Gentoo Archives: gentoo-pr

From: Sven Vermeulen <swift@g.o>
To: gentoo-pr@l.g.o, davisjp@×××.edu
Subject: Re: [gentoo-pr] 2004.0 press release
Date: Thu, 26 Feb 2004 13:59:20
Message-Id: 20040226140032.GA20550@gentoo.org
In Reply to: [gentoo-pr] 2004.0 press release by John Davis
1 On Fri, Feb 20, 2004 at 11:34:26AM -0500, John Davis wrote:
2 [...]
3 > Installation stages, LiveCDs, and Gentoo Reference Platform (GRP) sets can be
4 > found on our mirrors [2]. More information about the Gentoo Hardnened project
5 > can be found on their project page [3]. For more information, please consult
6 > our mailing lists [4], user forums [5], and official IRC channels [6].
7
8 I'd like to change this to read
9
10 ... For more information, please consult our documentation [4], mailing lists
11 [5], user forums [6] and official IRC channels [7].
12
13 Otherwise the release statement looks nice.
14
15 Wkr,
16 Sven Vermeulen
17
18 --
19 ^__^ And Larry saw that it was Good.
20 (oo) Sven Vermeulen
21 (__) http://www.gentoo.org Documentation & PR