[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: altinstall.xml

[Lukasz Damentko]

rane        06/07/21 15:42:00

  Modified:             altinstall.xml
  Log:
  added <c>s and <path>s where necessary

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1.64                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml

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Index: altinstall.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.63
retrieving revision 1.64
diff -u -r1.63 -r1.64
--- altinstall.xml	21 Jul 2006 08:10:19 -0000	1.63
+++ altinstall.xml	21 Jul 2006 15:42:00 -0000	1.64
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v 1.63 2006/07/21 08:10:19 rane Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/altinstall.xml,v 1.64 2006/07/21 15:42:00 rane Exp $ -->
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/altinstall.xml">
@@ -46,13 +46,14 @@
   <mail link="smithj@g.o">Jonathan Smith</mail>
 </author>
 
-
 <abstract>
 This HOWTO is meant to be a repository of alternative Gentoo installation
 methods, for those with special installation needs such as lack of a cdrom
 or a computer that can't boot cds.
 </abstract>
 
+<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
+<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 <license/>
 
 <version>0.67</version>
@@ -132,7 +133,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <note>
-Replace fd0 with your respective floppy device name if yours is different.
+Replace <path>fd0</path> with your respective floppy device name if yours is different.
 </note>
 
 <p>
@@ -190,7 +191,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-By default Knoppix boots into a KDE desktop. Open a konsole and <c>su -</c>
+By default Knoppix boots into a KDE desktop. Open a <c>konsole</c> and <c>su -</c>
 so you can change your password. This lets you set the root password for
 Knoppix. You can now configure <c>sshd</c> for remote login, at your
 preference.
@@ -391,7 +392,7 @@
 
 <note>
 This provide a static IP address for the client and the path of a PXE boot
-image, here pxegrub. You have to replace the MAC address of the Ethernet card
+image, here <path>pxegrub</path>. You have to replace the MAC address of the Ethernet card
 of the client and the directory where you will put the client files with the
 one you use.
 </note>
@@ -431,7 +432,7 @@
 place the tarball in <path>/usr/portage/distfiles</path>). Copy the tarball to
 <path>/diskless</path> and then build it to make the pxe capable binary. Once
 the binary is built, copy it to the diskless client's boot directory. Then edit
-it's grub.lst config file.
+it's <path>grub.lst</path> config file.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Grub setup">
@@ -495,8 +496,8 @@
 Installation Instructions from an existing installation. Follow the standard 
 install procedure as explained in the Gentoo Install Howto BUT with the 
 following differences:
-When you mount the file system, do the following (where hdaX is the partition 
-where you created the /diskless directory). You do not need to mount any other
+When you mount the file system, do the following (where <path>hdaX</path> is the partition 
+where you created the <path>/diskless</path> directory). You do not need to mount any other
 partitions as all of the files will reside in the <path>/diskless/eta</path>
 directory.
 </p>
@@ -652,7 +653,7 @@
 
 <p>
 The root partition is the filesystem mounted under <path>/</path>. A quick run
-of mount on my system shows what I am talking about. We well also use df (disk
+of <c>mount</c> on my system shows what I am talking about. We well also use <c>df</c> (disk
 free) to see how much space I have left and how I will be resizing. Note that
 it is not mandatory to resize your root partition! You could be resizing
 anything else supported by our resizer, but let's talk about that later.
@@ -742,7 +743,7 @@
 
 <p>
 We will now proceed with the build of parted. If it's not already downloaded
-and untarred, do so now and cd into the corresponding directory. Now run the
+and untarred, do so now and <c>cd</c> into the corresponding directory. Now run the
 following set of commands to build the utility and copy it to your floppy disk.
 </p>
 
@@ -758,8 +759,8 @@
 The resize should take under 30 minutes for the largest hard-drives, be
 patient.  Reboot your system with the mininux boot disk (just pop it inside),
 and once you are logged in, switch the disk in the drive with your utility disk
-we have created above and type mount /dev/fd0 /floppy to have parted under
-/floppy.  There you go. Run parted and you will be able to resize your
+we have created above and type <c>mount /dev/fd0 /floppy</c> to have parted under
+<path>/floppy</path>.  There you go. Run parted and you will be able to resize your
 partition. Once this lenghty process done, we are ready to have the real fun,
 by installing Gentoo. Reboot back into your old Linux system for now. Drive you
 wish to operate on is the drive containing the partition we want to resize. For



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