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From: Camille Huot <cam@×××××××××××.org>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: genkernel.xml
Date: Sun, 04 Sep 2005 23:04:36
Message-Id: 200509042301.j84N1OGX009829@robin.gentoo.org
1 cam 05/09/04 23:04:25
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3 Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en genkernel.xml
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5 Some minor english-only corrections.
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21 +++ genkernel.xml 4 Sep 2005 23:04:25 -0000 1.24
22 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
23 -<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
24 -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml,v 1.23 2005/08/18 11:33:54 neysx Exp $ -->
25 +<?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
26 +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/genkernel.xml,v 1.24 2005/09/04 23:04:25 cam Exp $ -->
27 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
28
29 <guide link="/doc/en/genkernel.xml">
30 @@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
31
32 <abstract>
33 This guide intends to provide a reference of all the functions provided by
34 -genkernel.
35 +genkernel.
36 </abstract>
37
38 <license/>
39 @@ -77,14 +77,14 @@
40 <p>
41 To obtain genkernel, run <c>emerge genkernel</c> from the command line. If you
42 are using the <uri
43 -link="/doc/en/handbook/2005.0/hb-install-about.xml#doc_chap2_sect1"> Gentoo
44 +link="/doc/en/handbook/2005.0/hb-install-about.xml#doc_chap2_sect1">Gentoo
45 Reference Platform</uri> (GRP), remember to install binary packages by passing
46 the <c>-k</c> flag to emerge. Since the GRP is bundled with an older version of
47 genkernel, the flags may be different. In any case, consult <c>genkernel
48 --help</c> for help on how to use the version of genkernel installed on your
49 system.
50 </p>
51 -
52 +
53 </body>
54 </section>
55 </chapter>
56 @@ -145,7 +145,6 @@
57
58 </body>
59 </section>
60 -
61 <section>
62 <title>Configuration Flags</title>
63 <body>
64 @@ -539,7 +538,7 @@
65 </li>
66 <li>
67 Add the initrd information as required by the bootloader. Consult the <uri
68 - link="/doc/en/handbook/handbook-x86.xml?part=1&amp;chap=10"> Bootloader
69 + link="/doc/en/handbook/handbook-x86.xml?part=1&amp;chap=10">Bootloader
70 Configuration Chapter</uri> of the Gentoo Handbook for details on how to
71 make your bootloader initrd-aware.
72 </li>
73 @@ -633,7 +632,7 @@
74 </p>
75
76 <pre caption="Running genkernel (with flags), after employing genkernel.conf">
77 -# <i>genkernel --gensplash --kerneldir=/path/to/alternate/kernel/sources \
78 +# <i>genkernel --gensplash --kerneldir=/path/to/alternate/kernel/sources \
79 --kernel-config=/path/to/preferred/configfile --install all</i>
80 </pre>
81
82 @@ -654,7 +653,7 @@
83
84 <p>
85 The genkernel utility can build kernel and initrd images that provide support
86 -for network booting, or <e>netboot</e>ing . With any luck, you should be able
87 +for network booting, or <e>netboot</e>ing. With any luck, you should be able
88 to netboot any recent computer into the environment provided by the
89 Installation CD.
90 </p>
91 @@ -690,8 +689,8 @@
92 <pre caption="Configuring a 2.6.x series kernel to support your NIC driver">
93 Device Drivers --->
94 Networking Support --->
95 - Ethernet (10 or 100Mbit) --->
96 - [*] Ethernet (10 or 100Mbit)
97 + Ethernet (10 or 100Mbit) --->
98 + [*] Ethernet (10 or 100Mbit)
99 &lt;*&gt; the driver for your network card
100 <comment>(Be sure to select &lt;*&gt; and not &lt;M&gt;)</comment>
101 </pre>
102 @@ -708,7 +707,7 @@
103 <pre caption="Configuring a 2.6.x series kernel to support DHCP">
104 Device Drivers --->
105 Networking Support --->
106 - Networking options
107 + Networking options
108 [*] TCP/IP networking--->
109 [*] IP: kernel level autoconfiguration
110 [*] IP: DHCP support
111 @@ -723,7 +722,7 @@
112 </p>
113
114 <pre caption="Configuring the kernel to support SquashFS">
115 -File systems--->
116 +File systems--->
117 Miscellaneous filesystems --->
118 [*] SquashFS 2.X - Squashed file system support
119 </pre>
120 @@ -802,7 +801,7 @@
121
122 <p>
123 The netboot images will ask your DHCP server for an IP as well as a root-path
124 -parameter. Both can be specified per host using a MAC address to identify
125 +parameter. Both can be specified per host using a MAC address to identify
126 machines:
127 </p>
128
129 @@ -858,7 +857,6 @@
130
131 <chapter>
132 <title>Conclusion</title>
133 -
134 <section>
135 <title>To Automate or not to Automate?</title>
136 <body>
137
138
139
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