[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml

[Lukasz Damentko]

rane        06/06/29 12:33:23

  Modified:             gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
  Log:
  fixing a number of typos, no content change

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1.3                  xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml

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Index: gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml	31 May 2006 09:26:31 -0000	1.2
+++ gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml	29 Jun 2006 12:33:23 -0000	1.3
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v 1.2 2006/05/31 09:26:31 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86+raid+lvm2-quickinstall.xml,v 1.3 2006/06/29 12:33:23 rane Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 
 <p>
 This guide contains all commands you should use to complete a stage3
-installation including LVM2 on top of software RAID. This guide is targetted at
+installation including LVM2 on top of software RAID. This guide is targeted at
 experienced users. You need a connection to the Internet to download the stage3
 and Portage snapshots.
 </p>
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@
 a rough estimate of the time you need to complete your install)</comment>
 
 # <i>grep bogo /proc/cpuinfo</i>
-bogomip       : 3337.81
+bogomips       : 3337.81
 
 # <i>hdparm -tT /dev/sda /dev/sdb</i>
 /dev/sda:
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@
 be detected and all modules will be loaded. If the kernel fails to boot
 properly or if your computer hangs during the boot procedure, you may have to
 experience with different configurations. The safest way is probably to use the
-<c>nodetect</c> option and then load required modules explicitely.
+<c>nodetect</c> option and then load required modules explicily.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Boot the minimal CD">
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Alternatively, you can start networking manually. The following example assigns
-the IP addess 192.168.1.10 to your PC and defines 192.168.1.1 as your router
+the IP address 192.168.1.10 to your PC and defines 192.168.1.1 as your router
 and name server.
 </p>
 
@@ -219,7 +219,7 @@
 another PC. Please note that allowing root to connect over ssh is not
 recommended under normal circumstances. If you can't trust your local network,
 use a long and complex password, you should use it only once as it will
-disappear after your first rebot.
+disappear after your first reboot.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Set the root password">
@@ -235,7 +235,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Connect to your new box from another PC">
-<comment>(Use the IP addess of your new box)</comment>
+<comment>(Use the IP address of your new box)</comment>
 $ <i>ssh root@192.168.1.10</i>
 The authenticity of host '192.168.1.10 (192.168.1.10)' can't be established.
 RSA key fingerprint is 96:e7:2d:12:ac:9c:b0:94:90:9f:40:89:b0:45:26:8f.



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