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From: Sebastian Pipping <sping@g.o>
To: gentoo-doc@l.g.o
Subject: [gentoo-doc] [PATCH] Improvements to doc/en/genkernel.xml
Date: Sun, 16 Jan 2011 16:23:18
Message-Id: 4D331B46.7010404@gentoo.org
1 Change log (top to bottom in patch):
2 - Remove obsolete disclaimer
3 - Use simpler English (no "akin", no "privy")
4 - Remove misleading note on module parameters
5 - Remove notes on Gentoo Reference Platform
6 - Mention --symlink
7 - Mention incompleteness of options/flags, point to better sources
8 - Indicate incompleteness by repeated addition of "..."
9 - Fix misleading highlighting of --no-ramdisk-modules
10 - Mention --disklabel, --iscsi, --multipath
11 - Remove outdated notes on root=/dev/ram0 and init=/linuxrc
12 - Migrate from hda to sda
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14 All of this applies to genkernel stable.
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16 Thanks for consideration.
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18 Best,
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22 Sebastian

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