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\chapter{Historical Curiosities} |
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-The items described in this chapter are included for information only. They were deprecated or |
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-abandoned long before \t{EAPI} was introduced. Ebuilds must not use these features, and package |
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-managers should not be changed to support them. |
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+The items described in this chapter are included for information only. Unless otherwise noted, |
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+they were deprecated or abandoned long before \t{EAPI} was introduced. Ebuilds must not use these |
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+features, and package managers should not be changed to support them. |
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\section{If-else use blocks} |
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listing~\ref{lst:if-else-use-listing}. The block before the colon would be taken if the condition |
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\begin{listing} |
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\caption{If-else use blocks} \label{lst:if-else-use-listing} |
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\begin{verbatim} |
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