[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: altinstall.xml

[Joshua Saddler]

nightmorph    08/09/10 23:04:29

  Modified:             altinstall.xml
  Log:
  patch from bug 232410

Revision  Changes    Path
1.76                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml

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diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml?r1=1.75&r2=1.76

Index: altinstall.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.75
retrieving revision 1.76
diff -u -r1.75 -r1.76
--- altinstall.xml	23 May 2008 20:29:44 -0000	1.75
+++ altinstall.xml	10 Sep 2008 23:04:29 -0000	1.76
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v 1.75 2008/05/23 20:29:44 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v 1.76 2008/09/10 23:04:29 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/altinstall.xml">
@@ -45,6 +45,9 @@
 <author title="Editor">
   <mail link="smithj@g.o">Jonathan Smith</mail>
 </author>
+<author title="Editor">
+  <mail link="nightmorph"/>
+</author>
 
 <abstract>
 This HOWTO is meant to be a repository of alternative Gentoo installation
@@ -56,8 +59,8 @@
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
-<version>0.73</version>
-<date>2008-01-09</date>
+<version>1</version>
+<date>2008-09-10</date>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>About this document</title>
@@ -280,24 +283,23 @@
 
 <p>
 DHCP and TFTP setup: The client will get boot informations using DHCP and
-download all the required files using TFTP. Just emerge DHCP and configure it
-for your basic needs. Then, add the following on
-<path>/etc/dhcp/dhcpd.conf</path>.
+download all the required files using TFTP.
+</p>
+
+<p>
+For dhcpd, just run <c>emerge dhcp</c> (or any other DHCP server of your
+choice). Make sure that the correct interface is selected in
+<path>/etc/conf.d/dhcpd</path>, and configure it for your basic needs. Then, add
+the following on <path>/etc/dhcp/dhcpd.conf</path>.
 </p>
 
 <note>
-This provide a static IP address for the client and the path of a PXE boot
+This provides a static IP address for the client and the path of a PXE boot
 image, here <path>pxegrub</path>. You have to replace the MAC address of the
-Ethernet card of the client and the directory where you will put the client
+ethernet card of the client and the directory where you will put the client
 files with the one you use.
 </note>
 
-<p>
-For DHCPd, run <c>emerge dhcp</c> (or any other DHCP server of your choice).
-Make sure that the correct interface is selected in
-<path>/etc/conf.d/dhcpd</path>.
-</p>
-
 <pre caption="dhcpd.conf">
 option option-150 code 150 = text ;
 ddns-update-style none ;