[gentoo-doc-cvs] gentoo commit in xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0: hb-install-about.xml

[Joshua Saddler (nightmorph)]

nightmorph    09/01/26 07:57:36

  Modified:             hb-install-about.xml
  Log:
  Engrish fixes, bug 253374

Revision  Changes    Path
1.4                  xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml

file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.4&view=markup
plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml?rev=1.4&content-type=text/plain
diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml?r1=1.3&r2=1.4

Index: hb-install-about.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -r1.3 -r1.4
--- hb-install-about.xml	31 Mar 2008 21:48:08 -0000	1.3
+++ hb-install-about.xml	26 Jan 2009 07:57:36 -0000	1.4
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.3 2008/03/31 21:48:08 nightmorph Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/2008.0/hb-install-about.xml,v 1.4 2009/01/26 07:57:36 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
@@ -134,9 +134,9 @@
 
 <p>
 You can install Gentoo in many different ways. You can download and install from
-one of our Installation CDs, from an existing distribution, 
-from a bootable CD (such as Knoppix), from a netbooted environment, from a 
-rescue floppy, etc. 
+one of our Installation CDs, from a distribution already installed, from a
+bootable CD (such as Knoppix), from a netbooted environment, from a rescue
+floppy, etc. 
 </p>
 
 <p>