[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: power-management-guide.xml

[Josh Saddler]

nightmorph    07/03/15 19:24:34

  Modified:             power-management-guide.xml
  Log:
  typo fixes, no content change, bug 171068. thanks to kucrut for reporting and rane for ... rane for... rane for something. he was there at the time. :)

Revision  Changes    Path
1.25                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml?rev=1.25&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml?rev=1.25&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml?r1=1.24&r2=1.25

Index: power-management-guide.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.24
retrieving revision 1.25
diff -u -r1.24 -r1.25
--- power-management-guide.xml	20 Feb 2007 17:44:15 -0000	1.24
+++ power-management-guide.xml	15 Mar 2007 19:24:34 -0000	1.25
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml,v 1.24 2007/02/20 17:44:15 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml,v 1.25 2007/03/15 19:24:34 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 <guide link="/doc/en/power-management-guide.xml">
 <title>Power Management Guide</title>
 
@@ -1155,7 +1155,7 @@
 
 <p>
 In case you own an ATI graphics card supporting PowerPlay (dynamic clock
-scaling for the the graphics processing unit GPU), you can activate this
+scaling for the graphics processing unit GPU), you can activate this
 feature in X.org. Open <path>/etc/X11/xorg.conf</path> and add (or enable) the
 <c>DynamicClocks</c> option in the Device section. Please notice that this
 feature will lead to crashes on some systems.
@@ -1293,7 +1293,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Some configuration has to be done in <path>/etc/hibernate</path> The default
+Some configuration has to be done in <path>/etc/hibernate</path>. The default
 package introduces a few configuration files for each sleep state.  Options that
 are common to all suspend methods are placed in <path>common.conf</path>; make
 sure this file is properly set up for your system.
@@ -1302,8 +1302,8 @@
 <p>
 To configure sleep, edit <path>sysfs-ram.conf</path> in
 <path>/etc/hibernate</path>. <c>UseSysfsPowerState mem</c> is already setup
-correctly, but you need to make further changes to this particular sleep state
-(or any other sleep state) you should add them to
+correctly, but if you need to make further changes to this particular sleep
+state (or any other sleep state) you should add them to
 <path>/etc/hibernate/hibernate.conf</path>. The comments and option names will
 guide you. If you use nfs or samba shares over the network, make sure to
 shutdown the appropriate init scripts to avoid timeouts.



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