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On 4 August 2013 09:56, Alex Xu <alex_y_xu@×××××.ca> wrote: |
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> Minor grammar/typographical errata: |
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> On 04/08/13 12:53 AM, Mike Pagano wrote: |
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>> The Gentoo Kernel Team will no longer be providing stable vanilla-sources |
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>> kernels. All currently stabilized vanilla-sources versions will be dropped |
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>> to ~arch. The Arch teams, via normal requests of the Kernel Team, will |
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>> continue to stabilize gentoo-sources kernels upon request. This decision is |
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>> based on the facts that upstream is now releasing approximately 1-2 vanilla- |
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> try not to wrap vanilla-sources on the hyphen if possible |
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>> sources kernels a week. Arch teams, understandable, are unable to keep up with |
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> s/understandable/understandably/ |
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>> this rate of release. As most vanilla releases contain security fixes, the |
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>> user who only runs stable vanilla-sources will consistently be behind and |
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>> potentially at risk. For the latest upstream non Gentoo patched vanilla |
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> s/non Gentoo patched/non-Gentoo-patched/ or "upstream kernel unpatched |
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> by Gentoo" |
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>> kernel, we recommend user add 'sys-kernel/vanilla-sources' to their |
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> s/user add/adding/;s/their/the/ or similar; "recommend user add" is not |
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> grammatically correct |
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Make that: we recommend the user to add 'sys-kernel/vanilla-sources' to |
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their package.accept_keywords file. |
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(Note: "their" is perfectly correct usage as a gender-neutral reference to a |
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singular person.) |
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Alternatively: we recommend users to add .... |
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>> package.accept_keywords file. Gentoo-sources will continue to be a tested and |
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> s/Gentoo-sources/gentoo-sources/ |
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>> supported version for Gentoo users. |
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> s/\. /. /g |
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> (or vice versa) |
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Cheers, |
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Ben | yngwin |
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Gentoo developer |