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nightmorph 06/04/12 17:47:04 |
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Modified: apache-upgrading.xml |
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Log: |
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Minor spelling/grammar fixes. **no content change** |
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Revision Changes Path |
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1.5 xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml |
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file : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/x-cvsweb-markup&cvsroot=gentoo |
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plain: http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml?rev=1.5&content-type=text/plain&cvsroot=gentoo |
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diff : http://www.gentoo.org/cgi-bin/viewcvs.cgi/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml.diff?r1=1.4&r2=1.5&cvsroot=gentoo |
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Index: apache-upgrading.xml |
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RCS file: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v |
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retrieving revision 1.4 |
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retrieving revision 1.5 |
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diff -u -r1.4 -r1.5 |
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--- apache-upgrading.xml 6 Mar 2006 09:18:30 -0000 1.4 |
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+++ apache-upgrading.xml 12 Apr 2006 17:47:04 -0000 1.5 |
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<?xml version='1.0' encoding="UTF-8"?> |
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<!DOCTYPE guide SYSTEM "/dtd/guide.dtd"> |
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-<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v 1.4 2006/03/06 09:18:30 neysx Exp $ --> |
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+<!-- $Header: /var/cvsroot/gentoo/xml/htdocs/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml,v 1.5 2006/04/12 17:47:04 nightmorph Exp $ --> |
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<guide link="/doc/en/apache-upgrading.xml" lang="en"> |
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<title>Upgrading Apache</title> |
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<body> |
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<p> |
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-The state of Apache and it's modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There |
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-were a number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining |
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-everything the Apache herd is responsible for difficult: |
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+The state of Apache and its modules in Gentoo was becoming dismal. There were a |
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+number of problems that caused support problems and made maintaining everything |
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+the Apache herd is responsible for difficult: |
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</p> |
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<ul> |
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</p> |
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<p> |
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-First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do |
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-this using the <c>equery</c> tool, part of the <c>app-portage/gentoolkit</c> |
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-package. |
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+First you need to figure out what packages you need to upgrade. You can do this |
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+using the <c>equery</c> tool, which is part of the |
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+<c>app-portage/gentoolkit</c> package. |
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</p> |
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<pre caption="Finding packages to update"> |
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</pre> |
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<impo> |
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-The packages you have installed may be vastly different, make sure you run this |
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+The packages you have installed may be vastly different; make sure you run this |
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command for yourself. |
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</impo> |
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