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From: Joshua Saddler <nightmorph@××××××××××××.org>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: jffnms.xml
Date: Tue, 18 Mar 2008 04:38:49
Message-Id: E1JbTb4-0001gr-Hd@stork.gentoo.org
1 nightmorph 08/03/18 04:38:46
2
3 Modified: jffnms.xml
4 Log:
5 The spelling, grammar, capitalization, punctuation, and various useless things in this doc suck. Fixed.
6
7 Revision Changes Path
8 1.10 xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml
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10 file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml?rev=1.10&view=markup
11 plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml?rev=1.10&content-type=text/plain
12 diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml?r1=1.9&r2=1.10
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14 Index: jffnms.xml
15 ===================================================================
16 RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml,v
17 retrieving revision 1.9
18 retrieving revision 1.10
19 diff -u -r1.9 -r1.10
20 --- jffnms.xml 18 Mar 2008 04:30:57 -0000 1.9
21 +++ jffnms.xml 18 Mar 2008 04:38:46 -0000 1.10
22 @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
23 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
24 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
25 -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml,v 1.9 2008/03/18 04:30:57 nightmorph Exp $ -->
26 +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/jffnms.xml,v 1.10 2008/03/18 04:38:46 nightmorph Exp $ -->
27
28 <guide link="/doc/en/jffnms.xml" lang="en">
29 <title>Jffnms Installation and Setup Guide</title>
30 @@ -42,12 +42,11 @@
31 <chapter>
32 <title>Initial Setup</title>
33 <section>
34 -<title>Choosing your use flags</title>
35 +<title>Choosing your USE flags</title>
36 <body>
37
38 <p>
39 -In order to better fit your needs, Jffnms ebuild has the following USE Flags
40 -available:
41 +The Jffnms ebuild has the following USE flags available:
42 </p>
43
44 <table>
45 @@ -74,12 +73,12 @@
46 </body>
47 </section>
48 <section>
49 -<title>USE Flags for PHP</title>
50 +<title>USE flags for PHP</title>
51 <body>
52
53 <p>
54 -Being written in PHP, Jffnms is heavily dependent on php USE Flags. In order to
55 -install Jffnms successfully, you are required to have your php package installed
56 +Being written in PHP, Jffnms is heavily dependent on PHP USE flags. In order to
57 +install Jffnms successfully, you are required to have your PHP package installed
58 with (at least) the following USE flags:
59 </p>
60
61 @@ -139,7 +138,7 @@
62 <body>
63
64 <warn>
65 -This very basic configuration procedure for apache does not cover all aspects
66 +This very basic configuration procedure for Apache does not cover all aspects
67 of setting up a web server.
68 </warn>
69
70 @@ -148,14 +147,12 @@
71 remote server. If this is your case, it is very likely that you don't have an
72 apache setup running. Don't worry about installing apache though, Portage has
73 already done that for you. Nevertheless, you still have to configure and test
74 -apache, which (luckily) is pretty straightforward. Start by adding apache to
75 +apache, which (luckily) is pretty straightforward. Start by adding Apache to
76 your default runlevel:
77 </p>
78
79 -<pre caption="Adding apache 2 to the default runlevel">
80 +<pre caption="Adding apache2 to the default runlevel">
81 # <i>rc-update add apache2 default</i>
82 - * apache2 added to runlevel default
83 - * rc-update complete.
84 </pre>
85
86 <p>
87 @@ -198,7 +195,7 @@
88 <body>
89
90 <p>
91 -Now that apache is running, it is time to configure PHP. Jffnms requires that
92 +Now that Apache is running, it is time to configure PHP. Jffnms requires that
93 you set some variables in php.ini in order to run. The <path>php.ini</path> file
94 is usually located in <path>/etc/php/apache2-php5/php.ini</path>. You have to
95 set these variables to the following values:
96 @@ -229,14 +226,14 @@
97 Jffnms allows you to use either PostgreSQL or MySQL as its database. Here we'll
98 show you how to create the database and necessary tables where Jffnms will
99 store its data. It's important to note that it isn't necessary to have a
100 -database running localy to run Jffnms and except for the fact that you need to
101 +database running locally to run Jffnms and except for the fact that you need to
102 run this commands on the remote host, the procedure is the same.
103 </p>
104
105 </body>
106 </section>
107 <section>
108 -<title>Setting Up PostgreSQL</title>
109 +<title>Setting up PostgreSQL</title>
110 <body>
111
112 <note>
113 @@ -297,14 +294,14 @@
114 </pre>
115
116 <p>
117 -Once you have run those steps, PostgreSQL database configuration for Jffnms
118 +Once you have run those steps, the PostgreSQL database configuration for Jffnms
119 should be ok.
120 </p>
121
122 </body>
123 </section>
124 <section>
125 -<title>Using MySQL as database.</title>
126 +<title>Using MySQL as database</title>
127 <body>
128
129 <warn>
130 @@ -367,7 +364,7 @@
131 </body>
132 </section>
133 <section>
134 -<title>Final Setup</title>
135 +<title>Final setup</title>
136 <body>
137
138 <p>
139 @@ -389,11 +386,10 @@
140 <chapter>
141 <title>Support</title>
142 <section>
143 -<title>Support</title>
144 <body>
145
146 <p>
147 -Though Jffnms is a wonderful software, it is a bit hard to get it up and
148 +Though Jffnms is a wonderful application, it is a bit hard to get it up and
149 running. So if you run into problems with Jffnms, there are some places where
150 you can look for help:
151 </p>
152
153
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