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From: "Joshua Saddler (nightmorph)" <nightmorph@g.o>
To: gentoo-commits@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-commits] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en: grub2-migration.xml
Date: Wed, 31 Oct 2012 06:23:07
Message-Id: 20121031062247.5C96320E47@flycatcher.gentoo.org
1 nightmorph 12/10/31 06:22:47
2
3 Modified: grub2-migration.xml
4 Log:
5 minor typo + punctuation fixes. also updated license to cc-by-sa 3.0. no content changes, so no revbump.
6
7 Revision Changes Path
8 1.3 xml/htdocs/doc/en/grub2-migration.xml
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10 file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/grub2-migration.xml?rev=1.3&view=markup
11 plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/grub2-migration.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/plain
12 diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewvc.cgi/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/grub2-migration.xml?r1=1.2&r2=1.3
13
14 Index: grub2-migration.xml
15 ===================================================================
16 RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/grub2-migration.xml,v
17 retrieving revision 1.2
18 retrieving revision 1.3
19 diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
20 --- grub2-migration.xml 27 Jul 2012 16:52:33 -0000 1.2
21 +++ grub2-migration.xml 31 Oct 2012 06:22:47 -0000 1.3
22 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
23 <?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?>
24 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
25 -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/grub2-migration.xml,v 1.2 2012/07/27 16:52:33 swift Exp $ -->
26 +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/grub2-migration.xml,v 1.3 2012/10/31 06:22:47 nightmorph Exp $ -->
27
28 <guide>
29 <title>GRUB2 migration from GRUB Legacy</title>
30 @@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
31 </abstract>
32
33 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
34 -<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
35 +<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/3.0 -->
36 <license/>
37
38 <version>2</version>
39 @@ -158,15 +158,15 @@
40
41 <p>
42 Because a broken GRUB configuration could mean an unbootable
43 -system, we want to test our GRUB2 configuration before making it permenant.
44 +system, we want to test our GRUB2 configuration before making it permanent.
45 To do this we will chainload GRUB2 from GRUB Legacy. This is done by adding
46 a new section into <path>/boot/grub/grub.conf</path>. An example is shown
47 below.
48 </p>
49
50 <note>
51 -Beaware that your root maybe different from <c>(hd0,0)</c> used in the
52 -example and make sure you reuse the same root value from your
53 +Be aware that your root may be different from <c>(hd0,0)</c> used in the
54 +example, and make sure you reuse the same root value from your
55 <path>/boot/grub/grub.conf</path>.
56 </note>
57
58 @@ -187,12 +187,12 @@
59 </pre>
60
61 <p>
62 -At this point you should reboot your machine and select the
63 -<c>GRUB2 Chainload</c> from the GRUB menu when your machine begins to boot.
64 -You will be presented with another GRUB menu which should advertise itself
65 -as GRUB 2.0.0 or higher at the top and show your available kernel(s) to boot.
66 -Should this not work, simply reboot your system and pick your normal boot
67 -option instead of <c>GRUB2 Chainload</c>.
68 +At this point you should reboot your machine and select <c>GRUB2 Chainload</c>
69 +from the GRUB menu when your machine begins to boot. You will be presented with
70 +another GRUB menu which should advertise itself as GRUB 2.0.0 or higher at the
71 +top and show your available kernel(s) to boot. Should this not work, simply
72 +reboot your system and pick your normal boot option instead of <c>GRUB2
73 +Chainload</c>.
74 </p>
75
76 </body>
77 @@ -202,13 +202,13 @@
78 <body>
79
80 <p>
81 -At this point if everything worked successfully you can replace GRUB Legacy
82 +At this point, if everything worked successfully, you can replace GRUB Legacy
83 and remove it from your system.
84 </p>
85
86 <note>
87 Since you've rebooted your system, you may need to mount <path>/boot</path>
88 -again. You should also take note to use your boot drive path instead of
89 +again. Make sure to use your own boot drive path instead of
90 <path>/dev/sda</path>.
91 </note>