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On Sat, Oct 22, 2022 at 08:55:09AM +0200, Ulrich Mueller wrote: |
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> > How's the clarification now, making it clear those are the authors for |
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> > version 1.2? |
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> I'd still prefer a single list of acknowledgements in alphabetical |
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> order, without any of the authors included. (But I don't have a strong |
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> opinion, so if you absolutely want to have a separate paragraph for 1.2, |
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> then go ahead.) |
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Paragraph kept. |
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> However, can we please keep the authors list (in the header) as-is? |
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> If we're now going to include people for adding a single sentence or |
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> suggestion, then we'd also have to list several (all?) of the persons |
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> who are listed in the original acknowledgements. |
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Done. |
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> >> Another small point: Whitespace in the new section doesn't follow the |
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> >> style in the rest of the GLEP, which uses two blank lines before and one |
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> >> blank line after section headings, as well as two spaces at the end of |
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> >> every sentence. (This is also what GLEP 2 says.) |
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> > Fixed - the blank lines were inconsistent in multiple places, but the |
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> > two spaces were correct. |
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> There shouldn't be double blank lines _after_ section headings (i.e. |
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> only a single blank line after "Specification" and "Rationale") [1]. |
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Fixed. |
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Also reworded to not say "Gentoo Foundation"; but still document the |
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intent about when verification could take place. |
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Robin Hugh Johnson |
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Gentoo Linux: Dev, Infra Lead, Foundation Treasurer |
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E-Mail : robbat2@g.o |
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