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On Wed, 25 Sep 2013 15:37:34 -0400 |
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Rich Freeman <rich0@g.o> wrote: |
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> On Wed, Sep 25, 2013 at 3:16 PM, William Hubbs <williamh@g.o> |
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> > It seems a bit long to me, but I'm not sure how to make it any |
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> > shorter if we include the information about why this is happening. |
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> I would use the newspaper article approach - put the most important |
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> and actionable material at the top, and supplemental material towards |
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> the bottom. |
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> Here is a suggested way to accomplish this (...) |
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++ for this version. |
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With kind regards, |
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Tom Wijsman (TomWij) |
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