Gentoo Archives: gentoo-doc-cvs

From: "Joshua Saddler (nightmorph)" <nightmorph@g.o>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
Date: Tue, 26 Jan 2010 20:45:12
Message-Id: E1NZsHc-0001yA-Mt@stork.gentoo.org
1 nightmorph 10/01/26 20:45:08
2
3 Modified: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
4 gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
5 Log:
6 Make it extra clear that this guide is for experienced users who just need an installation checklist. Easier to do than the complete rename suggested by 302363
7
8 Revision Changes Path
9 1.25 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
10
11 file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.25&view=markup
12 plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.25&content-type=text/plain
13 diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml?r1=1.24&r2=1.25
14
15 Index: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
16 ===================================================================
17 RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v
18 retrieving revision 1.24
19 retrieving revision 1.25
20 diff -u -r1.24 -r1.25
21 --- gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml 13 Mar 2009 16:51:20 -0000 1.24
22 +++ gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml 26 Jan 2010 20:45:08 -0000 1.25
23 @@ -1,8 +1,8 @@
24 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
25 -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v 1.24 2009/03/13 16:51:20 neysx Exp $ -->
26 +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v 1.25 2010/01/26 20:45:08 nightmorph Exp $ -->
27 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
28
29 -<guide lang="en">
30 +<guide>
31 <title>Gentoo Linux x86 with Software Raid and LVM2 Quick Install Guide</title>
32
33 <values>
34 @@ -19,9 +19,9 @@
35 <author title="Author">Steven Wagner</author>
36
37 <abstract>
38 -The Quick install guide covers the Gentoo install process in a non-verbose
39 +The Quick Install guide covers the Gentoo install process in a non-verbose
40 manner. Its purpose is to allow users to perform a stage3 install with software
41 -RAID and LVM2 in no time. Users should already have prior experience with
42 +RAID and LVM2 in no time. Users should already have prior experience with
43 installing Gentoo Linux if they want to follow this guide.
44 </abstract>
45
46 @@ -29,8 +29,8 @@
47 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
48 <license/>
49
50 -<version>14</version>
51 -<date>2009-03-13</date>
52 +<version>15</version>
53 +<date>2010-01-26</date>
54
55 <chapter>
56 <title>Introduction</title>
57 @@ -44,10 +44,11 @@
58 and Portage snapshots.
59 </p>
60
61 -<p>
62 +<impo>
63 New users should read the <uri link="/doc/en/handbook/index.xml">Handbook</uri>
64 -as it gives a better overview about the installation process.
65 -</p>
66 +as it gives a better overview about the installation process. The Quick Install
67 +guide is designed for experienced users who just need a checklist to follow.
68 +</impo>
69
70 <p>
71 Timing output follows all commands that take more than a couple of seconds to
72
73
74
75 1.84 xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
76
77 file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.84&view=markup
78 plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?rev=1.84&content-type=text/plain
79 diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml?r1=1.83&r2=1.84
80
81 Index: gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
82 ===================================================================
83 RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v
84 retrieving revision 1.83
85 retrieving revision 1.84
86 diff -u -r1.83 -r1.84
87 --- gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml 13 Mar 2009 16:51:20 -0000 1.83
88 +++ gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml 26 Jan 2010 20:45:08 -0000 1.84
89 @@ -1,9 +1,8 @@
90 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
91 -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.83 2009/03/13 16:51:20 neysx Exp $ -->
92 -
93 +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.84 2010/01/26 20:45:08 nightmorph Exp $ -->
94 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
95
96 -<guide lang="en">
97 +<guide>
98 <title>Gentoo Linux x86 Quick Install Guide</title>
99
100 <values>
101 @@ -20,7 +19,7 @@
102 <author title="Author">Steven Wagner</author>
103
104 <abstract>
105 -The Quick install guide covers the Gentoo install process in a non-verbose
106 +The Quick Install guide covers the Gentoo install process in a non-verbose
107 manner. Its purpose is to allow users to perform a stage3 install in no time.
108 Users should already have prior experience with installing Gentoo Linux if they
109 want to follow this guide.
110 @@ -30,8 +29,8 @@
111 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
112 <license/>
113
114 -<version>24</version>
115 -<date>2009-03-13</date>
116 +<version>25</version>
117 +<date>2010-01-26</date>
118
119 <chapter>
120 <title>Introduction</title>
121 @@ -39,15 +38,16 @@
122 <body>
123
124 <p>
125 -This guide contains all commands you should use to complete a stage3
126 +This guide contains all the commands you should use to complete a stage3
127 installation of Gentoo. You need a connection to the Internet to download the
128 stage3 and Portage snapshots.
129 </p>
130
131 -<p>
132 +<impo>
133 New users should read the <uri link="/doc/en/handbook/index.xml">Handbook</uri>
134 -as it gives a better overview about the installation process.
135 -</p>
136 +as it gives a better overview about the installation process. The Quick Install
137 +guide is designed for experienced users who just need a checklist to follow.
138 +</impo>
139
140 <p>
141 Timing output follows all commands that take more than a couple of seconds to