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fox2mike 05/09/08 10:32:09 |
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Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en migration-to-2.6.xml |
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Log: |
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#101398 - Grammatical and spelling fixes, thanks to vanquirius and rane for reporting. |
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Revision Changes Path |
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1.21 +10 -10 xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml |
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file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml?rev=1.21&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo |
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plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml?rev=1.21&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml.diff?r1=1.20&r2=1.21&cvsroot=gentoo |
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Index: migration-to-2.6.xml |
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=================================================================== |
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v |
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retrieving revision 1.20 |
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retrieving revision 1.21 |
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diff -u -r1.20 -r1.21 |
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--- migration-to-2.6.xml 8 Sep 2005 10:10:28 -0000 1.20 |
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+++ migration-to-2.6.xml 8 Sep 2005 10:32:09 -0000 1.21 |
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<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?> |
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<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> |
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-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v 1.20 2005/09/08 10:10:28 fox2mike Exp $ --> |
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+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml,v 1.21 2005/09/08 10:32:09 fox2mike Exp $ --> |
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<guide link="/doc/en/migration-to-2.6.xml"> |
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<title>Introduction</title> |
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<section> |
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-<title>Whats new in Linux 2.6?</title> |
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+<title>What is new in Linux 2.6?</title> |
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<body> |
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<p> |
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-That is no easy question to answer. Linux 2.6 is the result of over 2 years of |
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-rapid development and stabilisation of new features, and is architectually |
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-quite different from its 2.4 counterpart. Some of the more major changes are |
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-listed below: |
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+That is not an easy question to answer. Linux 2.6 is the result of over 2 years |
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+of rapid development and stabilisation of new features, and is architecturally |
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+quite different from its 2.4 counterpart. Some of the major changes are listed |
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+below: |
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</p> |
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<ul> |
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</p> |
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<p> |
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-If you're using a 2.4 profile, please change it to one that supports a 2.6 |
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+If you are using a 2.4 profile, please change it to one that supports a 2.6 |
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kernel by doing the following. |
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</p> |
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<p> |
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If you are not a LVM user, but you think LVM2 sounds useful for you, you can |
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convert your disks to this format at a later date, by following the <uri |
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-link="/doc/en/lvm2.xml">Gentoo LVM2 Installation Guide</uri>. For now, lets |
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+link="/doc/en/lvm2.xml">Gentoo LVM2 Installation Guide</uri>. For now, let us |
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just concentrate on getting a smooth 2.6 migration underway. |
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</p> |
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<note> |
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Recent 2.4 kernels will also allow you to use "usbfs" as well as "usbdevfs", so |
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-you aren't breaking any backwards compatibility by doing this. |
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+you are not breaking any backwards compatibility by doing this. |
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</note> |
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</body> |
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<M> Sequencer support |
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<M> OSS Mixer API |
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[*] OSS Sequencer API |
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-<comment> (and dont forget to select your soundcard from the submenus!)</comment> |
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+<comment> (and do not forget to select your soundcard from the submenus!)</comment> |
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<comment>(the following are required if you use LVM for disk management):</comment> |
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Device Drivers ---> |
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