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Ferris McCormick wrote: |
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> I sent this to gentoo-core yesterday, but gentoo-core seems to be |
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> missing in action. I am not sure who, if anyone, received it. |
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> gentoo-devrel is the intended audience, anyway. |
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> If you are seeing your second or third copy of this message, I |
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> apologise, but I can't tell what mail sent to @genroo.org addresses |
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> yesterday made it, which are still queued, and which are lost. |
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> =============================================== |
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> I have now read http://dev.gentoo.org/~urilith/devrel-proposal.txt |
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> and still like it a lot. At this point, I'd like to suggest a few textual |
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> changes which have no effect on the proposal besides wording changes: |
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> 1. As I mentioned previously, I think the procedure we are discussing |
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> is better described as a hearing rather than a trial (but the verb |
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> 'tried' is fine with me). |
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> 2. In the spirit of point 1, I'd change 'Defendant' to 'Respondent' |
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> since the developer involved is responding to a complaint more |
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> than defending an action. (And, it's a "kinder, gentler" word.) |
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> 3. For uniformity, I'd try to keep the final policy in present tense |
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> imperative (rather than subjunctive, unless subjunctive is |
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> intended for expressing a preference rather than a requirement). 4. |
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> The last word of the proposal is actually spelled 'moot'. |
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> Sorry to seem excessively pedantic (well, picky), but if people agree with |
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> me on any of these, we are talking editing changes which have no |
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> substantive effect (oe at least, I don't intend any), and are more easily |
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> done now than later. |
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> I'm picking at this because I like it. If I didn't like it, I wouldn't |
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> care how it read. |
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> Regards, |
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> Ferris |
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> -- |
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> Ferris McCormick (P44646, MI) <fmccor@g.o> |
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> Developer, Gentoo Linux (sparc) |
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Okay, I've made the changes I could find. I also can't believe I put |
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mute instead of moot, thanks for catching that! |
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In any case, the new version has been uploaded. |
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Mike Tindal |