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Matthias Maier posted on Fri, 11 Sep 2015 16:22:27 -0500 as excerpted: |
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> Title: libvirt-1.2.19 init script changes |
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> OpenRC Users: |
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I'm not a libvirt (neither openrc, now) user, but it looks good here in |
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terms of general clarity/spelling/grammar, and you didn't hit the |
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commonly hit title-too-long bug. =:^) |
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The only very minor nit I can /possibly/ find is that message opening... |
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OpenRC users: |
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That's arguably slightly confusing as it makes the news appear to be |
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about openrc, but then the rest of it talks about libvirt. |
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If you're a perfectionist, there's a possible argument for making that... |
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OpenRC libvirt users: |
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But arguably it's fine as-is. I doubt I'd miss the libvirt just reading |
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it, and only saw it here because I was /trying/ to be picky! =:^) |
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Duncan - List replies preferred. No HTML msgs. |
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"Every nonfree program has a lord, a master -- |
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and if you use the program, he is your master." Richard Stallman |
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