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>>>>> On Tue, 15 Aug 2017, Francisco Blas Izquierdo Riera (klondike) wrote: |
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> Updated the news item following comments from dilfridge, mrueg and |
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> floppym. Also made it display to users of hardened profiles. |
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Some very minor comments: |
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> Author: Francisco Blas Izquierdo Riera (klondike) <klondike@g.o> |
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Format of the line is "Real Name <email@address>", so I'd suggest to |
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drop the nick in parentheses, especially since it is there in the |
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e-mail address anyway. |
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> Because of that we will be masking the hardened-sources on the 27th of |
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> August and will proceed to remove then from the tree by the end of |
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> September. [...] |
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s/then/them/ |
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> As an alternative, for users happy keeping themselves on the stable |
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> 4.9 branch of the kernel minipli, another Grsec user, is forward |
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> porting the patches on [3]. |
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I had difficulties parsing this sentence. Insert a comma after |
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"kernel"? Also there is spurious whitespace before "stable". |
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Ulrich |