-body">
992 <div class="row">
993 <div class="col-xs-12">
994 - <h2 class="stick-top"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> <tt>#gentoo</tt> &ndash; Our Main IRC Support Channel</h2>
995 + <h2 class="stick-top"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> <tt>#gentoo</tt> &ndash; Our main IRC support channel</h2>
996 </div>
997 </div>
998 <div class="row">
999 @@ -61,16 +61,16 @@ nav2-weight: 10
1000 </div>
1001 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
1002
1003 - <a href="irc://irc.gentoo.org/gentoo" role="button" class="btn btn-primary btn-block"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> Join <tt>#gentoo</tt> in your client</a>
1004 + <a href="irc://irc.gentoo.org/gentoo" role="button" class="btn btn-primary btn-block"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> Join <tt>#gentoo</tt> in a local client</a>
1005 <a href="http://webchat.freenode.net/?channels=gentoo" role="button" class="btn btn-primary btn-block"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> Join <tt>#gentoo</tt> via Webchat</a>
1006 </div>
1007 </div>
1008 </div>
1009 </div>
1010
1011 -<h2>More Channels</h2>
1012 +<h2>More channels</h2>
1013
1014 <p>
1015 Besides <tt>#gentoo,</tt> we also operate a number of other channels:
1016 - <a href="all-channels.html" class="btn btn-primary"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> Full Gentoo IRC Channel Listing</a>
1017 + <a href="all-channels.html" class="btn btn-primary"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> Full Gentoo IRC channel Listing</a>
1018 </p>
1019
1020 diff --git a/get-involved/mailing-lists/all-lists.html b/get-involved/mailing-lists/all-lists.html
1021 index 836972e..e0e949d 100644
1022 --- a/get-involved/mailing-lists/all-lists.html
1023 +++ b/get-involved/mailing-lists/all-lists.html
1024 @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ nav3-show: true
1025 nav3-weight: 20
1026 layout: page-nav3
1027
1028 -title: 'All Mailing Lists'
1029 +title: 'All mailing lists'
1030 ---
1031
1032 <p class="lead">
1033 @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ title: 'All Mailing Lists'
1034
1035 <hr>
1036
1037 -<h2>Primary Mailing Lists</h2>
1038 +<h2>Primary mailing lists</h2>
1039
1040 <div class="table-responsive">
1041 <table class="table table-striped">
1042 @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ title: 'All Mailing Lists'
1043 </table>
1044 </div>
1045
1046 -<h2>International Mailing Lists</h2>
1047 +<h2>International mailing lists</h2>
1048
1049 <div class="table-responsive">
1050 <table class="table table-striped">
1051 @@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ title: 'All Mailing Lists'
1052 </table>
1053 </div>
1054
1055 -<h2>Other Mailing Lists</h2>
1056 +<h2>Other mailing lists</h2>
1057
1058 <div class="table-responsive">
1059 <table class="table table-striped">
1060 @@ -73,4 +73,4 @@ title: 'All Mailing Lists'
1061 {% endfor %}
1062 </table>
1063 </div>
1064 -{% include container/end %}
1065 \ No newline at end of file
1066 +{% include container/end %}
1067
1068 diff --git a/get-involved/mailing-lists/index.html b/get-involved/mailing-lists/index.html
1069 index 0008036..667ad66 100644
1070 --- a/get-involved/mailing-lists/index.html
1071 +++ b/get-involved/mailing-lists/index.html
1072 @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ nav3-show: true
1073 nav3-weight: 10
1074 layout: page-nav3
1075
1076 -title: 'Mailing Lists'
1077 +title: 'Mailing lists'
1078 ---
1079
1080 <p class="lead">
1081 @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ title: 'Mailing Lists'
1082 Like all of our Gentoo community venues, the mailing lists are governed by our <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Council/Code_of_conduct">Code of Conduct</a>.
1083 </p>
1084
1085 -<h2>Main Lists</h2>
1086 +<h2>Main lists</h2>
1087
1088 <h3>gentoo-user</h3>
1089 <p>
1090 @@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ title: 'Mailing Lists'
1091 <p>
1092 <a href="mailto:gentoo-user@l.g.o" title="Post to this list" class="btn btn-primary"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-send"></span> Post to gentoo-user</a>
1093 <a href="mailto:gentoo-user%2Bsubscribe@l.g.o" title="Subscribe to this list" class="btn btn-default"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-plus-square"></span> Subscribe to gentoo-user</a>
1094 - <a href="https://archives.gentoo.org/gentoo-user/" title="Archives of this list" class="btn btn-default"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-archive"></span> Browse Archives</a>
1095 + <a href="https://archives.gentoo.org/gentoo-user/" title="Archives of this list" class="btn btn-default"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-archive"></span> Browse archives</a>
1096 </p>
1097 <hr>
1098
1099 @@ -44,7 +44,7 @@ title: 'Mailing Lists'
1100 <p>
1101 <a href="mailto:gentoo-dev@l.g.o" title="Post to this list" class="btn btn-primary"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-send"></span> Post to gentoo-dev</a>
1102 <a href="mailto:gentoo-dev%2Bsubscribe@l.g.o" title="Subscribe to this list" class="btn btn-default"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-plus-square"></span> Subscribe to gentoo-dev</a>
1103 - <a href="https://archives.gentoo.org/gentoo-dev/" title="Archives of this list" class="btn btn-default"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-archive"></span> Browse Archives</a>
1104 + <a href="https://archives.gentoo.org/gentoo-dev/" title="Archives of this list" class="btn btn-default"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-archive"></span> Browse archives</a>
1105 </p>
1106 <hr>
1107
1108 @@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ title: 'Mailing Lists'
1109 </p>
1110 <p>
1111 <a href="mailto:gentoo-announce%2Bsubscribe@l.g.o" title="Subscribe to this list" class="btn btn-primary"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-plus-square"></span> Subscribe to gentoo-announce</a>
1112 - <a href="https://archives.gentoo.org/gentoo-announce/" title="Archives of this list" class="btn btn-default"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-archive"></span> Browse Archives</a>
1113 + <a href="https://archives.gentoo.org/gentoo-announce/" title="Archives of this list" class="btn btn-default"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-archive"></span> Browse archives</a>
1114 </p>
1115 <hr>
1116
1117 @@ -62,9 +62,9 @@ title: 'Mailing Lists'
1118 <h2>Archives</h2>
1119
1120 <p>
1121 - All of our public mailing lists are archived in the Gentoo Archives:
1122 + All of our public mailing lists are archived in the Gentoo archives:
1123 <br>
1124 - <a href="https://archives.gentoo.org" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-archive"></span> Gentoo Archives</a>
1125 + <a href="https://archives.gentoo.org" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-archive"></span> Gentoo archives</a>
1126 </p>
1127
1128 <p>
1129
1130 diff --git a/get-involved/mailing-lists/instructions.md b/get-involved/mailing-lists/instructions.md
1131 index 7d04826..ff3ad48 100644
1132 --- a/get-involved/mailing-lists/instructions.md
1133 +++ b/get-involved/mailing-lists/instructions.md
1134 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
1135 ---
1136 -title: 'Mailing List Instructions'
1137 -navtitle: 'Instructions &amp; FAQ'
1138 +title: 'Mailing list instructions'
1139 +navtitle: 'Instructions and FAQs'
1140
1141 nav1: get-involved
1142 nav2: ml
1143 @@ -48,7 +48,7 @@ To unsubscribe from a list, send an empty email to:
1144 You will then recieve a unsubscription confirmation request (double opt-in) from the list manager, that you must reply to if you wish to be unsubscribed.
1145 </div>
1146
1147 -## Digest Lists
1148 +## Digest lists
1149
1150 All of our lists also have a corresponding digest list.
1151 Digest lists will mail a single email to you every couple of days, rather than individual emails for each post.
1152 @@ -64,13 +64,13 @@ These users may subscribe to the "nomail" option of each list:
1153 `listname+subscribe-nomail@l.g.o`<br>
1154 `listname+unsubscribe-nomail@l.g.o`
1155
1156 -## More Functions
1157 +## More functions
1158
1159 You can learn more about the capabilities of mlmmj by sending an empty mail to the following address:
1160
1161 `listname+help@l.g.o`
1162
1163 -## Moderated Lists
1164 +## Moderated lists
1165
1166 Very few of the Gentoo lists are moderated: only the `-announce` lists are fully moderatored.
1167 Additionally, some of our high-traffic lists have moderators in place for spam and unsubscribe requests (matching mail via regex).
1168 @@ -137,7 +137,7 @@ Choose just one list when sending a message.
1169
1170 If you need additional help beyond the above, please [file a bug](https://bugs.gentoo.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=Gentoo%20Infrastructure&version=unspecified&component=Mailing%20Lists&rep_platform=All&op_sys=Linux&priority=P2&bug_severity=normal&bug_status=NEW&alias=&bug_file_loc=https%3A%2F%2F&short_desc=&comment=&commentprivacy=0&keywords=&dependson=&blocked=&bit-25=1&maketemplate=Remember%20values%20as%20bookmarkable%20template&form_name=enter_bug&assigned_to=infra-bugs%40gentoo.org), or contact `listname+owner@l.g.o`.
1171
1172 -## Privacy policy & disclaimer
1173 +## Privacy policy and disclaimer
1174
1175 The mailing lists are public forums, except for lists explicitly otherwise.
1176 For lists explicitly marked private or restricted, all of the following except web archives are applicable.
1177
1178 diff --git a/get-started/about/index.html b/get-started/about/index.html
1179 index 86d5fa8..483e591 100644
1180 --- a/get-started/about/index.html
1181 +++ b/get-started/about/index.html
1182 @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@ title: 'About Gentoo'
1183 {% include hero-section/start class="abouthdr huge" %}
1184 <div class="row">
1185 <div class="col-md-4">
1186 - <img src="/assets/img/bg/larry.png" class="img-responsive" alt="Larry the cow, a bit unhappy">
1187 + <img src="/assets/img/bg/larry.png" class="img-responsive" alt="Larry the cow, a bit unhappy.">
1188 </div>
1189 <div class="col-md-8">
1190 Larry the Cow was a bit frustrated<br>&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;at the current state of Linux distributions…
1191 @@ -74,4 +74,4 @@ title: 'About Gentoo'
1192
1193 <p>
1194 Typing one command (<kbd>emerge -uD world</kbd>) will ensure that all the packages that <em>you</em> want on your system are updated automatically.
1195 -</p>
1196 \ No newline at end of file
1197 +</p>
1198
1199 diff --git a/get-started/index.html b/get-started/index.html
1200 index aa414ca..4dd4093 100644
1201 --- a/get-started/index.html
1202 +++ b/get-started/index.html
1203 @@ -3,8 +3,8 @@ nav1: get-started
1204 nav1-show: true
1205 nav1-weight: 5
1206
1207 -title: 'Getting Started with Gentoo Linux'
1208 -navtitle: 'Get Started'
1209 +title: 'Getting started with Gentoo'
1210 +navtitle: 'Get started'
1211 ---
1212
1213 <p class="lead">
1214 @@ -17,10 +17,10 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
1215 <div class="row">
1216 <div class="col-md-2 get-started-icon"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-power-off fa-5x"></span></div>
1217 <div class="col-md-10">
1218 - <h2 class="stick-top">Step 1: Boot a Live Environment</h2>
1219 - <p>We offer a variety of Live Environments that allow you to perform the installation.</p>
1220 + <h2 class="stick-top">Step 1: Boot a live environment</h2>
1221 + <p>We offer a variety of live environments that allow you to perform the installation.</p>
1222
1223 - <p>Choose between a lean console-only environment, a fully featured LiveDVD, or try the Gentoo-based SystemRescueCD which offers a mixture of both.</p>
1224 + <p>Choose between a lean console-only environment or a fully featured LiveDVD. Alternatively users are encouraged to try the Gentoo-based SystemRescueCD.</p>
1225 </div>
1226 </div>
1227 {% include hero-section/end %}
1228 @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
1229 <div class="row">
1230 <div class="col-md-2 get-started-icon"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-book fa-5x"></span></div>
1231 <div class="col-md-10">
1232 - <h2 class="stick-top">Step 2: Follow the Installation Instructions</h2>
1233 - <p>Gentoo provides you with detailed documentation that guides you through the installation process.</p>
1234 + <h2 class="stick-top">Step 2: Follow the installation instructions</h2>
1235 + <p>The Gentoo Handbook provides detailed documentation that guides you through the installation process.</p>
1236
1237 <p>There is no installation program&mdash;you're the installer. That way, you can apply all the customizations you desire.</p>
1238 </div>
1239 @@ -68,18 +68,18 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
1240 <h3><i class="fa fa-fw fa-cogs"></i> Contribute</h3>
1241 <p>
1242 There's always things to engineer, build, fix, and document.
1243 - You're invited to help shape Gentoo.
1244 + Consider this your formal invitation to help shape Gentoo!
1245 </p>
1246 </div>
1247 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
1248 <h3><i class="fa fa-fw fa-heart"></i> Donate</h3>
1249 <p>
1250 Your support is vital to keep us running.
1251 - Even little amounts help keep servers running.
1252 + Even little amounts help keep our servers online.
1253 </p>
1254 </div>
1255 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
1256 - <h3><i class="fa fa-fw fa-bullhorn"></i> Spread the Word</h3>
1257 + <h3><i class="fa fa-fw fa-bullhorn"></i> Spread the word</h3>
1258 <p>
1259 Happy with the system you built? Tell the world about it.
1260 </p>
1261 @@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
1262 </div>
1263 <div class="row">
1264 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
1265 - <a href="/get-involved/" class="btn btn-primary btn-block">Get Involved</a>
1266 + <a href="/get-involved/" class="btn btn-primary btn-block">Get involved</a>
1267 </div>
1268 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
1269 <a href="/get-involved/contribute/" type="button" class="btn btn-primary btn-block">What can I do?</a>
1270 @@ -97,4 +97,4 @@ navtitle: 'Get Started'
1271 </div>
1272 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-3">
1273 </div>
1274 -</div>
1275 \ No newline at end of file
1276 +</div>
1277
1278 diff --git a/get-started/philosophy/index.md b/get-started/philosophy/index.md
1279 index ee3d0f1..6c8d5dc 100644
1280 --- a/get-started/philosophy/index.md
1281 +++ b/get-started/philosophy/index.md
1282 @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ nav3-show: true
1283 nav3-weight: 1
1284 layout: page-nav3
1285
1286 -title: 'The Philosophy of Gentoo'
1287 +title: 'The philosophy of Gentoo'
1288 navtitle: 'Philosophy'
1289 ---
1290 Every user has work they need to do. The goal of Gentoo is to design tools and systems that allow a user to do that work as pleasantly and efficiently as possible, as they see fit. Our tools should be a joy to use, and should help the user to appreciate the richness of the Linux and free software community, and the flexibility of free software. This is only possible when the tool is designed to reflect and transmit the will of the user, and leave the possibilities open as to the final form of the raw materials (the source code.) If the tool forces the user to do things a particular way, then the tool is working against, rather than for, the user. We have all experienced situations where tools seem to be imposing their respective wills on us. This is backwards, and contrary to the Gentoo philosophy.
1291 @@ -17,4 +17,4 @@ Put another way, the Gentoo philosophy is to create better tools. When a tool is
1292 The goal of Gentoo is to strive to create near-ideal tools. Tools that can accommodate the needs of many different users all with divergent goals. Don't you love it when you find a tool that does exactly what you want to do? Doesn't it feel great? Our mission is to give that sensation to as many people as possible.
1293
1294 Daniel Robbins \\
1295 -Previous Chief Architect
1296 \ No newline at end of file
1297 +Previous Chief Architect
1298
1299 diff --git a/get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md b/get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md
1300 index 51796bd..c39ee7c 100644
1301 --- a/get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md
1302 +++ b/get-started/philosophy/social-contract.md
1303 @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ nav3-weight: 10
1304 layout: page-nav3
1305
1306 title: 'Gentoo Social Contract'
1307 -navtitle: 'Social Contract'
1308 +navtitle: 'Social contract'
1309 ---
1310 This social contract is intended to clearly describe the overall development policies and standards of the Gentoo project development team. Parts of this document have been derived from the [Debian Social Contract](https://www.debian.org/social_contract). It is generally very similar to it except that certain parts have been clarified and augmented while other parts deemed redundant have been removed. Comments are welcome. Please send them to our [gentoo-dev@l.g.o](mailto:gentoo-dev@l.g.o) mailing list.
1311
1312 @@ -25,7 +25,7 @@ If a product associated with an official Gentoo project does not satisfy these r
1313 An official list of Gentoo projects is listed under the Gentoo Metastructure.
1314 A Gentoo project does not need to produce a Gentoo operating system in order to be officially recognized.
1315
1316 -## Gentoo is and will remain Free Software
1317 +## Gentoo is and will remain free software
1318
1319 We will release our contributions to Gentoo as free software, metadata or documentation,
1320 under the GNU General Public License version 2 (or later, at our discretion) or the Creative Commons - Attribution / Share Alike version 2 (or later, at our discretion).
1321 @@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ Note: We are considering extending the above clause to require that all core Gen
1322 to a license approved by the OSI and Free Software Foundation (<a href="https://www.gnu.org/">FSF</a>).
1323 </div>
1324
1325 -## We will give back to the Free Software Community
1326 +## We will give back to the free software community
1327
1328 We will establish relationships with Free Software authors and collaborate with them when possible. We will submit bug-fixes, improvements, user requests, etc. to the "upstream" authors of software included in our system. We will also clearly document our contributions to Gentoo as well as any improvements or changes we make to external sources used by Gentoo (whether in the form of patches, "sed tweaks" or some other form). We acknowledge that our improvements and changes are much more meaningful to the larger Free Software community if they are clearly documented and explained, since not everyone has the time or ability to understand the literal changes contained in the patches or tweaks themselves.
1329
1330
1331 diff --git a/get-started/screenshots/index.html b/get-started/screenshots/index.html
1332 index 91e9dff..e294b00 100644
1333 --- a/get-started/screenshots/index.html
1334 +++ b/get-started/screenshots/index.html
1335 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
1336 ---
1337 -title: Gentoo Screenshots
1338 +title: Gentoo screenshots
1339 navtitle: Screenshots
1340
1341 nav1: get-started
1342 @@ -7,10 +7,10 @@ nav2: screenshots
1343 nav2-show: true
1344 nav2-weight: 30
1345 ---
1346 -<p class="lead">
1347 - As Gentoo doesn't come with a default GUI, we can't show you a generic Gentoo screenshot.
1348 - <br>
1349 - What you can find here instead are examples of awesome setups ran by our users.
1350 +<p class="lead stick-bottom">
1351 +Gentoo does not come with a default GUI so there is no such thing as a generic Gentoo screenshot.
1352 +<br />
1353 +Rendered below are examples of great looking graphical configurations. Each one was created by our wonderful community.
1354 </p>
1355
1356 <div class="row">
1357 @@ -68,4 +68,4 @@ nav2-weight: 30
1358
1359 <p>
1360 Looking for more? The Gentoo community on Google+ has a dedicated <a href="https://plus.google.com/communities/100146718762350759856/stream/09938b7e-4913-4bc5-bdd6-9635c4a1bf60">Screenshots</a> section.
1361 -</p>
1362 \ No newline at end of file
1363 +</p>
1364
1365 diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
1366 index 6ced905..7b98684 100644
1367 --- a/index.html
1368 +++ b/index.html
1369 @@ -42,11 +42,11 @@ meta: '<link rel="alternate" type="application/atom+xml" title="Gentoo Linux New
1370
1371 <div class="row">
1372 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
1373 - <h2>New packages <small>more at the <a href="https://packages.gentoo.org">Gentoo Packages database</a></small></h2>
1374 + <h2>New packages <small>more at the <a href="https://packages.gentoo.org">Gentoo packages database</a></small></h2>
1375 {% include frontpage/packages %}
1376 </div>
1377 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-6">
1378 - <h2>Fresh documentation <small>on the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/">Gentoo Wiki</a></small></h2>
1379 + <h2>Fresh documentation <small>on the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/">Gentoo wiki</a></small></h2>
1380 {% include frontpage/wiki %}
1381 </div>
1382 </div>
1383
1384 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/artwork/gentoo-logo.html b/inside-gentoo/artwork/gentoo-logo.html
1385 index bf0456d..af325fa 100644
1386 --- a/inside-gentoo/artwork/gentoo-logo.html
1387 +++ b/inside-gentoo/artwork/gentoo-logo.html
1388 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
1389 ---
1390 -title: Gentoo Logo
1391 +title: Gentoo logo
1392
1393 nav1: inside-gentoo
1394 nav2: artwork
1395 @@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
1396
1397 <p>
1398 This page contains the official Gentoo logo and word mark graphics.
1399 - For other unofficial graphical building blocks, see the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Artwork/Artwork">Artwork project</a> on our Wiki.
1400 + For other unofficial graphical building blocks, see the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Artwork/Artwork">Artwork project</a> on our wiki.
1401 </p>
1402
1403 <h2 id="downloads">Downloads</h2>
1404 @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
1405 <tr>
1406 <td><img src="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-logo.svg" alt="Gentoo logo"></td>
1407 <td>
1408 - <strong>Gentoo Logo</strong>
1409 + <strong>Gentoo logo</strong>
1410 </td>
1411 <td><a href="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-logo.svg" download>SVG</a></td>
1412 <td><a href="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-logo.eps" download>EPS</a></td>
1413 @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
1414 <tr>
1415 <td><img src="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-signet.svg" alt="Gentoo logo"></td>
1416 <td>
1417 - <strong>Gentoo Signet</strong>
1418 + <strong>Gentoo signet</strong>
1419 </td>
1420 <td><a href="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-signet.svg" download>SVG</a></td>
1421 <td><a href="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-signet.eps" download>EPS</a></td>
1422 @@ -56,7 +56,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
1423 <tr>
1424 <td><img src="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-typo.svg" alt="Gentoo logo"></td>
1425 <td>
1426 - <strong>Gentoo Word Mark</strong>
1427 + <strong>Gentoo word mark</strong>
1428 </td>
1429 <td><a href="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-typo.svg" download>SVG</a></td>
1430 <td><a href="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-typo.eps" download>EPS</a></td>
1431 @@ -65,9 +65,9 @@ layout: page-nav3
1432 <tr>
1433 <td><img src="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-horizontal.svg" alt="Gentoo logo"></td>
1434 <td>
1435 - <strong>Gentoo Logo (horizontal)</strong>
1436 + <strong>Gentoo logo (horizontal)</strong>
1437 <br>
1438 - only use when vertical version is not suitable
1439 + Only use when vertical version is not suitable.
1440 </td>
1441 <td><a href="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-horizontal.svg" download>SVG</a></td>
1442 <td><a href="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-horizontal.eps" download>EPS</a></td>
1443 @@ -76,9 +76,9 @@ layout: page-nav3
1444 <tr>
1445 <td class="img"><img src="/assets/img/logo/gentoo-3d-small.png" alt="Gentoo logo"></td>
1446 <td>
1447 - <strong>Classic Gentoo Logo</strong>
1448 + <strong>Classic Gentoo logo</strong>
1449 <br>
1450 - not available as vector graphic
1451 + Not available as vector graphic.
1452 </td>
1453 <td></td>
1454 <td></td>
1455
1456 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/artwork/index.html b/inside-gentoo/artwork/index.html
1457 index 1abe723..6991b2d 100644
1458 --- a/inside-gentoo/artwork/index.html
1459 +++ b/inside-gentoo/artwork/index.html
1460 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
1461 ---
1462 -title: Gentoo Artwork
1463 +title: Gentoo artwork
1464 navtitle: Artwork
1465
1466 nav1: inside-gentoo
1467 @@ -14,16 +14,16 @@ body_class: nav-align-h2
1468 ---
1469
1470 <p>
1471 - Here you can find <a href="#wallpapers">Wallpapers</a> and <a href="#badges">Badges</a> to brand your desktop or application.
1472 + Here you can find <a href="#wallpapers">wallpapers</a> and <a href="#badges">badges</a> to brand your desktop or application.
1473 </p>
1474
1475 <div class="alert alert-info">
1476 - <strong>Contribute Artwork</strong>
1477 + <strong>Contribute artwork</strong>
1478 <br>
1479 - Get creative and share your wallpapers and badges with the Gentoo Community!
1480 + Get creative and share your wallpapers and badges with the Gentoo community!
1481 <br>
1482 Please get in touch with our <a href="mailto:www@g.o" class="alert-link">web team</a> to get your graphics added.
1483 - Get community feedback before handing in your artwork on the <a href="https://forums.gentoo.org/" class="alert-link">Gentoo Forums</a>.
1484 + Get community feedback before handing in your artwork on the <a href="https://forums.gentoo.org/" class="alert-link">Gentoo forums</a>.
1485 </div>
1486
1487 <h2 id="wallpapers">Wallpapers</h2>
1488 @@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ body_class: nav-align-h2
1489 <h2 id="badges">Badges</h2>
1490
1491 <p>
1492 - <strong>Let the world know that you run on Gentoo Linux!</strong>
1493 + <strong>Let the world know that you run Gentoo Linux!</strong>
1494 </p>
1495
1496 <div class="alert alert-warning">
1497 @@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ body_class: nav-align-h2
1498 </a>
1499 </div>
1500 <div class="media-body">
1501 - <h4 class="media-heading">Web Badge 1</h4>
1502 + <h4 class="media-heading">Web badge 1</h4>
1503 <p>by Ryan Viljoen</p>
1504 </div>
1505 </div>
1506 @@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ body_class: nav-align-h2
1507 </a>
1508 </div>
1509 <div class="media-body">
1510 - <h4 class="media-heading">Web Badge 2</h4>
1511 + <h4 class="media-heading">Web badge 2</h4>
1512 <p>by m@o</p>
1513 </div>
1514 </div>
1515 @@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ body_class: nav-align-h2
1516 </a>
1517 </div>
1518 <div class="media-body">
1519 - <h4 class="media-heading">Web Badge 3</h4>
1520 + <h4 class="media-heading">Web badge 3</h4>
1521 <p>by wolven</p>
1522 </div>
1523 </div>
1524
1525 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/contact/index.html b/inside-gentoo/contact/index.html
1526 index ed4242d..442259e 100644
1527 --- a/inside-gentoo/contact/index.html
1528 +++ b/inside-gentoo/contact/index.html
1529 @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ title: Contact
1530 ---
1531
1532 <p class="lead">
1533 - "Gentoo" is many things, and our project is rather large. This page will help you get in touch with the right people.
1534 + "Gentoo" is many things; our project is rather large. This page will help you get in touch with the right people.
1535 </p>
1536
1537 <p>
1538 @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ title: Contact
1539 <a href="/support/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm">View support information</a>
1540 </div>
1541 </div>
1542 -
1543 +
1544 <div class="panel panel-default">
1545 <div class="panel-heading">
1546 <h3 class="panel-title" id="bug"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-bug"></span> I want to report an issue with a package that Gentoo provides</h3>
1547 @@ -81,7 +81,7 @@ title: Contact
1548 When you're ready to report the issue, head over to our Bugzilla, where you can file a bug after registering and logging in.
1549 <br><br>
1550 <strong>Security issues</strong><br>
1551 - If you would like to report a vulnerability in one of our packages, please get in touch with our <a href="/support/security/#contact">Security team</a>.
1552 + If you would like to report a vulnerability in one of our packages, please get in touch with our <a href="/support/security/#contact">Security</a>.
1553 </div>
1554 <div class="panel-footer text-right">
1555 <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org/" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm">Go to Bugzilla</a>
1556 @@ -95,8 +95,8 @@ title: Contact
1557 <div class="panel-body">
1558 Depending on the type of content you have found to be wrong, there are different steps to take:
1559 <br><br>
1560 - <strong>The content is part of the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/">Wiki</a> (<tt>wiki.gentoo.org</tt>)</strong><br>
1561 - In this case, please sign up to the Wiki and try to make the changes yourself
1562 + <strong>The content is part of the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/">wiki</a> (<tt>wiki.gentoo.org</tt>)</strong><br>
1563 + In this case, please sign up to the wiki and try to make the changes yourself
1564 <br>
1565 If you can't because you are not authorized, or are unsure about your change, please add a comment to the discussion page of the respective article.
1566 <br><br>
1567 @@ -110,13 +110,13 @@ title: Contact
1568 <h3 class="panel-title" id="infra"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-bomb"></span> Something is wrong with a Gentoo server or service that operates <code>*.gentoo.org</code></h3>
1569 </div>
1570 <div class="panel-body">
1571 - The Gentoo Infrastructure team maintains our services.
1572 + The Gentoo Infrastructure project maintains services.
1573 <br><br>
1574 Before contacting them, please check our <a href="https://infra-status.gentoo.org">Infrastructure Status</a> page.
1575 If the issue you would like to report is already listed there; or the service in question marked as being down or in maintenance, you don't need to send another message, they are already aware.
1576 </div>
1577 <div class="panel-footer text-right">
1578 - <a href="mailto:infra@g.o" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm">Contact Infrastructure Team</a>
1579 + <a href="mailto:infra@g.o" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm">Contact Infrastructure</a>
1580 </div>
1581 </div>
1582
1583 @@ -139,11 +139,11 @@ title: Contact
1584 </div>
1585 <div class="panel-body">
1586 <div class="alert alert-danger">
1587 - The PR team does <strong>not provide user support or troubleshooting advice.</strong><br>
1588 + The PR project does <strong>not provide user support or troubleshooting advice.</strong><br>
1589 Please do not contact them with such inquiries and refer to our <a href="/support/">support information</a> instead.
1590 </div>
1591 <p>
1592 - Please get in touch with our Public Relations team.
1593 + Please get in touch with our Public Relations project.
1594 </p>
1595 </div>
1596 <div class="panel-footer text-right">
1597 @@ -156,7 +156,7 @@ title: Contact
1598 <h3 class="panel-title" id="mail"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-envelope-o"></span> Where do I send postal mail for the distribution?</h3>
1599 </div>
1600 <div class="panel-body">
1601 - Please get in touch with our Public Relations team <strong class="text-danger">before posting anything.</strong>
1602 + Please get in touch with our Public Relations project <strong class="text-danger">before posting anything.</strong>
1603 They will provide you with the correct address depending on the matter.
1604 </div>
1605 <div class="panel-footer text-right">
1606
1607 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/developers/herds.html b/inside-gentoo/developers/herds.html
1608 index 31a118d..f19f8f5 100644
1609 --- a/inside-gentoo/developers/herds.html
1610 +++ b/inside-gentoo/developers/herds.html
1611 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
1612 ---
1613 -title: 'Gentoo Package Herds'
1614 +title: 'Gentoo herds'
1615 navtitle: 'Herds'
1616
1617 nav1: inside-gentoo
1618
1619 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/developers/index.html b/inside-gentoo/developers/index.html
1620 index 8321759..7e61ae0 100644
1621 --- a/inside-gentoo/developers/index.html
1622 +++ b/inside-gentoo/developers/index.html
1623 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
1624 ---
1625 -title: 'Current Gentoo Developers'
1626 +title: 'Current Gentoo developers'
1627 navtitle: 'Developers'
1628
1629 nav1: inside-gentoo
1630 @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
1631 ---
1632
1633 <p class="lead">
1634 - This Is Gentoo! Well, at least the "official" developers. <a href="/get-involved/become-developer/">Wanna join?</a>
1635 + This is Gentoo! Well, at least the "official" developers. <a href="/get-involved/become-developer/">Wanna join?</a>
1636 </p>
1637
1638 <p>
1639 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
1640 <table class="table table-striped">
1641 <tr>
1642 <th>Username</th>
1643 - <th>GPG Key(s)</th>
1644 + <th>GPG key(s)</th>
1645 <th>Location</th>
1646 <th>Roles</th>
1647 </tr>
1648 @@ -52,4 +52,4 @@ layout: page-nav3
1649 <td>{{ entry[1].roles | xml_escape }}</td>
1650 </tr>
1651 {% endfor %}
1652 -</table>
1653 \ No newline at end of file
1654 +</table>
1655
1656 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/developers/map.html b/inside-gentoo/developers/map.html
1657 index 322bfb8..4d18ba0 100644
1658 --- a/inside-gentoo/developers/map.html
1659 +++ b/inside-gentoo/developers/map.html
1660 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
1661 ---
1662 -title: 'Gentoo Developers Map'
1663 -navtitle: 'Developer Map'
1664 +title: 'Gentoo Developer map'
1665 +navtitle: 'Developer map'
1666
1667 nav1: inside-gentoo
1668
1669 @@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ extrajs: [leaflet.js, devmap.js]
1670 <noscript>
1671 <div class="alert alert-danger">
1672 <h2 class="stick-top"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-ban"></i> Map display requires JavaScript</h2>
1673 - Please enable JavaScript support in your browser to view the Developer Map.
1674 + Please enable JavaScript support in your browser to view the developer map.
1675 </div>
1676 <style type="text/css">#devlist { display: none; }</style>
1677 </noscript>
1678 @@ -52,4 +52,4 @@ extrajs: [leaflet.js, devmap.js]
1679 {% endif %}{% endfor %}
1680 </table>
1681 </div>
1682 -</div>
1683 \ No newline at end of file
1684 +</div>
1685
1686 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/developers/retired-developers.html b/inside-gentoo/developers/retired-developers.html
1687 index 86444cd..70c72c9 100644
1688 --- a/inside-gentoo/developers/retired-developers.html
1689 +++ b/inside-gentoo/developers/retired-developers.html
1690 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
1691 ---
1692 -title: 'Retired Gentoo Developers'
1693 -navtitle: 'Retired Developers'
1694 +title: 'Retired Gentoo developers'
1695 +navtitle: 'Retired developers'
1696
1697 nav1: inside-gentoo
1698
1699 @@ -28,4 +28,4 @@ layout: page-nav3
1700 <td>{{ entry[1].roles }}</td>
1701 </tr>
1702 {% endfor %}
1703 -</table>
1704 \ No newline at end of file
1705 +</table>
1706
1707 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/developers/unavailable-developers.html b/inside-gentoo/developers/unavailable-developers.html
1708 index 12ead69..364c58a 100644
1709 --- a/inside-gentoo/developers/unavailable-developers.html
1710 +++ b/inside-gentoo/developers/unavailable-developers.html
1711 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
1712 ---
1713 -title: 'Unavailable Gentoo Developers (devaway)'
1714 -navtitle: 'Unavailable Developers'
1715 +title: 'Unavailable Gentoo developers (devaway)'
1716 +navtitle: 'Unavailable developers'
1717
1718 nav1: inside-gentoo
1719
1720 @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
1721 <table class="table table-striped">
1722 <tr>
1723 <th>Developer</th>
1724 - <th>Message and Timestamp</th>
1725 + <th>Message and timestamp</th>
1726 </tr>
1727 {% for entry in site.data.devaway %}
1728 <tr>
1729 @@ -29,4 +29,4 @@ layout: page-nav3
1730 <td>{{ entry[1] | strip_html }}</td>
1731 </tr>
1732 {% endfor %}
1733 -</table>
1734 \ No newline at end of file
1735 +</table>
1736
1737 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/foundation/index.md b/inside-gentoo/foundation/index.md
1738 index b540c0e..ce5830e 100644
1739 --- a/inside-gentoo/foundation/index.md
1740 +++ b/inside-gentoo/foundation/index.md
1741 @@ -28,17 +28,17 @@ as the developer can now focus his attention completely at the community and his
1742
1743 The bureaucracy we mention includes:
1744
1745 -* financial caretaking: accepting donations, managing financial assets and investing in required resources or entities that benefit the Gentoo development
1746 -* juridical protection: backing up the licenses Gentoo uses, maintaining the copyrights on Gentoo's software, documentation and other assets and protecting Gentoo's intellectual property
1747 -* Gentoo caretaking: protecting the community by requiring total adherence to the Gentoo Social Contract
1748 +* Financial caretaking: accepting donations, managing financial assets and investing in required resources or entities that benefit the Gentoo development.
1749 +* Juridical protection: backing up the licenses Gentoo uses, maintaining the copyrights on Gentoo's software, documentation and other assets and protecting Gentoo's intellectual property.
1750 +* Gentoo caretaking: protecting the community by requiring total adherence to the Gentoo Social Contract.
1751
1752 In other words, the Gentoo Foundation will:
1753
1754 -* protect the use of the Gentoo trademark and logo
1755 -* protect the developed code, documentation, artwork and other material through copyright and licenses
1756 -* sponsor Gentoo-related conferences and technical development resources
1757 -* oversee development so it adheres to the social contract
1758 +* Protect the use of the Gentoo trademark and logo.
1759 +* Protect the developed code, documentation, artwork and other material through copyright and licenses.
1760 +* Sponsor Gentoo-related conferences and technical development resources.
1761 +* Oversee development so it adheres to the social contract.
1762
1763 ## Find out more
1764
1765 -The Gentoo Foundation maintains a [presence on the Gentoo Wiki](https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Foundation:Main_Page) where you can learn more.
1766 \ No newline at end of file
1767 +The Gentoo Foundation maintains a [presence on the Gentoo Wiki](https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Foundation:Main_Page) where you can learn more.
1768
1769 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/foundation/name-logo-guidelines.md b/inside-gentoo/foundation/name-logo-guidelines.md
1770 index c18b6c1..c82865c 100644
1771 --- a/inside-gentoo/foundation/name-logo-guidelines.md
1772 +++ b/inside-gentoo/foundation/name-logo-guidelines.md
1773 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
1774 ---
1775 -title: 'Gentoo Name and Logo Usage Guidelines'
1776 -navtitle: 'Name and Logo Guidelines'
1777 +title: 'Gentoo name and logo usage guidelines'
1778 +navtitle: 'Name and logo guidelines'
1779 nav1: inside-gentoo
1780 nav2: foundation
1781 nav3-show: true
1782 @@ -71,20 +71,20 @@ section.
1783 You may incorporate the Gentoo name into the name of any group or event,
1784 provided that:
1785
1786 -* the purpose of the group or event is to educate, provide networking
1787 +* The purpose of the group or event is to educate, provide networking
1788 opportunities, or provide a social outlet for Gentoo users;
1789 -* the name of the group or event is formed by combining the name "Gentoo" with
1790 +* The name of the group or event is formed by combining the name "Gentoo" with
1791 other words that qualify the geographical location, intended audience, or the
1792 activities of the group or event.
1793 -* if the group or event requires fees for membership of attendance, it must be
1794 +* If the group or event requires fees for membership of attendance, it must be
1795 made clear at the time the fee is paid what income organizers will be
1796 deriving from the event, and what proportion of event profits, if any, will
1797 be returned to the Gentoo Foundation, Inc. as a donation.
1798 -* the website for the group or event does not imply that it is official or
1799 +* The website for the group or event does not imply that it is official or
1800 otherwise endorsed by the Gentoo Foundation, Inc.
1801 -* the group or event agrees to adhere to the
1802 +* The group or event agrees to adhere to the
1803 [Gentoo Community Code of Conduct](https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Council/Code_of_conduct).
1804 -* the group or event also adopts a specific Code of Conduct governing the
1805 +* The group or event also adopts a specific Code of Conduct governing the
1806 behavior of participants.
1807
1808 A group or event may use a logo that incorporates the Gentoo logo by adding a
1809 @@ -96,11 +96,11 @@ of the group of event.
1810
1811 You may produce merchandise displaying the Gentoo name or logo, provided that:
1812
1813 -* artwork to be printed on merchandise has been formally approved by the Gentoo
1814 +* Artwork to be printed on merchandise has been formally approved by the Gentoo
1815 Foundation, Inc.
1816 -* the products on which the artwork is to appear has been formally approved by
1817 +* The products on which the artwork is to appear has been formally approved by
1818 the Gentoo Foundation, Inc.
1819 -* if the product is to be sold, the individual or organization producing the
1820 +* If the product is to be sold, the individual or organization producing the
1821 product must make a clear statement declaring what proportion of the sale
1822 price will be retained by the organizers, and what proportion, if any, will be
1823 contributed back to the Gentoo Foundation, Inc.
1824 @@ -117,12 +117,12 @@ ratio or otherwise distort the shape.
1825 You may incorporate the Gentoo name into any website or product whose purpose is
1826 to organize, educate or inform the Gentoo community, provided that:
1827
1828 -* the website or product does not use the Gentoo logo or mimic the official
1829 +* The website or product does not use the Gentoo logo or mimic the official
1830 sites in its design, except as provided for by earlier sections in this
1831 license;
1832 -* the website or product does not imply that it is official or otherwise
1833 +* The website or product does not imply that it is official or otherwise
1834 endorsed by the Gentoo Foundation, Inc.
1835 -* if a fee is to be charged for the product, or for access to any or all of the
1836 +* If a fee is to be charged for the product, or for access to any or all of the
1837 material on the website, a clear statement must exist declaring what
1838 proportion of those fees will be retained by the authors, and what proportion,
1839 if any, will be contributed back to the Gentoo Foundation, Inc. A link to this
1840 @@ -141,12 +141,12 @@ related.
1841
1842 You may use the Gentoo name in any Internet domain or subdomain:
1843
1844 -* for any group or event meeting the requirements of the section on [Groups and
1845 +* For any group or event meeting the requirements of the section on [Groups and
1846 events](#groups-and-events).
1847 -* any merchandise provider meeting the requirements of the section on
1848 +* Any merchandise provider meeting the requirements of the section on
1849 [Merchandise](#merchandise), provided the products sold under that domain are
1850 exclusively Gentoo merchandise
1851 -* any website or product meeting the requirements of the section on [Products and
1852 +* Any website or product meeting the requirements of the section on [Products and
1853 services serving the community](#products-and-services-serving-the-community).
1854
1855 ### Uses outside of this license
1856 @@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ project, Gentoo Foundation, Inc., or Gentoo community.
1857 The Gentoo Foundation, Inc. reserves the right to determine if a usage of the
1858 Gentoo trademark meets the requirements and standards of this license.
1859
1860 -## Frequently Asked Questions
1861 +## Frequently asked questions
1862
1863 ### What about earlier name/logo usage guidelines?
1864
1865
1866 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/index.html b/inside-gentoo/index.html
1867 index 83687f9..94c2647 100644
1868 --- a/inside-gentoo/index.html
1869 +++ b/inside-gentoo/index.html
1870 @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ nav1-weight: 10
1871 nav2: inside-gentoo-main
1872 ---
1873 <p class="lead">
1874 - Gentoo offers lots of things for you to explore:
1875 + Gentoo has lots of areas to explore:
1876 </p>
1877
1878 <div class="row">
1879 @@ -15,19 +15,19 @@ nav2: inside-gentoo-main
1880 <div class="list-group">
1881 <a href="developers/" class="list-group-item">
1882 <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-user"></i> Developers</h4>
1883 - <p class="list-group-item-text">Who we are, what we do and where we are.</p>
1884 + <p class="list-group-item-text">Who we are, what we do, and where we are found.</p>
1885 </a>
1886 <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Gentoo" class="list-group-item">
1887 <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-briefcase"></i> Projects</h4>
1888 - <p class="list-group-item-text">We collaborate in projects. Check the resources, maybe there's something for you to contribute to.</p>
1889 + <p class="list-group-item-text">We collaborate in projects. Check the resources, maybe there's something for you to contribute.</p>
1890 </a>
1891 <a href="artwork/" class="list-group-item">
1892 <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-image"></i> Artwork</h4>
1893 - <p class="list-group-item-text">Check out artwork for your system. Features lots of Larry the Cow, promised.</p>
1894 + <p class="list-group-item-text">Check out artwork for your system. Features lots of Larry the Cow (we promise)!</p>
1895 </a>
1896 <a href="foundation/" class="list-group-item">
1897 <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-institution"></i> Gentoo Foundation</h4>
1898 - <p class="list-group-item-text">The legal and financial base of our project.</p>
1899 + <p class="list-group-item-text">The legal and financial base of the Gentoo project.</p>
1900 </a>
1901 <a href="sponsors/" class="list-group-item">
1902 <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-heart"></i> Sponsors</h4>
1903 @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ nav2: inside-gentoo-main
1904 </a>
1905 <a href="stores/" class="list-group-item">
1906 <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-shopping-cart"></i> Stores</h4>
1907 - <p class="list-group-item-text">Get your Gentoo swag and installation media here.</p>
1908 + <p class="list-group-item-text">Get Gentoo swag and installation media here.</p>
1909 </a>
1910 <a href="contact/" class="list-group-item">
1911 <h4 class="list-group-item-heading"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-send"></i> Contact</h4>
1912 @@ -43,4 +43,4 @@ nav2: inside-gentoo-main
1913 </a>
1914 </div>
1915 </div>
1916 -</div>
1917 \ No newline at end of file
1918 +</div>
1919
1920 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/sponsors/former-sponsors.html b/inside-gentoo/sponsors/former-sponsors.html
1921 index e51157c..3f95817 100644
1922 --- a/inside-gentoo/sponsors/former-sponsors.html
1923 +++ b/inside-gentoo/sponsors/former-sponsors.html
1924 @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
1925 ---
1926 nav1: inside-gentoo
1927 nav2: sponsors
1928 -title: Former Sponsors
1929 +title: Former sponsors
1930 ---
1931
1932 <p>
1933 @@ -18,4 +18,4 @@ title: Former Sponsors
1934
1935 {% for sponsor in site.data.sponsors.former %}
1936 {% include partials/sponsor.html %}
1937 -{% endfor %}
1938 \ No newline at end of file
1939 +{% endfor %}
1940
1941 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/sponsors/index.html b/inside-gentoo/sponsors/index.html
1942 index e94854c..d770c3b 100644
1943 --- a/inside-gentoo/sponsors/index.html
1944 +++ b/inside-gentoo/sponsors/index.html
1945 @@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ title: Sponsors
1946 {% include partials/sponsor.html %}
1947 {% endfor %}
1948
1949 -<h2>Former Sponsors</h2>
1950 +<h2>Former sponsors</h2>
1951 <p>
1952 Gentoo would like to extend a special thanks to all of our past sponsors.
1953 They are listed on a <a href="former-sponsors.html">separate page</a>.
1954 @@ -42,8 +42,8 @@ title: Sponsors
1955 Some mirrors are provided by individuals, others by companies. You can find a complete listing on our Gentoo mirrors page.
1956 </p>
1957
1958 -<h2>Anonymous Sponsors</h2>
1959 +<h2>Anonymous sponsors</h2>
1960 <p>
1961 Several other companies and organizations provide services and assistance to the Gentoo project, but have expressed a desire to remain anonymous.
1962 We would like to thank those sponsors for their support of Gentoo.
1963 -</p>
1964 \ No newline at end of file
1965 +</p>
1966
1967 diff --git a/inside-gentoo/stores/index.md b/inside-gentoo/stores/index.md
1968 index fc9a192..687bc18 100644
1969 --- a/inside-gentoo/stores/index.md
1970 +++ b/inside-gentoo/stores/index.md
1971 @@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ This page lists web stores where you can get Gentoo swag.
1972
1973 Or, if you simply don't have the ability to download the large DVD or CD images, then you may wish to purchase a Gentoo DVD or CD.
1974
1975 -## Approved Vendors
1976 +## Approved vendors
1977
1978 Gentoo merchanise may be purchased from the following vendors who have been licensed to use the
1979 Gentoo Logo by either the [Gentoo Foundation Inc](https://foundation.gentoo.org) (in the USA) or
1980 @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ Approved Vendors make a small contribution to Gentoo from sales of Gentoo relate
1981
1982 ### Americas
1983
1984 -* [Offical Gentoo Cafepress Store](http://www.cafepress.com/officialgentoo/) - Clothing and schwag. Located in the USA.
1985 +* [Offical Gentoo Cafepress store](http://www.cafepress.com/officialgentoo/) - Clothing and schwag. Located in the USA.
1986 * [Techiant, LLC](https://www.case-badges.com/gentoo-logo-3d-domed-computer-case-badges-p-212.html) - Case badges (stickers). Located in the USA
1987 * [Stickermule (by tecknicaltom)](https://www.stickermule.com/user/1070792095/stickers) - Case badges (stickers). Located in the USA.
1988 * [Stormfront Gentoo Section](https://www.jbox.ca/product-category/computers-tablets/software/linux-cds-dvds/gentoo-cds-dvds/) - DVDs. Located in Canada.
1989 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Approved Vendors make a small contribution to Gentoo from sales of Gentoo relate
1990
1991 ### Europe
1992
1993 -* [Offical Friends of Gentoo e.V Store](https://22258.spreadshirt.net/de/DE/Shop) - Tee shirts, keychains, and mugs. Located in Germany.
1994 +* [Offical Friends of Gentoo e.V store](https://22258.spreadshirt.net/de/DE/Shop) - Tee shirts, keychains, and mugs. Located in Germany.
1995 * [LinuxPusher](http://www.linuxpusher.com/distributions/Gentoo-Linux) - Stickers, keychains, and mugs. Located in Denmark.
1996
1997 If you buy something from a licenced vendor and you like it, tell all your friends.
1998 @@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ If you buy something from a licenced vendor and you like it, tell all your frien
1999 If you have problems with quality or the vendor, please tell [us](mailto:trustees@g.o) and the vendor.
2000 We do not undertake to resolve individual issues but we take the quality of goods bearing our logo very seriously indeed.
2001
2002 -## Unlicensed Vendors
2003 +## Unlicensed vendors
2004
2005 If you would like a listing here, please email the [trustees](mailto:trustees@g.o).
2006 A listing on this page is included in the [license](/inside-gentoo/foundation/name-logo-guidelines.html).
2007
2008 diff --git a/news/index.html b/news/index.html
2009 index 094cfbb..7c5f343 100644
2010 --- a/news/index.html
2011 +++ b/news/index.html
2012 @@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ navtitle: 'News'
2013 nav1: home
2014 nav2: news
2015 nav2-show: true
2016 -meta: '<link rel="alternate" type="application/atom+xml" title="Gentoo Linux News" href="/feeds/news.xml">'
2017 +meta: '<link rel="alternate" type="application/atom+xml" title="Gentoo Linux news" href="/feeds/news.xml">'
2018 ---
2019
2020 {% for post in site.posts %}
2021
2022 diff --git a/search/archives-gentoo-org.xml b/search/archives-gentoo-org.xml
2023 index 607d6c8..1f239ba 100644
2024 --- a/search/archives-gentoo-org.xml
2025 +++ b/search/archives-gentoo-org.xml
2026 @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
2027 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
2028 <OpenSearchDescription xmlns="http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearch/1.1/"
2029 xmlns:moz="http://www.mozilla.org/2006/browser/search/">
2030 - <ShortName>Gentoo List Archives</ShortName>
2031 - <Description>Search archives.gentoo.org via Google</Description>
2032 + <ShortName>Gentoo list archives</ShortName>
2033 + <Description>Search archives.gentoo.org (via Google).</Description>
2034 <Image height="16" width="16" type="image/x-icon">http://www.gentoo.org/favicon.ico</Image>
2035 <Url type="text/html" template="http://www.google.com/search?q={searchTerms}+site%3Aarchives.gentoo.org"/>
2036 -</OpenSearchDescription>
2037 \ No newline at end of file
2038 +</OpenSearchDescription>
2039
2040 diff --git a/search/bugs-gentoo-org.xml b/search/bugs-gentoo-org.xml
2041 index ba2ab4e..7caa086 100644
2042 --- a/search/bugs-gentoo-org.xml
2043 +++ b/search/bugs-gentoo-org.xml
2044 @@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
2045 <OpenSearchDescription xmlns="http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearch/1.1/"
2046 xmlns:moz="http://www.mozilla.org/2006/browser/search/">
2047 <ShortName>Gentoo Bugzilla</ShortName>
2048 - <Description>Gentoo's Official Bugzilla</Description>
2049 + <Description>Gentoo's official Bugzilla</Description>
2050 <Image height="16" width="16" type="image/x-icon">http://www.gentoo.org/search/g-bugs.ico</Image>
2051 <Url type="text/html" template="http://bugs.gentoo.org/buglist.cgi?bug_status=UNCONFIRMED&amp;bug_status=NEW&amp;bug_status=ASSIGNED&amp;bug_status=REOPENED&amp;emailtype1=substring&amp;emailassigned_to1=1&amp;emailtype2=substring&amp;emailreporter2=1&amp;bugidtype=include&amp;chfieldto=Now&amp;short_desc={searchTerms}&amp;short_desc_type=substring&amp;long_desc_type=substring&amp;bug_file_loc_type=substring&amp;status_whiteboard_type=substring&amp;keywords_type=anywords&amp;field0-0-0=noop&amp;type0-0-0=noop&amp;cmdtype=doit&amp;order=Reuse+same+sort+as+last+time&amp;sourceid=Mozilla-search"/>
2052 -</OpenSearchDescription>
2053 \ No newline at end of file
2054 +</OpenSearchDescription>
2055
2056 diff --git a/search/forums-gentoo-org.xml b/search/forums-gentoo-org.xml
2057 index bb9dc4a..9e36209 100644
2058 --- a/search/forums-gentoo-org.xml
2059 +++ b/search/forums-gentoo-org.xml
2060 @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
2061 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
2062 <OpenSearchDescription xmlns="http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearch/1.1/"
2063 xmlns:moz="http://www.mozilla.org/2006/browser/search/">
2064 - <ShortName>Gentoo Forums</ShortName>
2065 - <Description>Gentoo's Official Forums</Description>
2066 + <ShortName>Gentoo forums</ShortName>
2067 + <Description>Gentoo's official forums.</Description>
2068 <Image height="16" width="16" type="image/x-icon">http://www.gentoo.org/search/g-forums.ico</Image>
2069 <Url type="text/html" template="http://forums.gentoo.org/search.php?mode=results&amp;show_results=topics&amp;search_keywords={searchTerms}"/>
2070 -</OpenSearchDescription>
2071 \ No newline at end of file
2072 +</OpenSearchDescription>
2073
2074 diff --git a/search/packages-gentoo-org.xml b/search/packages-gentoo-org.xml
2075 index 5b3d0ba..466c5b3 100644
2076 --- a/search/packages-gentoo-org.xml
2077 +++ b/search/packages-gentoo-org.xml
2078 @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
2079 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
2080 <OpenSearchDescription xmlns="http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearch/1.1/"
2081 xmlns:moz="http://www.mozilla.org/2006/browser/search/">
2082 - <ShortName>Gentoo Packages</ShortName>
2083 + <ShortName>Gentoo packages</ShortName>
2084 <Description>Search packages.gentoo.org</Description>
2085 <Image height="16" width="16" type="image/x-icon">http://www.gentoo.org/search/g-packages.ico</Image>
2086 <Url type="text/html" template="https://packages.gentoo.org/packages/search?q={searchTerms}"/>
2087
2088 diff --git a/search/www-gentoo-org.xml b/search/www-gentoo-org.xml
2089 index ac55593..5ba7fdb 100644
2090 --- a/search/www-gentoo-org.xml
2091 +++ b/search/www-gentoo-org.xml
2092 @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
2093 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
2094 <OpenSearchDescription xmlns="http://a9.com/-/spec/opensearch/1.1/"
2095 xmlns:moz="http://www.mozilla.org/2006/browser/search/">
2096 - <ShortName>Gentoo Website</ShortName>
2097 - <Description>Search www.gentoo.org via Google</Description>
2098 + <ShortName>Gentoo website</ShortName>
2099 + <Description>Search www.gentoo.org (via Google).</Description>
2100 <Image height="16" width="16" type="image/x-icon">http://www.gentoo.org/favicon.ico</Image>
2101 <Url type="text/html" template="http://www.google.com/search?q={searchTerms}+site%3Awww.gentoo.org"/>
2102 -</OpenSearchDescription>
2103 \ No newline at end of file
2104 +</OpenSearchDescription>
2105
2106 diff --git a/support/documentation/index.html b/support/documentation/index.html
2107 index 2eae34f..1f7fc31 100644
2108 --- a/support/documentation/index.html
2109 +++ b/support/documentation/index.html
2110 @@ -19,14 +19,14 @@ title: 'Documentation'
2111 </div>
2112
2113 <p>
2114 - Most of our documentation is available on the <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org">Gentoo Wiki</a>:
2115 + Most of our documentation is available on the <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org">Gentoo wiki</a>:
2116 </p>
2117
2118 <div class="row">
2119 <div class="col-xs-12 col-md-8 col-md-offset-2">
2120 <div class="panel panel-default">
2121 <div class="panel-heading">
2122 - <h3 class="panel-title">Finding Documentation on the <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org">Gentoo Wiki</a></h3>
2123 + <h3 class="panel-title">Finding documentation on the <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org">Gentoo wiki</a></h3>
2124 </div>
2125 <div class="panel-body">
2126 If you know what you are looking for, you can simply search for one or more keywords:
2127 @@ -41,32 +41,29 @@ title: 'Documentation'
2128 </form>
2129
2130 <br>
2131 - Or, browse the Wiki contents using these categories:
2132 + Or, browse the wiki contents using these categories:
2133 <br><br>
2134
2135 <div class="list-group" style="font-size: 125%;">
2136 - <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Core_system" title="Category:Core system" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-terminal"></i> Core System</a>
2137 + <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Core_system" title="Category:Core system" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-terminal"></i> Core system</a>
2138 <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Software" title="Category:Software" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-floppy-o"></i> Software</a>
2139 <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Hardware" title="Category:Hardware" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-print"></i> Hardware</a>
2140 <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Desktop" title="Category:Desktop" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-desktop"></i> Desktop</a>
2141 - <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Server_and_Security" title="Category:Server and Security" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-database"></i> Server and Security</a>
2142 - <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Project_and_Community" title="Category:Project and Community" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-institution"></i> Project and Community</a>
2143 + <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Server_and_Security" title="Category:Server and Security" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-database"></i> Server and security</a>
2144 + <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Category:Project_and_Community" title="Category:Project and Community" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-institution"></i> Project and community</a>
2145 </div>
2146 -
2147 - <strong>Did you know?</strong>
2148 - Our documentation team maintains a list of <a href="//wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Documentation/Overview">featured Wiki articles</a> that are worth a read.
2149 </div>
2150 </div>
2151 </div>
2152 </div>
2153
2154 -<h2>Developer Documentation</h2>
2155 +<h2>Developer documentation</h2>
2156
2157 <p>
2158 - In addition to the documentation available on the Wiki, we also offer documentation resources geared towards Gentoo development:
2159 + In addition to the documentation available on the wiki, we also offer documentation resources geared towards Gentoo development:
2160 </p>
2161
2162 <ul>
2163 - <li><a href="https://devmanual.gentoo.org/">Gentoo Development Guide</a></li>
2164 - <li><a href="https://devmanual.gentoo.org/eclass-reference/index.html">eclass Reference</a></li>
2165 -</ul>
2166 \ No newline at end of file
2167 + <li><a href="https://devmanual.gentoo.org/">Gentoo Development Guide</a> (a.k.a Devmanual).</li>
2168 + <li><a href="https://devmanual.gentoo.org/eclass-reference/index.html">Online eclass reference</a>.</li>
2169 +</ul>
2170
2171 diff --git a/support/index.html b/support/index.html
2172 index 4e78445..60859ce 100644
2173 --- a/support/index.html
2174 +++ b/support/index.html
2175 @@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ title: 'Support'
2176 <br>
2177 <div class="panel panel-default">
2178 <div class="panel-heading">
2179 - <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-life-buoy"></span> Getting Help with your Gentoo System</h3>
2180 + <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-life-buoy"></span> Getting help with Gentoo</h3>
2181 </div>
2182 <div class="panel-body">
2183 <p>
2184 @@ -19,11 +19,11 @@ title: 'Support'
2185 We advise you to seek answers to your support questions in the following documentation resources and support venues:
2186 </p>
2187 <div class="list-group large">
2188 - <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/FAQ" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-question-circle"></i> Frequently Asked Questions</a>
2189 + <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/FAQ" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-question-circle"></i> Frequently asked questions</a>
2190 <a href="/support/documentation/" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-book"></i> Documentation</a>
2191 - <a href="/get-involved/irc-channels/" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> IRC Channels</a>
2192 + <a href="/get-involved/irc-channels/" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-comments-o"></i> IRC channels</a>
2193 <a href="https://forums.gentoo.org/" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-users"></i> Forums</a>
2194 - <a href="/get-involved/mailing-lists/" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-inbox"></i> Mailing Lists</a>
2195 + <a href="/get-involved/mailing-lists/" class="list-group-item"><i class="fa fa-fw fa-inbox"></i> Mailing lists</a>
2196 </div>
2197
2198 Many Gentoo developers frequently visit those community channels and try their best to contribute to the ongoing discussions and questions.
2199 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ title: 'Support'
2200
2201 <div class="panel panel-default">
2202 <div class="panel-heading">
2203 - <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-laptop"></span> Hardware Requirements</h3>
2204 + <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-laptop"></span> Hardware requirements</h3>
2205 </div>
2206 <div class="panel-body">
2207 The hardware requirements for each architecture are placed in our <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Handbook:Main_Page">Gentoo Handbook</a>,
2208 @@ -42,7 +42,7 @@ title: 'Support'
2209
2210 <div class="panel panel-default">
2211 <div class="panel-heading">
2212 - <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-bug"></span> Reporting Bugs</h3>
2213 + <h3 class="panel-title"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-bug"></span> Reporting bugs</h3>
2214 </div>
2215 <div class="panel-body">
2216 <p>
2217
2218 diff --git a/support/news-items/index.html b/support/news-items/index.html
2219 index 5cf8701..06527c6 100644
2220 --- a/support/news-items/index.html
2221 +++ b/support/news-items/index.html
2222 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
2223 ---
2224 -title: 'Repository News Items'
2225 -navtitle: 'News Items'
2226 +title: 'Repository news items'
2227 +navtitle: 'News items'
2228
2229 nav1: support
2230
2231 @@ -8,16 +8,16 @@ nav2: news-items
2232 nav2-show: true
2233 ---
2234 <p class="lead">
2235 - Important news regarding packages available in Gentoo are published via <em>news items</em>. You can find them below.
2236 + Important news regarding packages available in Gentoo are published via <em>news items</em>. They can be found below.
2237 </p>
2238
2239 <div class="alert alert-info">
2240 <strong>Which items affect me?</strong>
2241 <p>
2242 - This page lists <strong>all</strong> available news items for the official Gentoo package repository, but sometimes items don't affect you because you don't have the relevant package installed,
2243 + This page lists <strong>all</strong> available news items for the official Gentoo ebuild repository, but sometimes items don't affect you because you don't have the relevant package installed,
2244 or use a different architecture.
2245 <br>
2246 - The <kbd>emerge</kbd> command notifies you after each operation if there are news items affecting your configuration:
2247 + The <kbd>emerge</kbd> command provides notifications after each operation if there are news items affecting the system configuration:
2248 </p>
2249 <p>
2250 <pre>
2251 @@ -31,7 +31,7 @@ nav2-show: true
2252 For more information on the "Critical News" publication system, please see <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/GLEP:42">GLEP 42</a>.
2253 </p>
2254
2255 -<h2>Published News Items</h2>
2256 +<h2>Published news items</h2>
2257
2258 <table class="table table-condensed table-striped">
2259 <tr>
2260
2261 diff --git a/support/package-database.html b/support/package-database.html
2262 index 2668a00..5abf60d 100644
2263 --- a/support/package-database.html
2264 +++ b/support/package-database.html
2265 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
2266 ---
2267 -title: 'Package Database'
2268 +title: 'Package database'
2269 nav1: support
2270 nav2: package-database
2271 nav2-show: true
2272
2273 diff --git a/support/rsync-mirrors/index.html b/support/rsync-mirrors/index.html
2274 index 38fd327..361a064 100644
2275 --- a/support/rsync-mirrors/index.html
2276 +++ b/support/rsync-mirrors/index.html
2277 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
2278 ---
2279 -title: 'Gentoo rsync Mirrors'
2280 -navtitle: 'rsync Mirrors'
2281 +title: 'Gentoo rsync mirrors'
2282 +navtitle: 'rsync mirrors'
2283 nav1: support
2284 nav2: mirrors
2285 nav2-show: true
2286 @@ -8,22 +8,22 @@ nav2-show: true
2287
2288 <p>
2289 Gentoo is hosted by many mirrors around the globe.
2290 - Selecting a mirror that is geographically near you may help speed up Portage tree updates.
2291 + Selecting a mirror that is geographically near may help speed up repository syncs.
2292 </p>
2293
2294 <div class="alert alert-info">
2295 - <strong>Using rsync Mirrors</strong>
2296 + <strong>Using rsync mirrors</strong>
2297 <br />
2298 - The mirrors listed <strong>on this page</strong> are used for updating your Portage tree.
2299 + The mirrors listed <strong>on this page</strong> are used for updating the Gentoo ebuild repository.
2300 <br />
2301 To use an rsync mirror, set the <tt>sync-uri</tt> variable in the <tt>[gentoo]</tt> section of <tt>repos.conf</tt> to a URL from the list below.
2302 - <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki//etc/portage/repos.conf/gentoo.conf" class="alert-link">More information</a> is available in our Wiki.
2303 + <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki//etc/portage/repos.conf/gentoo.conf" class="alert-link">More information</a> is available on the wiki.
2304 </div>
2305
2306 <div class="alert alert-success">
2307 - <strong>Source Mirrors</strong>
2308 + <strong>Source (distfile) mirrors</strong>
2309 <br />
2310 - We also have a second type of mirrors that you use for fetching installation files as well as package sources (configured via <code>GENTOO_MIRRORS</code>).
2311 + We also have a second type of mirrors that you use for fetching installation files as well as package sources (configured via <var>GENTOO_MIRRORS</var> variable in <tt>make.conf</tt>).
2312 They are available on a <a href="/downloads/mirrors/" class="alert-link">separate page</a>.
2313 </div>
2314
2315 @@ -34,12 +34,12 @@ nav2-show: true
2316 </div>
2317
2318 <p>
2319 - We would like to thank the many organizations and individuals that are providing mirroring services to the Gentoo project. If you would like to contribute a mirror, please consult the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Infrastructure/Mirrors/Rsync">relevant documentation</a>.
2320 +We would like to thank the <i>many</i> organizations and individuals that are providing mirroring services to the Gentoo project. If you would like to contribute a mirror, please consult the <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Infrastructure/Mirrors/Rsync">relevant documentation</a>.
2321 </p>
2322
2323 <hr>
2324
2325 -<h2>Countries covered by Gentoo rsync Mirrors</h2>
2326 +<h2>Countries covered by Gentoo rsync mirrors</h2>
2327
2328 <table class="table table-condensed table-striped">
2329 <tr>
2330
2331 diff --git a/support/security/index.html b/support/security/index.html
2332 index 994348f..c5ed46e 100644
2333 --- a/support/security/index.html
2334 +++ b/support/security/index.html
2335 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
2336 ---
2337 -title: 'Gentoo Security'
2338 +title: 'Gentoo security'
2339 navtitle: 'Security'
2340 nav1: support
2341 nav2: security
2342 @@ -16,7 +16,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
2343
2344 <p>
2345 Security is a primary focus of Gentoo Linux and ensuring the confidentiality and security of our users machines is of utmost importance to us.
2346 - The <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Security">Gentoo Linux Security Project</a>
2347 + The <a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Security">Security Project</a>
2348 is tasked with providing timely information about security vulnerabilities in Gentoo Linux, along with patches to secure those vulnerabilities.
2349 We work directly with vendors, end users and other OSS projects to ensure all security incidents are responded to quickly and professionally.
2350 </p>
2351 @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
2352 for building a secure system and hardening existing systems.
2353 </p>
2354
2355 -<h3>Keeping your Gentoo system secure</h3>
2356 +<h3>Keeping Gentoo secure</h3>
2357 <p>
2358 To stay up-to-date with the security fixes you should subscribe to receive GLSAs and apply GLSA instructions whenever you have an affected package installed.
2359 Alternatively, syncing your portage tree and upgrading every package should also keep you up-to-date security-wise.
2360 @@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
2361 Gentoo Linux Security Announcements are notifications that we send out to the community to inform them of security vulnerabilities related to Gentoo Linux or the packages contained in our portage repository.
2362 </p>
2363
2364 -<h3>Recent Advisories</h3>
2365 +<h3>Recent advisories</h3>
2366
2367 {% include frontpage/glsa %}
2368
2369 @@ -65,7 +65,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
2370 GLSA announcements are sent to the <a href="/get-involved/mailing-lists/">gentoo-announce@g.o mailing-list</a>, and are published via <a href="https://security.gentoo.org/subscribe">RSS and Atom feeds</a>.
2371 </p>
2372
2373 -<h3 id="contact">Security Team contact information</h3>
2374 +<h3 id="contact">Security team contact information</h3>
2375 <p>
2376 Gentoo Linux takes security vulnerability reports very seriously.
2377 Please file new vulnerability reports on <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org">Gentoo Bugzilla</a>
2378 @@ -78,13 +78,13 @@ layout: page-nav3
2379 </p>
2380
2381 <p>
2382 - <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=Gentoo%20Security&amp;component=Vulnerabilities" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-bug"></span> Report Security Vulnerability</a>
2383 - <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=Gentoo%20Security&amp;component=GLSA%20Errors" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-bug"></span> Report GLSA Error</a>
2384 + <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=Gentoo%20Security&amp;component=Vulnerabilities" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-bug"></span> Report security vulnerability</a>
2385 + <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=Gentoo%20Security&amp;component=GLSA%20Errors" class="btn btn-primary btn-sm"><span class="fa fa-fw fa-bug"></span> Report GLSA error</a>
2386 </p>
2387
2388 <h3>Confidential contacts</h3>
2389 <p>
2390 - You have two options to submit non-public vulnerabilities to the Gentoo Linux Security Team.
2391 + You have two options to submit non-public vulnerabilities to the security team.
2392 You may submit a bug in <a href="https://bugs.gentoo.org/">Gentoo Bugzilla</a> using the <em>New-Expert</em> action, or the <em>Enter a new bug report (advanced)</em> link,
2393 and check the <em>Gentoo Security</em> checkbox in the <em>Only users in all of the selected groups can view this bug</em> section.
2394 You may also contact directly using encrypted mail one of the following security contacts:
2395 @@ -94,11 +94,11 @@ layout: page-nav3
2396 <td class="infohead"><b>Name</b></td>
2397 <td class="infohead"><b>Responsibility</b></td>
2398 <td class="infohead"><b>Email</b></td>
2399 - <td class="infohead"><b>GPG keyID (click to retrieve public key)</b></td>
2400 + <td class="infohead"><b>GPG key ID (click to retrieve public key)</b></td>
2401 </tr>
2402 <tr>
2403 <td class="tableinfo">Yury German</td>
2404 - <td class="tableinfo">Security team lead</td>
2405 + <td class="tableinfo">Security lead</td>
2406 <td class="tableinfo"><a href="mailto:blueknight@g.o">blueknight@g.o</a></td>
2407 <td class="tableinfo"><a href="https://pgp.mit.edu/pks/lookup?op=get&search=0xEEAFED89024C043D">0xEEAFED89024C043D</a></td>
2408 </tr>
2409 @@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ layout: page-nav3
2410 </tr>
2411 <tr>
2412 <td class="tableinfo">Jason A. Donenfeld</td>
2413 - <td class="tableinfo">Security Auditing Lead</td>
2414 + <td class="tableinfo">Security auditing lead</td>
2415 <td class="tableinfo"><a href="mailto:zx2c4@g.o">zx2c4@g.o</a></td>
2416 <td class="tableinfo"><a href="http://pgp.mit.edu:11371/pks/lookup?op=get&search=0x49FC7012A5DE03AE">0x49FC7012A5DE03AE</a></td>
2417 </tr>
2418 @@ -125,15 +125,15 @@ layout: page-nav3
2419
2420 <h3>Security pages</h3>
2421 <ul>
2422 - <li><a href="https://security.gentoo.org/glsa/">GLSA index page</a> — Full list of all published GLSAs</li>
2423 + <li><a href="https://security.gentoo.org/glsa/">GLSA index page</a> — Full list of all published GLSAs.</li>
2424 <li><a href="https://security.gentoo.org/glsa/feed.rss">GLSA RSS feed</a> — GLSA RSS live feed.</li>
2425 - <li><a href="vulnerability-treatment-policy.html">Vulnerability Treatment Policy</a> — The official policy the Security Team follows</li>
2426 - <li><a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Security">Gentoo Linux Security Project</a> — The security project page</li>
2427 + <li><a href="vulnerability-treatment-policy.html">Vulnerability Treatment Policy</a> — The official policy of the security team.</li>
2428 + <li><a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Security">Gentoo Linux Security Project</a> — The security project page.</li>
2429 </ul>
2430
2431 <h3>Links</h3>
2432 <ul>
2433 - <li><a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Security_Handbook">Gentoo Security Handbook</a> — Step-by-step guide for hardening Gentoo Linux</li>
2434 - <li><a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Hardened">Gentoo Hardened Project</a> — Bringing advanced security to Gentoo Linux</li>
2435 - <li><a href="/inside-gentoo/developers/">Active Developer List</a> — Active Developer List including GPG keys which can be used to verify GLSAs</li>
2436 + <li><a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Security_Handbook">Gentoo Security Handbook</a> — Step-by-step guide for hardening Gentoo Linux.</li>
2437 + <li><a href="https://wiki.gentoo.org/wiki/Project:Hardened">Gentoo Hardened Project</a> — Bringing advanced security to Gentoo Linux.</li>
2438 + <li><a href="/inside-gentoo/developers/">Active Developer List</a> — Active developer list including GPG keys which can be used to verify GLSAs.</li>
2439 </ul>
2440
2441 diff --git a/support/security/vulnerability-treatment-policy.html b/support/security/vulnerability-treatment-policy.html
2442 index 9fec74d..bc4955e 100644
2443 --- a/support/security/vulnerability-treatment-policy.html
2444 +++ b/support/security/vulnerability-treatment-policy.html
2445 @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ body_class: nav-align-h2
2446 </p>
2447
2448 <p>
2449 - For this reason, the Security Team separates Gentoo architectures into two groups, <strong>supported</strong> and <strong>unsupported:</strong>
2450 + For this reason, the security team separates Gentoo architectures into two groups, <strong>supported</strong> and <strong>unsupported:</strong>
2451 </p>
2452
2453 <dl>
2454 @@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ body_class: nav-align-h2
2455 <strong>Note:</strong> This policy might be changed when our tools support more complex upgrade paths and if a sufficient number of GLSA coordinators join the Security Team.
2456 </div>
2457
2458 -<h2>Vulnerability Feed</h2>
2459 +<h2>Vulnerability feed</h2>
2460
2461 <h3>Published vulnerabilities</h3>
2462 <p>
2463 @@ -94,7 +94,7 @@ body_class: nav-align-h2
2464
2465 <h2>Dispatch</h2>
2466
2467 -<h3>Severity Level</h3>
2468 +<h3>Severity level</h3>
2469 <p>
2470 In order to seed the appropriate reaction times and escalation procedures, we need to assign a severity level to each vulnerability.
2471 This severity level must be based on how widespread the affected software is amongst Gentoo users and depth of the vulnerability.
2472 @@ -275,20 +275,20 @@ You can use the following two tables to help you assign the severity level:
2473
2474 <h2>Bug correction and GLSA draft</h2>
2475
2476 -<h3>GLSA Coordinator role</h3>
2477 +<h3>GLSA coordinator role</h3>
2478 <p>
2479 The GLSA coordinator has responsibility for the following tasks:
2480 </p>
2481
2482 <ul>
2483 - <li>determine what must be done in order to close the vulnerability (for example identify the upstream version containing the fix)</li>
2484 - <li>if no fix is available from upstream yet, ensure that the bug is correctly reported to the upstream developer and set status whiteboard to <code>upstream</code></li>
2485 - <li>if a fix is available, get the package maintainer involved to produce and commit an ebuild containing the fix and set status whiteboard to <code>ebuild</code></li>
2486 - <li>once an ebuild is committed, evaluate what keywords are needed for the fix ebuild
2487 - and get arch-specific Teams to test and mark the ebuild stable on their architectures (arch teams should be cc'd on the bug, as well as releng during release preparation) and set status whiteboard to <code>stable</code></li>
2488 - <li>arch-maintainers should mark the ebuild stable if there is no regression in the fix ebuild compared to the latest vulnerable version</li>
2489 - <li>in parallel, writing a draft GLSA using the GLSAMaker tool</li>
2490 - <li>when the corrective ebuild is ready for all supported archs, set the status whiteboard to <code>glsa</code></li>
2491 + <li>Determine what must be done in order to close the vulnerability (for example identify the upstream version containing the fix).</li>
2492 + <li>If no fix is available from upstream yet, ensure that the bug is correctly reported to the upstream developer and set status whiteboard to <code>upstream</code>.</li>
2493 + <li>If a fix is available, get the package maintainer involved to produce and commit an ebuild containing the fix and set status whiteboard to <code>ebuild</code>.</li>
2494 + <li>Once an ebuild is committed, evaluate what keywords are needed for the fix ebuild
2495 + and get arch-specific Teams to test and mark the ebuild stable on their architectures (arch teams should be cc'd on the bug, as well as releng during release preparation) and set status whiteboard to <code>stable</code>.</li>
2496 + <li>Arch-maintainers should mark the ebuild stable if there is no regression in the fix ebuild compared to the latest vulnerable version.</li>
2497 + <li>In parallel, writing a draft GLSA using the GLSAMaker tool.</li>
2498 + <li>When the corrective ebuild is ready for all supported archs, set the status whiteboard to <code>glsa</code>.</li>
2499 </ul>
2500
2501 <div class="alert alert-info">
2502 @@ -326,7 +326,7 @@ You can use the following two tables to help you assign the severity level:
2503 <li>Vulnerable versions should be left in the tree until the bug enters the <code>stable</code> status, in order to correctly evaluate what keywords are needed for the fix version</li>
2504 </ul>
2505
2506 -<h2>GLSA Publication Process</h2>
2507 +<h2>GLSA publication process</h2>
2508
2509 <h3>Peer review</h3>
2510 <p>
2511 @@ -370,7 +370,7 @@ You can use the following two tables to help you assign the severity level:
2512
2513 <div class="alert alert-info">
2514 <strong>Notes:</strong><br>
2515 - Developer key IDs can be found on the Gentoo Linux <a href="/inside-gentoo/developers/">Developer list</a>. All the Security Team GPG keys are published on public key servers, including (but not limited to) <a href="http://subkeys.pgp.net:11371">subkeys.pgp.net</a>.<br>
2516 + Developer key IDs can be found in the Gentoo Linux <a href="/inside-gentoo/developers/">Developer list</a>. All the security team GPG keys are published on public key servers, including (but not limited to) <a href="http://subkeys.pgp.net:11371">subkeys.pgp.net</a>.<br>
2517
2518 To minimize errors in the publication process, the forum publication step is handled by an automatic poster when it receives the announcement.<br>
2519
2520 @@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ You can use the following two tables to help you assign the severity level:
2521 GLSAMaker 2 offers this option after releasing the advisory.
2522 </p>
2523
2524 -<h3>GLSA Errata</h3>
2525 +<h3>GLSA errata</h3>
2526 <p>
2527 Sometimes an error will slip through the peer-review process and an incorrect GLSA will be published to the world. Depending on the severity of the error(s), the following policy for erratum should be applied:
2528 </p>
2529 @@ -418,4 +418,4 @@ You can use the following two tables to help you assign the severity level:
2530 <td>Error in affected/unaffected versions number, people applying GLSA instructions are not at all protected</td>
2531 <td>An erratum GLSA should be published, replacing the erroneous one</td>
2532 </tr>
2533 -</table>
2534 \ No newline at end of file
2535 +</table>
2536
2537 diff --git a/support/use-flags/index.html b/support/use-flags/index.html
2538 index 140706f..86d8d8e 100644
2539 --- a/support/use-flags/index.html
2540 +++ b/support/use-flags/index.html
2541 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
2542 ---
2543 -title: 'USE Flag Index'
2544 -navtitle: 'USE Flags'
2545 +title: 'USE flag index'
2546 +navtitle: 'USE flags'
2547 nav1: support
2548 nav2: use
2549 nav2-show: true
2550 @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ nav2-show: true
2551
2552 <hr>
2553
2554 -<h2 id="global">Global USE Flags</h2>
2555 +<h2 id="global">Global USE flags</h2>
2556
2557 <table class="table table-condensed table-striped">
2558 <tr>
2559 @@ -30,7 +30,7 @@ nav2-show: true
2560 {% endfor %}
2561 </table>
2562
2563 -<h2 id="local">Local USE Flags</h2>
2564 +<h2 id="local">Local USE flags</h2>
2565
2566 {% for category in site.data.use.local %}
2567 <h3 id="{{ category[0] }}">{{ category[0] }}</h3>
2568 @@ -47,4 +47,4 @@ nav2-show: true
2569 {% endfor %}
2570 </table>
2571 {% endfor %}
2572 -{% endfor %}
2573 \ No newline at end of file
2574 +{% endfor %}