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From: Josh Saddler <nightmorph@×××××××××××.org>
To: gentoo-doc-cvs@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: vdr-guide.xml
Date: Wed, 03 Jan 2007 15:04:46
Message-Id: 20070103150427.5D8B664748@smtp.gentoo.org
1 nightmorph 07/01/03 15:04:27
2
3 Modified: vdr-guide.xml
4 Log:
5 more grammar & sentence rephrasing stuff that i should have caught in the last update, purely englishification stuff, hence no revbump. thanks to diox for catching it and for the patch, bug 159142
6
7 Revision Changes Path
8 1.6 xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml
9
10 file : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml?rev=1.6&view=markup
11 plain: http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml?rev=1.6&content-type=text/plain
12 diff : http://sources.gentoo.org/viewcvs.py/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml?r1=1.5&r2=1.6
13
14 Index: vdr-guide.xml
15 ===================================================================
16 RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml,v
17 retrieving revision 1.5
18 retrieving revision 1.6
19 diff -u -r1.5 -r1.6
20 --- vdr-guide.xml 3 Jan 2007 00:58:38 -0000 1.5
21 +++ vdr-guide.xml 3 Jan 2007 15:04:27 -0000 1.6
22 @@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
23 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
24 -<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml,v 1.5 2007/01/03 00:58:38 nightmorph Exp $ -->
25 +<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml,v 1.6 2007/01/03 15:04:27 nightmorph Exp $ -->
26 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
27
28 <guide link="/doc/en/vdr-guide.xml">
29 @@ -153,11 +153,11 @@
30 <body>
31
32 <p>
33 -It's recommended to mark every driver as module, so that you can to add the
34 +It's recommended to mark every driver as module, so that you can add the
35 required module dynamically, especially if you don't know the module name. If
36 -you know the module name already, select the driver as a built-in driver.
37 -Compile the kernel, install the modules and boot it. Check to see if your kernel
38 -has successfully detected your card by using <c>dmesg</c>.
39 +you already know the module name, select the driver as a built-in driver.
40 +Compile the kernel, install the modules and boot it. You can check if your
41 +kernel has successfully detected your card by using <c>dmesg</c>.
42 </p>
43
44 <pre caption="Checking kernel output">
45 @@ -301,9 +301,9 @@
46 </pre>
47
48 <p>
49 -Now it should be possible to watch <c>lircd</c> running and decoding key-presses.
50 -Just run the command <c>irw</c>. Stop it with pressing Ctrl+C when you have
51 -enough.
52 +Now it should be possible to watch <c>lircd</c> capturing and decoding key
53 +presses. Just run the command <c>irw</c>. Stop it by pressing Ctrl+C when you
54 +have enough.
55 </p>
56
57 <pre caption="Testing LIRC">
58 @@ -374,8 +374,8 @@
59 </pre>
60
61 <p>
62 -em8300-modules needs some configuration that depends on the exact used
63 -revision of the card.
64 +The em8300 module need some configuration that depends on the exact revision of
65 +that card.
66 </p>
67
68 <!--
69 @@ -493,9 +493,9 @@
70 </pre>
71
72 <p>
73 -If you only want to use <c>vdr-xineliboutput</c> to view the picture
74 -on the same PC running VDR you can now
75 -<uri link="#channel_list">continue with configuring your channel-list</uri>.
76 +If you only want to use <c>vdr-xineliboutput</c> to view the picture on the same
77 +computer as the one running VDR you can continue with <uri
78 +link="#channel_list">configuring your channel list</uri>.
79 </p>
80
81 <p>
82 @@ -532,13 +532,10 @@
83 <body>
84
85 <p>
86 -To make VDR really useful you need to create an appropriate channel list.
87 -</p>
88 -
89 -<p>
90 -There is more than one way to get a working list of channels (besides
91 -downloading one). The channel list installed by default is for DVB-S reception
92 -on Astra on 19.2°E.
93 +To make VDR really useful you need to create an appropriate channel list. There
94 +is more than one way to get a working list of channels (besides downloading
95 +one). The channel list installed by default is for DVB-S reception on Astra on
96 +19.2°E.
97 </p>
98
99 </body>
100
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