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On Wed, Sep 01, 2004 at 07:20:21AM -0700, Duncan wrote: |
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[... Wording of the definitions in the Social Contract ...] |
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> Still, you and I agree the wording needs a bit of a change, as I do |
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> believe that we should attempt to be accurate within reason. If we are |
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> going to have pre-definitions of that sort, we ought to make them /good/ |
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> ones! |
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http://dev.gentoo.org/~swift/contract.html |
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I've changed the wording in the draft to read: |
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Gentoo is the collection of: |
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* free knowledge such as documentation and metadata about |
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concepts/domains relevant to operating systems and their components, |
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contributed by various developers to the Gentoo project |
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* free software developed by various Gentoo developers and |
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contributed to the Gentoo project |
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Is this an improvement? |
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Wkr, |
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Sven Vermeulen |
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^__^ And Larry saw that it was Good. |
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(oo) Sven Vermeulen |
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(__) http://www.gentoo.org Documentation & PR |