[gentoo-doc-cvs] cvs commit: hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml

[Josh Saddler]

nightmorph    07/03/19 10:05:06

  Modified:             hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml
  Log:
  more inserts -- and some fixups, commented out stuff from the networkless handbook that was mixed in somehow

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1.27                 xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml

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Index: hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml,v
retrieving revision 1.26
retrieving revision 1.27
diff -u -r1.26 -r1.27
--- hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml	16 Mar 2007 05:31:09 -0000	1.26
+++ hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml	19 Mar 2007 10:05:06 -0000	1.27
@@ -4,11 +4,11 @@
 <!-- The content of this document is licensed under the CC-BY-SA license -->
 <!-- See http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.5 -->
 
-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml,v 1.26 2007/03/16 05:31:09 josejx Exp $ -->
+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/handbook/draft/hb-install-ppc-bootloader.xml,v 1.27 2007/03/19 10:05:06 nightmorph Exp $ -->
 
 <sections>
 
-<version>7.3</version>
+<version>8.0</version>
 <date>2007-03-15</date>
 
 <section>
@@ -121,8 +121,13 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption = "Installing yaboot">
-# <i>emerge --usepkg yaboot</i>
+# <i>emerge yaboot</i>
 </pre>
+<!-- what's with all the networkless stuff in here
+<pre caption = "Installing yaboot">
+# <i>emerge usepkg yaboot</i>
+</pre>
+-->
 
 <p>
 Now exit the chroot and run <c>yabootconfig --chroot /mnt/gentoo</c>. First,
@@ -163,9 +168,15 @@
 First, install <c>yaboot</c> on your system:
 </p>
 
+<pre caption="Installing yaboot">
+# <i>emerge yaboot</i>
+</pre>
+
+<!-- should be in networkless, not here
 <pre caption = "Installing yaboot with GRP">
-# <i>emerge --usepkg yaboot</i>
+# <i>emerge usepkg yaboot</i>
 </pre>
+-->
 
 <p>
 An example <path>yaboot.conf</path> file is given below, but you will need to 
@@ -357,17 +368,22 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Emerge quik">
-# <i>emerge --usepkg quik</i>
+# <i>emerge quik</i>
 </pre>
+<!-- again, should be in networkless, not here
+<pre caption="Emerge quik">
+# <i>emerge usepkg quik</i>
+</pre>
+-->
 
 <p>
-Next, we'll need to set it up.  Edit /etc/quik.conf and set your image to the
+Next, we'll need to set it up. Edit <path>/etc/quik.conf</path> and set your image to the
 kernel that we copied to your boot partition.
 </p>
 
 <pre caption="Configuring quik.conf">
 # Example of quik.conf
-init-message = "Gentoo 2006.1\n"
+init-message = "Gentoo 2007.0\n"
 partition = 2		<comment># This is the boot partition</comment>
 root = /dev/hda4
 timeout = 30
@@ -400,7 +416,7 @@
 # <i>nvsetenv input-device kbd</i>
 # <i>nvsetenv boot-device scsi/sd@1:0</i> <comment># For SCSI</comment>
 # <i>nvsetenv boot-device ata/ata-disk@0:0</i> <comment># For ATA</comment>
-# <i>nvsetenv boot-file /boot/vmlinux-2.6.17 root=/dev/hda4</i> <comment>First item is the path to the kernel, the second is the root partition.  You may append any kernel options to the end of this line.</comment>
+# <i>nvsetenv boot-file /boot/vmlinux-<keyval id="kernel-version"/> root=/dev/hda4</i> <comment>First item is the path to the kernel, the second is the root partition.  You may append any kernel options to the end of this line.</comment>
 # <i>nvsetenv boot-command boot</i> <comment># Set this to bye for MacOS and boot for Linux</comment>
 </pre>
 
@@ -447,8 +463,13 @@
 </p>
 
 <pre caption = "Installing bootcreator">
-# <i>emerge --usepkg bootcreator</i>
+# <i>emerge bootcreator</i>
+</pre>
+<!-- what's with all this networkless stuff?!?
+<pre caption = "Installing bootcreator">
+# <i>emerge usepkg bootcreator</i>
 </pre>
+-->
 
 <p>
 Now copy the file <path>/etc/bootmenu.example</path> into
@@ -495,7 +516,7 @@
 </pre>
 
 <p>
-Finally the <path>bootmenu</path> must be transfered into Forth and copied to
+Finally the <path>bootmenu</path> must be transferred into Forth and copied to
 your boot partition, so that the SmartFirmware can read it.  Therefore you have
 to call <c>bootcreator</c>:
 </p>



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