[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: mysql-howto.xml

[Xavier Neys]

neysx       05/08/24 17:07:01

  Modified:    xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft mysql-howto.xml
  Log:
  Make verb forms more coherent

Revision  Changes    Path
1.3       +6 -6      xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/mysql-howto.xml

file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/mysql-howto.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo
plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/mysql-howto.xml?rev=1.3&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo
diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/mysql-howto.xml.diff?r1=1.2&r2=1.3&cvsroot=gentoo

Index: mysql-howto.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/mysql-howto.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.2
retrieving revision 1.3
diff -u -r1.2 -r1.3
--- mysql-howto.xml	24 Aug 2005 14:47:01 -0000	1.2
+++ mysql-howto.xml	24 Aug 2005 17:07:01 -0000	1.3
@@ -1,6 +1,6 @@
 <?xml version="1.0" encoding="UTF-8"?>
 <!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd">
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/mysql-howto.xml,v 1.2 2005/08/24 14:47:01 neysx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/draft/mysql-howto.xml,v 1.3 2005/08/24 17:07:01 neysx Exp $ -->
 
 <guide link="/doc/en/draft/mysql-howto.xml"> <!--Remove draft/ when mv'ing up to /doc/en/ -->
 <title>MySQL Startup Guide</title>
@@ -53,8 +53,8 @@
 flags enabled as they will help fine tune your installation.
 </p>
 
-<pre caption="Install MySQL">
-<comment>(Viewing available USE flags)</comment>
+<pre caption="Installing MySQL">
+<comment>(View available USE flags)</comment>
 # <i>emerge --pretend --verbose mysql</i>
 <comment>(Install MySQL)</comment>
 # <i>emerge mysql</i>
@@ -465,11 +465,11 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="SELECT forms">
-<comment>(Selects all entries in a table)</comment>
+<comment>(Select all entries in a table)</comment>
 SELECT * FROM table;
-<comment>(Selects specific entries in a table)</comment>
+<comment>(Select specific entries in a table)</comment>
 SELECT * FROM table WHERE field=value;
-<comment>(Selects specific fields)</comment>
+<comment>(Select specific fields)</comment>
 SELECT field1,field2,field3 FROM table [WHERE field=value];
 </pre>
 



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