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fox2mike 05/09/09 07:26:39 |
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Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en kde-split-ebuilds.xml |
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#103492 - Minor grammatical fixes, thanks to Erik Musick for reporting. |
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Revision Changes Path |
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1.7 +5 -5 xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml |
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file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml?rev=1.7&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo |
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plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml?rev=1.7&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml.diff?r1=1.6&r2=1.7&cvsroot=gentoo |
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Index: kde-split-ebuilds.xml |
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=================================================================== |
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml,v |
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retrieving revision 1.6 |
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retrieving revision 1.7 |
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diff -u -r1.6 -r1.7 |
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--- kde-split-ebuilds.xml 2 Jul 2005 12:31:47 -0000 1.6 |
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+++ kde-split-ebuilds.xml 9 Sep 2005 07:26:39 -0000 1.7 |
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<?xml version='1.0' encoding='UTF-8'?> |
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-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml,v 1.6 2005/07/02 12:31:47 swift Exp $ --> |
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+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/kde-split-ebuilds.xml,v 1.7 2005/09/09 07:26:39 fox2mike Exp $ --> |
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<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> |
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</abstract> |
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<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license --> |
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-<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0 --> |
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+<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 --> |
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<license/> |
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<version>1.5</version> |
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<p> |
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The previous section listed methods of improving the performance of the |
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-split ebuilds specifically. Next we will briefly mention some future speedups |
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+split ebuilds specifically. Next, we will briefly mention some future speedups |
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which are equally applicable to the monolithic ebuilds. Such speedups help |
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make the split ebuilds 'fast enough', apart from comparisons with less |
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featureful solutions such as the monolithic ebuilds. |
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<body> |
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<p> |
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-We intend to so eventually. However, there will be both monolithic and split |
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+We intend to do so eventually. However, there will be both monolithic and split |
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ebuilds for all the KDE 3.4 releases. |
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</p> |
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<p> |
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Well, first of all, if you know the package you're looking for came with |
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kdebase, you can still <c>emerge kdebase-meta</c>, with much the same results |
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-as if you emerged the monolithic <c>kdebase</c>. So things haven't actually |
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+as if you emerged the monolithic <c>kdebase</c>. So, things haven't actually |
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become any worse due to the split ebuilds. |
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</p> |
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