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>>>>> On Fri, 20 Dec 2013, Sven Vermeulen wrote: |
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> After consultation with the Django Software Foundation board we |
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> decided to base our license on their text, of which the draft result |
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> is now available for review at |
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> http://dev.gentoo.org/~swift/tmp/gentoo-trademark.xml. |
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> We would appreciate that the new license is reviewed. We would |
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> really like to know if the new license is more clear (or not) than |
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> the previous one. |
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Some thoughts: |
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- The text switches between the terms "license" and "license |
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agreement", obviously considering them as synonyms. While both terms |
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are not very well defined, "license agreements" [1] or EULAs are |
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often used to restrict the rights granted to users by law. However, |
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in our case the purpose is to have a license [2] that in some cases |
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allows usage of the (otherwise restricted) trademark. |
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So, could the term "license" be used throughout? Especially in the |
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page title and main heading? |
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- The first section heading is redundant (as it repeats the main |
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heading). Maybe change it to "Preamble" or "Preliminaries"? |
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- In section "Gentoo-related software projects", how is the term |
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"official Gentoo project software" defined? |
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- In the same section, it says "distributed under the terms of an |
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OSI-approved open source license". So if I distribute my project |
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under GPL for the code and CC-BY-SA for the documentation, then I |
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cannot use the trademark, because CC-BY-SA is not in the OSI's list? |
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I suggest to change the phrase to "distributed under a free license |
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approved by the Free Software Foundation or the Open Source |
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Initiative". |
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- Section "Products and services serving the community" says: "The |
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website or product does not use the official Gentoo logo or color |
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palette in its design, except as provided for by earlier sections in |
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this license". The only relevant mention of the logo in such earlier |
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sections seems to be in "Groups and Events" which has rather |
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restrictive requirements (e.g., on the name of the group). |
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So I wonder if that covers logo usage by the German Gentoo e.V. [3]? |
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What about sites like znurt.org [4]? |
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- The current usage guidelines mention the Gentoo file manager |
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(app-misc/gentoo) as an exception. This has been dropped in the new |
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draft. Is the intention to restrict them in using the Gentoo name? |
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AFAICS, their usage goes back to 1998 and therefore predates ours. |
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Ulrich |
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[1] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Software_license_agreement |
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[2] http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/License |
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[3] https://www.gentoo-ev.org/wiki/Main_Page |
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[4] http://en.znurt.org/ |