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From: Sven Vermeulen <swift@×××××××××××.org>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: hb-install-network.xml
Date: Thu, 28 Jul 2005 15:42:37
Message-Id: 200507281542.j6SFg091025504@robin.gentoo.org
1 swift 05/07/28 15:42:16
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3 Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1
4 hb-install-network.xml
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6 Incorporate current network changes in 2005.1 draft
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8 Revision Changes Path
9 1.2 +31 -30 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml
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11 file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
12 plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml?rev=1.2&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
13 diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml.diff?r1=1.1&r2=1.2&cvsroot=gentoo
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15 Index: hb-install-network.xml
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17 RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml,v
18 retrieving revision 1.1
19 retrieving revision 1.2
20 diff -u -r1.1 -r1.2
21 --- hb-install-network.xml 5 Jul 2005 08:02:04 -0000 1.1
22 +++ hb-install-network.xml 28 Jul 2005 15:42:16 -0000 1.2
23 @@ -4,12 +4,12 @@
24 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
25 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 -->
26
27 -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml,v 1.1 2005/07/05 08:02:04 swift Exp $ -->
28 +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/2005.1/hb-install-network.xml,v 1.2 2005/07/28 15:42:16 swift Exp $ -->
29
30 <sections>
31
32 -<version>4.00</version>
33 -<date>2005-01-04</date>
34 +<version>2.2</version>
35 +<date>2005-07-02</date>
36
37 <section>
38 <title>Do you need Networking?</title>
39 @@ -106,19 +106,19 @@
40 </body>
41 </subsection>
42 <subsection>
43 -<title>Optional: Configure Proxy</title>
44 +<title>Optional: Configure any Proxies</title>
45 <body>
46
47 <p>
48 If you access the Internet through a proxy, you might need to set up proxy
49 information during the installation. It is very easy to define a proxy: you just
50 -need to define a variable which contains the proxy server information.
51 +need to define a variable which contains the proxy server information.
52 </p>
53
54 <p>
55 In most cases, you can just define the variables using the server hostname. As
56 -an example, we assume the proxy is called <e>proxy.gentoo.org</e> and the port
57 -is 8080.
58 +an example, we assume the proxy is called <c>proxy.gentoo.org</c> and the port
59 +is <c>8080</c>.
60 </p>
61
62 <pre caption="Defining proxy servers">
63 @@ -147,9 +147,9 @@
64
65 <p>
66 You may want to try pinging your ISP's DNS server (found in
67 -<path>/etc/resolv.conf</path>) and a Web site of choice, just to make sure
68 +<path>/etc/resolv.conf</path>) and a Web site of your choice, just to make sure
69 that your packets are reaching the net, DNS name resolution is working
70 -correctly, etc..
71 +correctly, etc.
72 </p>
73
74 <pre caption="Further network testing">
75 @@ -157,9 +157,9 @@
76 </pre>
77
78 <p>
79 -Are you able to use your network? If so, you can skip the rest of this
80 +If you are now able to use your network, you can skip the rest of this
81 section and continue with <uri link="?part=1&amp;chap=4">Preparing the
82 -Disks</uri>. If not, bad luck, you'll have to work on it a bit more.
83 +Disks</uri>. If not, read on.
84 </p>
85
86 </body>
87 @@ -178,7 +178,7 @@
88
89 <p>
90 If your installation medium does not contain any of these tools or your network
91 -doesn't function yet, continue with <uri link="#doc_chap4">Manual Network
92 +doesn't function yet, continue with <uri link="#doc_chap3">Manual Network
93 Configuration</uri>.
94 </p>
95
96 @@ -193,7 +193,7 @@
97 </li>
98 <li>
99 PPTP users should continue with <uri link="#pptp">Alternative:
100 - Using PPTP</uri> (x86 only)
101 + Using PPTP</uri>
102 </li>
103 </ul>
104
105 @@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
106 </p>
107
108 <p>
109 -If your network still doesn't work, continue with <uri link="#doc_chap4">Manual
110 +If your network still doesn't work, continue with <uri link="#doc_chap3">Manual
111 Network Configuration</uri>.
112 </p>
113
114 @@ -238,7 +238,7 @@
115 version) has made things easy for you by including <c>rp-pppoe</c>. Use the
116 provided <c>adsl-setup</c> script to configure your connection. You will be
117 prompted for the ethernet device that is connected to your adsl modem, your
118 -username and password, the IPs of your DNS servers and if you need a basic
119 +username and password, the IPs of your DNS servers and if you need a basic
120 firewall or not.
121 </p>
122
123 @@ -253,7 +253,7 @@
124 <path>/etc/ppp/chap-secrets</path> and make sure you are using the right
125 ethernet device. If your ethernet device doesn't exist, you will have to load
126 the appropriate network modules. In that case you should continue with
127 -<uri link="#doc_chap4">Manual Network Configuration</uri> as we explain how to
128 +<uri link="#doc_chap3">Manual Network Configuration</uri> as we explain how to
129 load the appropriate network modules there.
130 </p>
131
132 @@ -269,7 +269,7 @@
133 <body>
134
135 <note>
136 -PPTP is only available for the x86 architecture.
137 +PPTP support is only available for x86
138 </note>
139
140 <p>
141 @@ -323,7 +323,7 @@
142
143 <p>
144 If <c>net-setup</c> or <c>adsl-setup</c> failed, then it is possible that
145 -your networkcard wasn't found immediately. This means you may have to load
146 +your network card wasn't found immediately. This means you may have to load
147 the appropriate kernel modules manually.
148 </p>
149
150 @@ -443,9 +443,9 @@
151
152 <note>
153 Support for the <c>iwconfig</c> command is only available on x86, amd64 and ppc
154 -Installation CDs. You can still get the extensions working otherwise by
155 -following the instructions of the <uri
156 -link="ftp://ftp.linux-wlan.org/pub/linux-wlan-ng/README">linux-wlan-ng
157 +Installation CDs. You can still get the extensions working otherwise
158 +by following the instructions of the
159 +<uri link="ftp://ftp.linux-wlan.org/pub/linux-wlan-ng/README">linux-wlan-ng
160 project</uri>.
161 </note>
162
163 @@ -469,8 +469,9 @@
164 </pre>
165
166 <note>
167 -Some wireless cards may have a device name of <c>wlan0</c> instead of
168 -<c>eth0</c>.
169 +Some wireless cards may have a device name of <c>wlan0</c> or <c>ra0</c> instead
170 +of <c>eth0</c>. Run <c>iwconfig</c> without any command-line parameters to
171 +determine the correct device name.
172 </note>
173
174 <p>
175 @@ -513,10 +514,10 @@
176 </note>
177
178 <p>
179 -If all above fails, you will have to configure your network manually.
180 -Have no fear, it is far from difficult. But we are going to explain a
181 -certain amount of networking to you as you will need it to be able to
182 -configure your network to your satisfaction. When you're done reading this, you
183 +If all of the above fails, you will have to configure your network manually.
184 +This is not difficult at all. However, you need to be familiar with some
185 +network terminology, as you will need it to be able to
186 +configure your network to your satisfaction. After reading this, you
187 will know what a <e>gateway</e> is, what a <e>netmask</e> serves for,
188 how a <e>broadcast</e> address is formed and why you need
189 <e>nameservers</e>.
190 @@ -539,9 +540,9 @@
191
192 <p>
193 Such an IP address is unique to a host as far as all accessible networks are
194 -concerned (i.e. all hosts that you are able to reach must have unique IP
195 -addresses). To be able to make a distinction between hosts inside a network,
196 -and hosts outside a network, the IP address is divided in two parts: the
197 +concerned (i.e. every host that you are able to reach must have a unique IP
198 +address). In order to distinguish between hosts inside and outside a
199 +network, the IP address is divided in two parts: the
200 <e>network</e> part and the <e>host</e> part.
201 </p>
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