[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml

[Xavier Neys]

neysx       05/10/14 13:20:13

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
  Log:
  Fixed typos reported on #109269

Revision  Changes    Path
1.48      +12 -12    xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml

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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml.diff?r1=1.47&r2=1.48&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.47
retrieving revision 1.48
diff -u -r1.47 -r1.48
--- gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml	20 Aug 2005 14:57:18 -0000	1.47
+++ gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml	14 Oct 2005 13:20:13 -0000	1.48
@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 <?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?>
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.47 2005/08/20 14:57:18 swift Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/gentoo-x86-quickinstall.xml,v 1.48 2005/10/14 13:20:13 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
 You can find the ISOs in
 <path>releases/&lt;architecture&gt;/&lt;release&gt;/installcd</path>. The
 <e>minimal</e> installation CD is only useful for Internet-based installations; 
-with the <e>universal</e> installation CD you can perform a network less
+with the <e>universal</e> installation CD you can perform a networkless
 installation as well.
 </p>
 
@@ -115,21 +115,21 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Install a Portage snapshot if you are performing a network less installation: go
+Install a Portage snapshot if you are performing a networkless installation: go
 to <path>/mnt/gentoo/usr</path> and run
 <c>tar&nbsp;-xvjf&nbsp;/mnt/cdrom/snapshots/&lt;snapshot&gt;</c>. Other users
 can download a portage snapshot and install it likewise.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-For a network less installation, copy over the source code files from
+For a networkless installation, copy over the source code files from
 <path>/mnt/cdrom/distfiles/</path> to
 <path>/mnt/gentoo/usr/portage/distfiles/</path>.
 </p>
 
 <p>
-Edit <path>/mnt/gentoo/etc/make.conf</path> to suit your needs (USE flag, CFLAGS
-and CXXFLAGS). You can use the <c>nano</c> editor for this.
+Edit <path>/mnt/gentoo/etc/make.conf</path> to suit your needs (USE flags,
+CFLAGS and CXXFLAGS). You can use the <c>nano</c> editor for this.
 </p>
 
 </body>
@@ -152,7 +152,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-If you are not running a network less installation, issue <c>emerge --sync</c> to
+If you are not running a networkless installation, issue <c>emerge --sync</c> to
 update your Portage tree.
 </p>
 
@@ -165,11 +165,11 @@
 
 <ul>
   <li>
-    Bootstrapping (not available for network less installations) happens using
+    Bootstrapping (not available for networkless installations) happens using
     <c>scripts/bootstrap.sh</c> in the <path>/usr/portage</path> directory.
   </li>
   <li>
-    System installation (not available for network less installations) happens 
+    System installation (not available for networkless installations) happens 
     using <c>emerge&nbsp;-e&nbsp;system</c> (or <c>-N</c> if you haven't 
     altered the default CFLAGS/CXXFLAGS).
   </li>
@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@
 
 <p>
 Install a kernel source (<c>gentoo-sources</c> and <c>vanilla-sources</c> are
-available for network less installations) and configure it using <c>make
+available for networkless installations) and configure it using <c>make
 menuconfig</c> followed by <c>make&nbsp;&amp;&amp;make&nbsp;modules_install</c>
 inside <path>/usr/src/linux</path>. Copy the <path>arch/i386/boot/bzImage</path>
 file over to <path>/boot</path>. You can also <c>emerge&nbsp;genkernel</c> and
@@ -265,7 +265,7 @@
 <body>
 
 <p>
-2.4 kernel users need to <c>emerge&nbsp;--unmerge&nbsp;udev</c> and
+Users of a 2.4 kernel need to run <c>emerge&nbsp;--unmerge&nbsp;udev</c> and
 <c>emerge&nbsp;devfsd</c>.
 </p>
 
@@ -361,7 +361,7 @@
 </p>
 
 <p>
-If you performed a network less installation, mount the packages CD at
+If you performed a networkless installation, mount the packages CD at
 <path>/mnt/cdrom</path> and <c>export&nbsp;PKGDIR="/mnt/cdrom"</c> after which
 you can <c>emerge&nbsp;-k&nbsp;&lt;package&gt;</c> to install additional
 software like <c>kde</c>.



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