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On 01/13/2016 09:13 AM, Dirkjan Ochtman wrote: |
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> In part, this is because Apache 2.4 overhauls some often-used parts |
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> of the configuration; chances that you will have to make some |
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> changes to your configuration are quite high. On the other hand, |
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> apache-2.4.18 includes support for HTTP 2.0, so you get that |
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> (almost) for free! |
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> Rather than trying to enumerate all the differences here, we'd like |
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> to point you to the upstream upgrading document, which can be found |
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> here: |
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I would change this to: |
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With this comes changes to configuration that will likely need |
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attention. Upstream's upgrading document outlines any major |
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configuration changes that may be necessary when upgrading. It can be |
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found at: |
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The reason I suggest cutting it a little is because the HTTP 2.0 mention |
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comes, and then right after there was the "rather than enumerate the |
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changes..." part. If HTTP 2.0 is listed among the changes on Apache's |
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upgrade guide, it's redundant to put it in the news item. |
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Also, tone. Maybe I'm wrong in thinking this, but generally I think news |
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should be neutral and absent of "you" and "we", if possible. The primary |
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impact here is configurations may need changing, and instead of creating |
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a massive news item with all the changes, we're just referring to |
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upstream's extant documentation, which is a good call. I just feel the |
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tone should be a bit more "keep it to the facts". Otherwise, it looks |
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good to me. :) |
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