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On Mon, 13 Apr 2009 10:49:44 +0200 |
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Christian Faulhammer <fauli@g.o> wrote: |
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> Ciaran McCreesh <ciaran.mccreesh@××××××××××.com>: |
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> > On Sun, 12 Apr 2009 15:31:26 +0200 |
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> > Christian Faulhammer <fauli@g.o> wrote: |
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> > > The explanations of the slot operators are a bit hard to read, |
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> > > maybe rephrasing (and splitting in more sentences) is the way to |
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> > > go here. |
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> > I suspect those're hard to read because people are expecting a |
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> > user-centric description of what they're for, rather than a package |
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> > manager centric description of how they behave. |
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> But also package manager coders are humans (at least the last time I |
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> checked), and apart from accuracy a technical documentation needs |
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> readability in its own special way. I wrote enough "scientific" and |
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> technical documents to be sure that small, easy to understand |
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> sentences are better. |
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Actually, looking at that... I don't really see anything off about it. |
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Which bit specifically don't you like? |
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Ciaran McCreesh |
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