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fox2mike 05/09/09 07:49:22 |
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Modified: xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml |
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Log: |
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#104958 - Minor grammar fixes, thanks to vanquirius. Seems someone fixed most of them and didn't close the bug. |
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Revision Changes Path |
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1.31 +3 -3 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml |
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file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml?rev=1.31&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo |
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plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml?rev=1.31&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml.diff?r1=1.30&r2=1.31&cvsroot=gentoo |
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Index: hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml |
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=================================================================== |
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml,v |
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retrieving revision 1.30 |
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retrieving revision 1.31 |
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diff -u -r1.30 -r1.31 |
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--- hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml 5 Sep 2005 15:08:54 -0000 1.30 |
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+++ hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml 9 Sep 2005 07:49:22 -0000 1.31 |
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<!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license --> |
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<!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/1.0 --> |
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-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml,v 1.30 2005/09/05 15:08:54 neysx Exp $ --> |
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+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml,v 1.31 2005/09/09 07:49:22 fox2mike Exp $ --> |
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<sections> |
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<p> |
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Now that the kernel is configured and compiled, you'll need a <e>bootloader</e> |
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-to start your new linux installation. The <e>bootloader</e> that you use will |
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+to start your new Linux installation. The <e>bootloader</e> that you use will |
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depend upon the type of PPC machine you have. |
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</p> |
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root=/dev/ram0 <comment># If using genkernel this is /dev/ram0</comment> |
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partition=3 |
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append="real_root=/dev/hda3 init=/linuxrc" |
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- <comment># You can add additional kernel arguments to append such as |
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+ <comment># You can add additional kernel arguments to be appended such as |
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# rootdelay=10 for a USB/Firewire Boot</comment> |
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read-only |
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<comment>##########################################################</comment> |
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