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--- gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml	1 Aug 2005 12:12:22 -0000	1.43
+++ gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml	4 Aug 2005 07:01:46 -0000	1.44
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.43 2005/08/01 12:12:22 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.44 2005/08/04 07:01:46 swift Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -17,10 +17,12 @@
 installing Gentoo Linux if they want to follow this guide.
 </abstract>
 
+<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
+<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
 <version>2.4</version>
-<date>2005-08-01</date>
+<date>2005-08-04</date>
 
 <chapter>
 <title>Quick Install Guide</title>
@@ -32,8 +34,8 @@
 Download a CD from one of our <uri link="/main/en/mirrors.xml">mirrors</uri>.
 You can find the ISOs in
 <path>releases/&lt;architecture&gt;/&lt;release&gt;/installcd</path>. The
-<e>minimal</e> installation cd is only useful for internet-based installations; 
-with the <e>universal</e> installation cd you can perform a networkless
+<e>minimal</e> installation CD is only useful for Internet-based installations; 
+with the <e>universal</e> installation CD you can perform a network less
 installation as well.
 </p>
 
@@ -44,7 +46,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-The installation cds allow you to start an <c>sshd</c> server, add additional
+The installation CDs allow you to start an <c>sshd</c> server, add additional
 users, run <c>irssi</c> (a command-line chat client) and surf the web using
 <c>lynx</c> or <c>links2</c>.
 </p>
@@ -66,12 +68,12 @@
 
 <p>
 For wireless access, use <c>iwconfig</c> to set the wireless parameters and then
-use eiter <c>net-setup</c> again or run <c>ifconfig</c>, <c>dhcpcd</c> and/or
+use either <c>net-setup</c> again or run <c>ifconfig</c>, <c>dhcpcd</c> and/or
 <c>route</c> manually.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-If you are behind a proxy, do not forget to initialise your system using 
+If you are behind a proxy, do not forget to initialize your system using 
 <c>export http_proxy</c>, <c>ftp_proxy</c> and <c>RSYNC_PROXY</c>.
 </p>
 
@@ -88,7 +90,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Use <c>mke2fs</c>, <c>mke2fs -j</c>, <c>mkreiserfs</c>, <c>mkfs.xfs</c> and
-<c>mkfs.jfs</c> to create file systems on your Linux partitions. Initialise your
+<c>mkfs.jfs</c> to create file systems on your Linux partitions. Initialize your
 swap partition using <c>mkswap</c> and <c>swapon</c>.
 </p>
 
@@ -113,7 +115,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Install a Portage snapshot if you are performing a networkless installation: go
+Install a Portage snapshot if you are performing a network less installation: go
 to <path>/mnt/gentoo/usr</path> and run
 <c>tar&nbsp;-xvjf&nbsp;/mnt/cdrom/snapshots/&lt;snapshot&gt;</c>. Other users
 can download a portage snapshot and install it likewise.
@@ -144,31 +146,31 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-If you are not running a networkless installation, issue <c>emerge --sync</c> to
+If you are not running a network less installation, issue <c>emerge --sync</c> to
 update your Portage tree.
 </p>
 
 <p>
 Next, make sure <path>/etc/make.profile</path> points to the right profile. The
-default one should suffice for most users; subprofiles are available for
+default one should suffice for most users; sub profiles are available for
 different kernels (like <path>2.4/</path> for 2.4-kernel based profiles). Change
 the profile using <c>ln -sf</c>.
 </p>
 
 <ul>
   <li>
-    Bootstrapping (not available for networkless installations) happens using
+    Bootstrapping (not available for network less installations) happens using
     <c>scripts/bootstrap.sh</c> in the <path>/usr/portage</path> directory.
   </li>
   <li>
-    System installation (not available for networkless installations) happens 
+    System installation (not available for network less installations) happens 
     using <c>emerge&nbsp;-e&nbsp;system</c> (or <c>-N</c> if you haven't 
     altered the default CFLAGS/CXXFLAGS).
   </li>
 </ul>
 
 <p>
-Stage3 users (except those performing a networkless installation) need to 
+Stage3 users (except those performing a network less installation) need to 
 upgrade the baselayout package:
 </p>
 
@@ -190,7 +192,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Install a kernel source (<c>gentoo-sources</c> and <c>vanilla-sources</c> are
-available for networkless installations) and configure it using <c>make
+available for network less installations) and configure it using <c>make
 menuconfig</c> followed by <c>make&nbsp;&amp;&amp;make&nbsp;modules_install</c> 
 inside <path>/usr/src/linux</path>. Copy the <path>arch/i386/bzImage</path> file
 over to <path>/boot</path>. You can also <c>emerge&nbsp;genkernel</c> 
@@ -225,9 +227,9 @@
 Edit <path>/etc/conf.d/hostname</path> and <path>/etc/conf.d/domainname</path>,
 run <c>rc-update&nbsp;add&nbsp;domainname&nbsp;default</c> and edit
 <path>/etc/conf.d/net</path> to 
-configure your network. Add the <c>net.eth0</c> initscript to the default 
-runlevel. If you have multiple NICs, symlink them to the <c>net.eth0</c> 
-init script and add them to the default runlevel as well.
+configure your network. Add the <c>net.eth0</c> init script to the default 
+run level. If you have multiple NICs, symlink them to the <c>net.eth0</c> 
+init script and add them to the default run level as well.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -246,7 +248,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Emerge <c>pcmcia-cs</c> and add it to the default runlevel if you need it.
+Emerge <c>pcmcia-cs</c> and add it to the default run level if you need it.
 </p>
 
 <p>
@@ -362,7 +364,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-If you performed a networkless installation, mount the packages CD at
+If you performed a network less installation, mount the packages CD at
 <path>/mnt/cdrom</path> and <c>export&nbsp;PKGDIR="/mnt/cdrom"</c> after which
 you can <c>emerge&nbsp;-k&nbsp;&lt;package&gt;</c> to install additional
 software like <c>kde</c>.



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