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>>>>> On Thu, 08 Sep 2022, Michał Górny wrote: |
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> -The Manifest files use UTF-8 encoding. |
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> +The Manifest files use UTF-8 encoding. Line feed (``U+000A``) character |
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> +is used to separate lines. For best compatibility, empty lines and any |
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> +additional whitespace, including the carriage return character |
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> +(``U+000D``) should be ignored by the implementation. |
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Either "Line feed (``U+000A``) is used ..." or "The line feed |
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(``U+000A``) character is used ..." |
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> +Newline convention |
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> +------------------ |
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Please insert a blank line here. |
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> +Prior to version 1.2, the specification did not indicate the encoding |
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> +to be used for newlines. Since the format is primarily used on Gentoo |
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> +Linux systems, this has been changed to follow the Unix convention |
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> +of using the line feed character. However, for best interoperability |
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> +implementation should be prepared to treat superfluous carriage return |
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s/implementation/the implementation/ |
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> +characters as whitespace and ignore them. |
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Also I notice that you use double space after full stop in the first |
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paragraph above but a single space in the second paragraph. This should |
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be consistent throughout the GLEP. |