1 |
swift 05/07/28 15:42:16 |
2 |
|
3 |
Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1 |
4 |
hb-install-network.xml |
5 |
Log: |
6 |
Incorporate current network changes in 2005.1 draft |
7 |
|
8 |
Revision Changes Path |
9 |
1.2 +31 -30 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml |
10 |
|
11 |
file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo |
12 |
plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo |
13 |
diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml.diff?r1=1.1&r2=1.2&cvsroot=gentoo |
14 |
|
15 |
Index: hb-install-network.xml |
16 |
=================================================================== |
17 |
RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml,v |
18 |
retrieving revision 1.1 |
19 |
retrieving revision 1.2 |
20 |
diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2 |
21 |
--- hb-install-network.xml 5 Jul 2005 08:02:04 -0000 1.1 |
22 |
+++ hb-install-network.xml 28 Jul 2005 15:42:16 -0000 1.2 |
23 |
@@ -4,12 +4,12 @@ |
24 |
<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license --> |
25 |
<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 --> |
26 |
|
27 |
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml,v 1.1 2005/07/05 08:02:04 swift Exp $ --> |
28 |
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml,v 1.2 2005/07/28 15:42:16 swift Exp $ --> |
29 |
|
30 |
<sections> |
31 |
|
32 |
-<version>4.00</version> |
33 |
-<date>2005-01-04</date> |
34 |
+<version>2.2</version> |
35 |
+<date>2005-07-02</date> |
36 |
|
37 |
<section> |
38 |
<title>Do you need Networking?</title> |
39 |
@@ -106,19 +106,19 @@ |
40 |
</body> |
41 |
</subsection> |
42 |
<subsection> |
43 |
-<title>Optional: Configure Proxy</title> |
44 |
+<title>Optional: Configure any Proxies</title> |
45 |
<body> |
46 |
|
47 |
<p> |
48 |
If you access the Internet through a proxy, you might need to set up proxy |
49 |
information during the installation. It is very easy to define a proxy: you just |
50 |
-need to define a variable which contains the proxy server information. |
51 |
+need to define a variable which contains the proxy server information. |
52 |
</p> |
53 |
|
54 |
<p> |
55 |
In most cases, you can just define the variables using the server hostname. As |
56 |
-an example, we assume the proxy is called <e>proxy.gentoo.org</e> and the port |
57 |
-is 8080. |
58 |
+an example, we assume the proxy is called <c>proxy.gentoo.org</c> and the port |
59 |
+is <c>8080</c>. |
60 |
</p> |
61 |
|
62 |
<pre caption="Defining proxy servers"> |
63 |
@@ -147,9 +147,9 @@ |
64 |
|
65 |
<p> |
66 |
You may want to try pinging your ISP's DNS server (found in |
67 |
-<path>/etc/resolv.conf</path>) and a Web site of choice, just to make sure |
68 |
+<path>/etc/resolv.conf</path>) and a Web site of your choice, just to make sure |
69 |
that your packets are reaching the net, DNS name resolution is working |
70 |
-correctly, etc.. |
71 |
+correctly, etc. |
72 |
</p> |
73 |
|
74 |
<pre caption="Further network testing"> |
75 |
@@ -157,9 +157,9 @@ |
76 |
</pre> |
77 |
|
78 |
<p> |
79 |
-Are you able to use your network? If so, you can skip the rest of this |
80 |
+If you are now able to use your network, you can skip the rest of this |
81 |
section and continue with <uri link="?part=1&chap=4">Preparing the |
82 |
-Disks</uri>. If not, bad luck, you'll have to work on it a bit more. |
83 |
+Disks</uri>. If not, read on. |
84 |
</p> |
85 |
|
86 |
</body> |
87 |
@@ -178,7 +178,7 @@ |
88 |
|
89 |
<p> |
90 |
If your installation medium does not contain any of these tools or your network |
91 |
-doesn't function yet, continue with <uri link="#doc_chap4">Manual Network |
92 |
+doesn't function yet, continue with <uri link="#doc_chap3">Manual Network |
93 |
Configuration</uri>. |
94 |
</p> |
95 |
|
96 |
@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ |
97 |
</li> |
98 |
<li> |
99 |
PPTP users should continue with <uri link="#pptp">Alternative: |
100 |
- Using PPTP</uri> (x86 only) |
101 |
+ Using PPTP</uri> |
102 |
</li> |
103 |
</ul> |
104 |
|
105 |
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ |
106 |
</p> |
107 |
|
108 |
<p> |
109 |
-If your network still doesn't work, continue with <uri link="#doc_chap4">Manual |
110 |
+If your network still doesn't work, continue with <uri link="#doc_chap3">Manual |
111 |
Network Configuration</uri>. |
112 |
</p> |
113 |
|
114 |
@@ -238,7 +238,7 @@ |
115 |
version) has made things easy for you by including <c>rp-pppoe</c>. Use the |
116 |
provided <c>adsl-setup</c> script to configure your connection. You will be |
117 |
prompted for the ethernet device that is connected to your adsl modem, your |
118 |
-username and password, the IPs of your DNS servers and if you need a basic |
119 |
+username and password, the IPs of your DNS servers and if you need a basic |
120 |
firewall or not. |
121 |
</p> |
122 |
|
123 |
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@ |
124 |
<path>/etc/ppp/chap-secrets</path> and make sure you are using the right |
125 |
ethernet device. If your ethernet device doesn't exist, you will have to load |
126 |
the appropriate network modules. In that case you should continue with |
127 |
-<uri link="#doc_chap4">Manual Network Configuration</uri> as we explain how to |
128 |
+<uri link="#doc_chap3">Manual Network Configuration</uri> as we explain how to |
129 |
load the appropriate network modules there. |
130 |
</p> |
131 |
|
132 |
@@ -269,7 +269,7 @@ |
133 |
<body> |
134 |
|
135 |
<note> |
136 |
-PPTP is only available for the x86 architecture. |
137 |
+PPTP support is only available for x86 |
138 |
</note> |
139 |
|
140 |
<p> |
141 |
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ |
142 |
|
143 |
<p> |
144 |
If <c>net-setup</c> or <c>adsl-setup</c> failed, then it is possible that |
145 |
-your networkcard wasn't found immediately. This means you may have to load |
146 |
+your network card wasn't found immediately. This means you may have to load |
147 |
the appropriate kernel modules manually. |
148 |
</p> |
149 |
|
150 |
@@ -443,9 +443,9 @@ |
151 |
|
152 |
<note> |
153 |
Support for the <c>iwconfig</c> command is only available on x86, amd64 and ppc |
154 |
-Installation CDs. You can still get the extensions working otherwise by |
155 |
-following the instructions of the <uri |
156 |
-link="ftp://ftp.linux-wlan.org/pub/linux-wlan-ng/README">linux-wlan-ng |
157 |
+Installation CDs. You can still get the extensions working otherwise |
158 |
+by following the instructions of the |
159 |
+<uri link="ftp://ftp.linux-wlan.org/pub/linux-wlan-ng/README">linux-wlan-ng |
160 |
project</uri>. |
161 |
</note> |
162 |
|
163 |
@@ -469,8 +469,9 @@ |
164 |
</pre> |
165 |
|
166 |
<note> |
167 |
-Some wireless cards may have a device name of <c>wlan0</c> instead of |
168 |
-<c>eth0</c>. |
169 |
+Some wireless cards may have a device name of <c>wlan0</c> or <c>ra0</c> instead |
170 |
+of <c>eth0</c>. Run <c>iwconfig</c> without any command-line parameters to |
171 |
+determine the correct device name. |
172 |
</note> |
173 |
|
174 |
<p> |
175 |
@@ -513,10 +514,10 @@ |
176 |
</note> |
177 |
|
178 |
<p> |
179 |
-If all above fails, you will have to configure your network manually. |
180 |
-Have no fear, it is far from difficult. But we are going to explain a |
181 |
-certain amount of networking to you as you will need it to be able to |
182 |
-configure your network to your satisfaction. When you're done reading this, you |
183 |
+If all of the above fails, you will have to configure your network manually. |
184 |
+This is not difficult at all. However, you need to be familiar with some |
185 |
+network terminology, as you will need it to be able to |
186 |
+configure your network to your satisfaction. After reading this, you |
187 |
will know what a <e>gateway</e> is, what a <e>netmask</e> serves for, |
188 |
how a <e>broadcast</e> address is formed and why you need |
189 |
<e>nameservers</e>. |
190 |
@@ -539,9 +540,9 @@ |
191 |
|
192 |
<p> |
193 |
Such an IP address is unique to a host as far as all accessible networks are |
194 |
-concerned (i.e. all hosts that you are able to reach must have unique IP |
195 |
-addresses). To be able to make a distinction between hosts inside a network, |
196 |
-and hosts outside a network, the IP address is divided in two parts: the |
197 |
+concerned (i.e. every host that you are able to reach must have a unique IP |
198 |
+address). In order to distinguish between hosts inside and outside a |
199 |
+network, the IP address is divided in two parts: the |
200 |
<e>network</e> part and the <e>host</e> part. |
201 |
</p> |
202 |
|
203 |
|
204 |
|
205 |
|
206 |
-- |
207 |
gentoo-doc-cvs@g.o mailing list |